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Well some questions I think I should ask then we have a big Discussion about them.
Who was god's parents?
Who were Adam and Eve's Parents and who were their parents?
If you ask a question and don't get the answer how will you know the answer?
Do Ice Cream's actually have cream in them?
How do we know our whole life is not being show on someone's T.V?
Well those are some question's so far that I want to have big Discussions about.
Who was god's parents?
Who were Adam and Eve's Parents and who were their parents?
If you ask a question and don't get the answer how will you know the answer?
Do Ice Cream's actually have cream in them?
How do we know our whole life is not being show on someone's T.V?
Well those are some question's so far that I want to have big Discussions about.
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Yeah I might. So here's the beginning of another story.
Chapter one-The tickitotiok
So as he had never seen her he thought she looked good. But why did he think this he thought she was the sort of girl, that was adventurous the one that would kill. People walked past him giving him look’s as he dribbled over the girl.
But enough about him dribbling here is the things that have happened before this.
Ok so it began looking out the glass window then being pushed out the glass window. Landing in the sea below yes he was in a lighthouse. As he was going for the sea he broke his back on rock’s and was knocked out. He woke with blurry vision and a eye patch over his eye. He ripped off the eye patch and just saw red in that eye so he put it back on.
Wires attached to his arm’s, leg’s, face every bit of his body he was in a hospital. But it didn’t look like the normal sort of hospital. Black curtain’s on the windows and blood hand prints on the wall what was happening?
He looked over at the alarm clock January 1st he had been in here two years it was the year 2007. A sign above his door saying “The tickitotiok” What did that mean? A name tag stuck to him Horiad that wasn’t his name. His name was Graham what was going on?
He jumped out the bed, putting his bare feet on the cold floor, he had hospital clothes on the light blue ones. A red dressing gown was hung on the back of the door he pulled it off the door and walked out the room into the corridor. He didn’t know what he would find but he was worried there was just silence then a bang and all the light’s turned off….
Chapter one-The tickitotiok
So as he had never seen her he thought she looked good. But why did he think this he thought she was the sort of girl, that was adventurous the one that would kill. People walked past him giving him look’s as he dribbled over the girl.
But enough about him dribbling here is the things that have happened before this.
Ok so it began looking out the glass window then being pushed out the glass window. Landing in the sea below yes he was in a lighthouse. As he was going for the sea he broke his back on rock’s and was knocked out. He woke with blurry vision and a eye patch over his eye. He ripped off the eye patch and just saw red in that eye so he put it back on.
Wires attached to his arm’s, leg’s, face every bit of his body he was in a hospital. But it didn’t look like the normal sort of hospital. Black curtain’s on the windows and blood hand prints on the wall what was happening?
He looked over at the alarm clock January 1st he had been in here two years it was the year 2007. A sign above his door saying “The tickitotiok” What did that mean? A name tag stuck to him Horiad that wasn’t his name. His name was Graham what was going on?
He jumped out the bed, putting his bare feet on the cold floor, he had hospital clothes on the light blue ones. A red dressing gown was hung on the back of the door he pulled it off the door and walked out the room into the corridor. He didn’t know what he would find but he was worried there was just silence then a bang and all the light’s turned off….
are you going to do it or not?
If you want when this is done,you can enter it in the comp.
just put both our names down.
just put both our names down.
I will tomorrow for now I have to go out. Bye.
...to see a figure standing in the sunlight.It walked forward ,towards greg.Then,Greg felt a strange feeling.He had never felt it before.
Was this feeling,the one that people felt when they were about to face him?The one the all talked about,just before he broke their bones,cracked them against the wall and half killed them?Could the feeling be ......fear?No,it couldnt be,h-he was the greatest fighter in the world!
So,banishing this feeling,be it fear or something else,he raced toward the sillouete,screaming....
crossbob can continue on the next chapter
Was this feeling,the one that people felt when they were about to face him?The one the all talked about,just before he broke their bones,cracked them against the wall and half killed them?Could the feeling be ......fear?No,it couldnt be,h-he was the greatest fighter in the world!
So,banishing this feeling,be it fear or something else,he raced toward the sillouete,screaming....
crossbob can continue on the next chapter
C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> He threw him through the air smashing his bone's as he hit into the
> wall. He was the greatest fighter in the world Greg Snikie he
> couldn't throw people half way through the air. He lived outside the
> Obtainer. The obtainer was a little town just a little way away from
> Tiklat. Tiklat was in the middle of No-where. So as the man's bones
> smashed against the wall Greg looked around.....and got his face smashed in.....:D
> He threw him through the air smashing his bone's as he hit into the
> wall. He was the greatest fighter in the world Greg Snikie he
> couldn't throw people half way through the air. He lived outside the
> Obtainer. The obtainer was a little town just a little way away from
> Tiklat. Tiklat was in the middle of No-where. So as the man's bones
> smashed against the wall Greg looked around.....and got his face smashed in.....:D
Now you add the rest or I will add more if you like.
Ok I won't name people from here in this story. This well have some new character.
Chapter 1-Outside the obtainer
He threw him through the air smashing his bone's as he hit into the wall. He was the greatest fighter in the world Greg Snikie he couldn't throw people half way through the air. He lived outside the Obtainer. The obtainer was a little town just a little way away from Tiklat. Tiklat was in the middle of No-where. So as the man's bones smashed against the wall Greg looked around.....
Chapter 1-Outside the obtainer
He threw him through the air smashing his bone's as he hit into the wall. He was the greatest fighter in the world Greg Snikie he couldn't throw people half way through the air. He lived outside the Obtainer. The obtainer was a little town just a little way away from Tiklat. Tiklat was in the middle of No-where. So as the man's bones smashed against the wall Greg looked around.....
snake10 wrote:
> Question:Where is smeldos's house.
> I never checked cause i did'nt want to risk going into a hell hole...
Surely if you checked you'd be able to avoid it and have less chance of running into it?
> Question:Where is smeldos's house.
> I never checked cause i did'nt want to risk going into a hell hole...
Surely if you checked you'd be able to avoid it and have less chance of running into it?
Crossbobs too excited, you need to learn controll. Track Smeldos for 5 hours, see where he goes.....that should teach you patience! :D
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