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Sun 24/06/01 at 23:28
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'The six of spades? What's so significant about the six of spades?' er-no asked
'Well if you reshuf....' Ant said
'Can you two stop mucking around with that card game, we have more important matters!' Grix explained.
'Grix, we don't have any rope, we don't have a ladder, so we are stuck in this hole whether you like it or not!'

******Five Minutes Before******

'arrrrgggghhhhh, why is Goatboy after us with his clan of razor sharp gummed monkeys?' er-no panted,
'This is not the time for those kind of questions er-no, those monkeys are lethal.' Grix replied
'Why is Goatboy so annoyed anyway Grix?'
'Because you continued to tap him on the head with a banana, and call him a ''stupid monkey'', thats why!'
'Oh yeah, that was funny why it lasted...'
'....yes all of those four seconds' Ant butted in.
'Who asked you, you bug'
'No one, but I wasn't talking in much in the story so I thought I would butt in'
'Oh, okay'

The three continued to run through the gardens of the King Tony's mansion, looking back Ant saw all the monkeys chasing them under Goatboy's instructions.

'Quick dive in here' Grix demanded

The group dived around a huge tree into a large deep hole, the monkeys ran straight past the tree and everyone breathed a sigh of relief...everyone except er-no.

'That was really clever, wasn't it Grix'
'Well better then being eaten by razor sharp gummed monkeys' Grix answered.
'All we have to do is sit and wait until King Tony takes his afternoon stroll around the grounds' Ant insisted
'Meanwhile, Ant and I will play a card game, and its two player, so you and your brain can't play' said er-no
'Oh like a really want to play a girly card game' Grix's brain replied,
'Well I wouln't mind' Grix replied
'Thats because you are a woman' the Brain said
'Shut up...both of you' Ant shouted

.....a few minutes past.....

'The six of spades? What's so significant about the six of spades?' er-no asked
'Well if you reshuf....' Ant said
'Can you two stop mucking around with that card game, we have more important matters!' Grix explained.
'Grix, we don't have any rope, we don't have a ladder, so we are stuck in this hole whether you like it or not!'
'Wow, that was a huge deja-vu guys' said er-no, 'anyway Grix, whats the problem, Ant said that all we have to do is wait until King Tony takes his afternoon stroll'
'Yes, but according to my free watch from opening my Solo account, we still have four hours to wait' Grix explained.
'Bloody hell....this is gonna be so boring, might as well get back to Ant's card game, so Ant, what is so significant about the six of spades?'
'Well er-no the six of spades holds the key to the meaning of life, the meaning of life is.....'

Ant and er-no were quite happy talking about cards and what they mean, Grix began to have sing along with his brain. The three...

'FOUR'

....yes Grix's brain. The four sat there waiting for King Tony to pass, he was sure to help three notables and a brain in destress. Many hours past, Grix glanced at his Solo watch and saw that it had shot well past the mark of four hours......

'um guys' Grix said with a nervous look
'What' Grix's Brain said while in the corner of the hole with his back to the others taking a whizz
'wow, I didn't know brains did that..' er-no said
'Well, now you do muggins, shut up' the brain answered.
'Guys, Tony ain't past yet and we have been down here five hours'
'Ha, your crappy watch ain't working properly, we have only been here twenty three minutes, thats according to my Barcley's watch'. er-no answered
'Yeap he's right Grix' Ant replied
'Oh, mmm, ok' Grix said
'Who's that? Whats that noise...'
'Hello?' shouted Ant, 'HEEEELLLLOOO'

'I wonder who is calling me? I think it came from over here in this hole that only a stupid person would want to jump into'

The passer dropped his head over the hole's entrance, the group looked up.

'HA HA. Look who fell down the hole' Sniper shouted
'Oh, SHUT UP Sniper, and help us get out of here!' Grix replied
'Haaaa haaaa, look who fell down the hole, look who fell down the hole.'
'Haa haa, look who isn't in the hole!'
'Wha?'
'Well its great to be in the hole, in you help us get out Sniper we will let you take a trip around the hole for free!'
'wow, really, will you. Oh Thanks Grix, hold on'

Sniper walks away saying he has just gone to get rope.

