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Get yourself a good vocalist.
Big massive harmonicaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..........BLEURGH.
Oh and your lyrics are worst than emo.
And your lyrics need a little thought rather than the same repetitive thing being hoarsely moaned over and over.
And I so wanted to hear. Well, I didn't, but I did.