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"I've got into film making now!"

Well yesterday I made quite a big movie and months ago I had made a movie which I was very happy with,but I couldn't show it to any of you on here but now I can so here it is and I will add the other movie soon. But I need to add some more bits to it. But when I finish school im going to a place where I can do a course all about movies. Also im doing I.T Full this year where we get to do animations which will be cool. So just thought I would tell you that i've got into making movies and when I do the animations,I will add them to. But for now here is the first movie I ever made called A tiny movie about C®ø§$ Bób and how annoying he is so enjoy.

Well the movie won't work so here is a song instead which I just did its very quick and random by my band,Dying To Live and this song is called You Stink. But I was very bored when I made this. Oh yeah I forgot to tell I had got into making music to now. Well heres the song [URL]http://media.putfile.com/Dying-To-Live-You-Stink[/URL]

I know but i like writing one helpful post to him and then i can continue with my hate campaign when he decides not to listen.

But it's all been said before, and he never listens.

Why didn't you post one of those? rather than an audio mess?

You'd get much better feedback on your creations if you spent a bit more time on the production of it, this goes for your writing as well as your music.

Most of the time when people post things in the forums that they have created they get reasonable feedback, but this isn't because everyone is just being nice, it's because the person submitting is showing something that they consider good or are requesting assistance with improving their style.

If i were you, i wouldn't submit something that i was going to turn around 8 posts later and say yeah thats a rubbish one, i'll do the nextt one better. I noticed you say this sor of thing alot in your story threads that you wern't happy with it but you posted it anyway, maybe spend an extra hour or 2 on each story working out how the story is going to flow. Also type it in Word first and then paste it in the forums once Word has shown you any errors, this will normally help avoid small mistakes.

Well, can we hear them? Surely you want to show your best stuff to everyone.

Yeah I have four other songs that are proper.

You're very quick to say you can do better ... why not take some time out and actually do better. Don't just record whatever comes into your head and show it to everyone. Maybe write some lyrics, get some decent chords together and, y'know, practice?

many goats wrote:
> This is the first time I've listened to one of these.
>
> I can honestly say that I laughed all the way through, and then just
> broke down in tears.
>
> Absolutely shocking.
>
> Now I can't play guitar very well, but where the hell have you shoved
> it to make it sound like that?
>
> That's a goddamn joke.

Its not always like that it was just for the song.

The fact that the guitar is strummed listlessly doesn't help, but surely you could find someone who could sing in a better tone than a rasping shout ?!

The lyrics were almost poetical "You stink"

This is the first time I've listened to one of these.

I can honestly say that I laughed all the way through, and then just broke down in tears.

Absolutely shocking.

Now I can't play guitar very well, but where the hell have you shoved it to make it sound like that?

That's a goddamn joke.

Ok I will.