'Will you really push Sniper into the hole Grix?' Ant asked
'Not really, I just know that he would get us the rope if we said it was the best thing ever!'

Sniper returned with some rope, Meka was also with him, as the rope was Meka's for a training course he was involved in.

'Hi again, heres the rope you wanted, I will throw it down.'
'That was really clever wasn't it Sniper' Grix said
'What?'
'You are meant to keep ahold of one end of the bloody rope!'
'Ahhh, ok, throw it back up then'

After a few minutes of getting it right, meka and Sniper pulled Ant, er-no and Grix (complete with brain) out of the hole, they were a bit muddy.

'Grix, I wanna go in the hole now' Sniper insisted
'Sniper, Grix was only joking...' Ant didn't finish
'Of course you can Sniper, we will get you tommorrow, after telling the monkeys where you are'

Sniper jumped into the hole, and was told to stay there until Tony came walking past in three hours and thirty two minutes time.

'What were you guys, doing in there anyway?' Meka asked
'We were being chased by Goatboys millions, and Grix decided to drag us into there...' er-no answered
'Ahhh, good decision Grix, very safe place to go' Meka replied
'Yeap, thats what I thought' Grix said
'bighead' Ant muttered quickly
'What?' Grix questionned
'Nothing Grix, nothing....

The group were out of the hole.
Grix's watch was useless.
Sniper was playing with the six of spades card that er-no had left in the hole.
Meka was making his way back to the course.
Ant was muttering stuff under his breathe.
er-no was talking to himself about the GameCube.
Grix was trying to steal er-no's watch.
And the Brain... was planning the new world domination plan.
Mon 25/06/01 at 00:20
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"everyone says it"
Posts: 14,738
Dringo wrote:

Whats stopping me writing one?

Your GBA!

:)
Mon 25/06/01 at 00:16
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Posts: 18,185
It was such good story and notables seem such a hilarious team it would make interesting read to see Dringo as in these stories.

Whats stopping me writing one?
Mon 25/06/01 at 00:13
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Posts: 14,738
Dringo wrote:
> The world of Notables i wish i could join now!

lol
Mon 25/06/01 at 00:11
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Posts: 18,185
The world of Notabkles i wish i could join now!
Sun 24/06/01 at 23:28
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"everyone says it"
Posts: 14,738
'The six of spades? What's so significant about the six of spades?' er-no asked
'Well if you reshuf....' Ant said
'Can you two stop mucking around with that card game, we have more important matters!' Grix explained.
'Grix, we don't have any rope, we don't have a ladder, so we are stuck in this hole whether you like it or not!'

******Five Minutes Before******

'arrrrgggghhhhh, why is Goatboy after us with his clan of razor sharp gummed monkeys?' er-no panted,
'This is not the time for those kind of questions er-no, those monkeys are lethal.' Grix replied
'Why is Goatboy so annoyed anyway Grix?'
'Because you continued to tap him on the head with a banana, and call him a ''stupid monkey'', thats why!'
'Oh yeah, that was funny why it lasted...'
'....yes all of those four seconds' Ant butted in.
'Who asked you, you bug'
'No one, but I wasn't talking in much in the story so I thought I would butt in'
'Oh, okay'

The three continued to run through the gardens of the King Tony's mansion, looking back Ant saw all the monkeys chasing them under Goatboy's instructions.

'Quick dive in here' Grix demanded

The group dived around a huge tree into a large deep hole, the monkeys ran straight past the tree and everyone breathed a sigh of relief...everyone except er-no.

'That was really clever, wasn't it Grix'
'Well better then being eaten by razor sharp gummed monkeys' Grix answered.
'All we have to do is sit and wait until King Tony takes his afternoon stroll around the grounds' Ant insisted
'Meanwhile, Ant and I will play a card game, and its two player, so you and your brain can't play' said er-no
'Oh like a really want to play a girly card game' Grix's brain replied,
'Well I wouln't mind' Grix replied
'Thats because you are a woman' the Brain said
'Shut up...both of you' Ant shouted

.....a few minutes past.....

'The six of spades? What's so significant about the six of spades?' er-no asked
'Well if you reshuf....' Ant said
'Can you two stop mucking around with that card game, we have more important matters!' Grix explained.
'Grix, we don't have any rope, we don't have a ladder, so we are stuck in this hole whether you like it or not!'
'Wow, that was a huge deja-vu guys' said er-no, 'anyway Grix, whats the problem, Ant said that all we have to do is wait until King Tony takes his afternoon stroll'
'Yes, but according to my free watch from opening my Solo account, we still have four hours to wait' Grix explained.
'Bloody hell....this is gonna be so boring, might as well get back to Ant's card game, so Ant, what is so significant about the six of spades?'
'Well er-no the six of spades holds the key to the meaning of life, the meaning of life is.....'

Ant and er-no were quite happy talking about cards and what they mean, Grix began to have sing along with his brain. The three...

'FOUR'

....yes Grix's brain. The four sat there waiting for King Tony to pass, he was sure to help three notables and a brain in destress. Many hours past, Grix glanced at his Solo watch and saw that it had shot well past the mark of four hours......

'um guys' Grix said with a nervous look
'What' Grix's Brain said while in the corner of the hole with his back to the others taking a whizz
'wow, I didn't know brains did that..' er-no said
'Well, now you do muggins, shut up' the brain answered.
'Guys, Tony ain't past yet and we have been down here five hours'
'Ha, your crappy watch ain't working properly, we have only been here twenty three minutes, thats according to my Barcley's watch'. er-no answered
'Yeap he's right Grix' Ant replied
'Oh, mmm, ok' Grix said
'Who's that? Whats that noise...'
'Hello?' shouted Ant, 'HEEEELLLLOOO'

'I wonder who is calling me? I think it came from over here in this hole that only a stupid person would want to jump into'

The passer dropped his head over the hole's entrance, the group looked up.

'HA HA. Look who fell down the hole' Sniper shouted
'Oh, SHUT UP Sniper, and help us get out of here!' Grix replied
'Haaaa haaaa, look who fell down the hole, look who fell down the hole.'
'Haa haa, look who isn't in the hole!'
'Wha?'
'Well its great to be in the hole, in you help us get out Sniper we will let you take a trip around the hole for free!'
'wow, really, will you. Oh Thanks Grix, hold on'

Sniper walks away saying he has just gone to get rope.

'Will you really push Sniper into the hole Grix?' Ant asked
'Not really, I just know that he would get us the rope if we said it was the best thing ever!'

Sniper returned with some rope, Meka was also with him, as the rope was Meka's for a training course he was involved in.

'Hi again, heres the rope you wanted, I will throw it down.'
'That was really clever wasn't it Sniper' Grix said
'What?'
'You are meant to keep ahold of one end of the bloody rope!'
'Ahhh, ok, throw it back up then'

After a few minutes of getting it right, meka and Sniper pulled Ant, er-no and Grix (complete with brain) out of the hole, they were a bit muddy.

'Grix, I wanna go in the hole now' Sniper insisted
'Sniper, Grix was only joking...' Ant didn't finish
'Of course you can Sniper, we will get you tommorrow, after telling the monkeys where you are'

Sniper jumped into the hole, and was told to stay there until Tony came walking past in three hours and thirty two minutes time.

'What were you guys, doing in there anyway?' Meka asked
'We were being chased by Goatboys millions, and Grix decided to drag us into there...' er-no answered
'Ahhh, good decision Grix, very safe place to go' Meka replied
'Yeap, thats what I thought' Grix said
'bighead' Ant muttered quickly
'What?' Grix questionned
'Nothing Grix, nothing....

The group were out of the hole.
Grix's watch was useless.
Sniper was playing with the six of spades card that er-no had left in the hole.
Meka was making his way back to the course.
Ant was muttering stuff under his breathe.
er-no was talking to himself about the GameCube.
Grix was trying to steal er-no's watch.
And the Brain... was planning the new world domination plan.

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