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This is actually Vitypo part 2 but I changed the name.
So the first one was a rip off but this one is a complete change!
Bill drop Mike to the floor and let him die once and for all. Bill thought he had the virus. He was hallucinating but then he thought what the hell is happening, Fire? Fire was all around him he did have the virus, his heart was burning up he dropped to the floor.
His blood was crawling then tick he stopped and threw up a load of blood the shade of his blood was the darkest red. The army started firing bullets at him why the hell were they doing that? “GET HIM HE’S INFECTED!!!” screamed one of the Army men. Bullet holes were punched into Bills suit. Then everything went slow motion as blood flew from Bill the glass shattered on Bills mask and a bullet went between his eyes. Blowing the contents of his head out he dropped to the ground with a bang. The army men ran over to him and grabbed him by the wrists they then dragged him out the room. Where they threw him into another room where all the other bodies were being kept which were going to be set on fire later.
The army men ran back into the room where all the monkeys were there were shades of all sorts of different things on the walls. Sick, blood, guts things that were to horrible to mention the monkeys had even wiped poo on the walls. The Army shone their touches around but there was no sound of the monkeys no movement about the room.
In till a blood drip dropped from the ceiling the army men looked up a monkey hung from a pipe on the ceiling. All of a sudden the monkey jumped down at one of the army men and ripped his mask off. Then he stabbed his fingers into straight into the man’s eyes then pulled them back out killing him instantly. The army men started running backwards shooting at the same time. But the monkey kept on jumping all different places then a shade ran over them, like something was going to jump at them and it did the thing that jumped at them was the monkeys. “Quick kill them men kill them now….
To Be Continued
Ok so not really a change but I tryed but I have wrote another one as well that is not about Vitypo which I will be adding soon.
So the first one was a rip off but this one is a complete change!
Bill drop Mike to the floor and let him die once and for all. Bill thought he had the virus. He was hallucinating but then he thought what the hell is happening, Fire? Fire was all around him he did have the virus, his heart was burning up he dropped to the floor.
His blood was crawling then tick he stopped and threw up a load of blood the shade of his blood was the darkest red. The army started firing bullets at him why the hell were they doing that? “GET HIM HE’S INFECTED!!!” screamed one of the Army men. Bullet holes were punched into Bills suit. Then everything went slow motion as blood flew from Bill the glass shattered on Bills mask and a bullet went between his eyes. Blowing the contents of his head out he dropped to the ground with a bang. The army men ran over to him and grabbed him by the wrists they then dragged him out the room. Where they threw him into another room where all the other bodies were being kept which were going to be set on fire later.
The army men ran back into the room where all the monkeys were there were shades of all sorts of different things on the walls. Sick, blood, guts things that were to horrible to mention the monkeys had even wiped poo on the walls. The Army shone their touches around but there was no sound of the monkeys no movement about the room.
In till a blood drip dropped from the ceiling the army men looked up a monkey hung from a pipe on the ceiling. All of a sudden the monkey jumped down at one of the army men and ripped his mask off. Then he stabbed his fingers into straight into the man’s eyes then pulled them back out killing him instantly. The army men started running backwards shooting at the same time. But the monkey kept on jumping all different places then a shade ran over them, like something was going to jump at them and it did the thing that jumped at them was the monkeys. “Quick kill them men kill them now….
To Be Continued
Ok so not really a change but I tryed but I have wrote another one as well that is not about Vitypo which I will be adding soon.
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*sighs*
I need that game.
Is it sadder that you can casually say "Hmmm yeah I might as well go out and buy a Gamecube" or that i've sold 2 gamecubes and want another one?
I need that game.
Is it sadder that you can casually say "Hmmm yeah I might as well go out and buy a Gamecube" or that i've sold 2 gamecubes and want another one?
Not at all influenced by Killer 7? Not even a little bit?
It was certainly better than any of your other workings, though it's still a direct rip off of 28 Days Later and the reference to Shade was pretty weak. Still, you're actually improving now.
This is actually Vitypo part 2 but I changed the name.
So the first one was a rip off but this one is a complete change!
Bill drop Mike to the floor and let him die once and for all. Bill thought he had the virus. He was hallucinating but then he thought what the hell is happening, Fire? Fire was all around him he did have the virus, his heart was burning up he dropped to the floor.
His blood was crawling then tick he stopped and threw up a load of blood the shade of his blood was the darkest red. The army started firing bullets at him why the hell were they doing that? “GET HIM HE’S INFECTED!!!” screamed one of the Army men. Bullet holes were punched into Bills suit. Then everything went slow motion as blood flew from Bill the glass shattered on Bills mask and a bullet went between his eyes. Blowing the contents of his head out he dropped to the ground with a bang. The army men ran over to him and grabbed him by the wrists they then dragged him out the room. Where they threw him into another room where all the other bodies were being kept which were going to be set on fire later.
The army men ran back into the room where all the monkeys were there were shades of all sorts of different things on the walls. Sick, blood, guts things that were to horrible to mention the monkeys had even wiped poo on the walls. The Army shone their touches around but there was no sound of the monkeys no movement about the room.
In till a blood drip dropped from the ceiling the army men looked up a monkey hung from a pipe on the ceiling. All of a sudden the monkey jumped down at one of the army men and ripped his mask off. Then he stabbed his fingers into straight into the man’s eyes then pulled them back out killing him instantly. The army men started running backwards shooting at the same time. But the monkey kept on jumping all different places then a shade ran over them, like something was going to jump at them and it did the thing that jumped at them was the monkeys. “Quick kill them men kill them now….
To Be Continued
Ok so not really a change but I tryed but I have wrote another one as well that is not about Vitypo which I will be adding soon.
So the first one was a rip off but this one is a complete change!
Bill drop Mike to the floor and let him die once and for all. Bill thought he had the virus. He was hallucinating but then he thought what the hell is happening, Fire? Fire was all around him he did have the virus, his heart was burning up he dropped to the floor.
His blood was crawling then tick he stopped and threw up a load of blood the shade of his blood was the darkest red. The army started firing bullets at him why the hell were they doing that? “GET HIM HE’S INFECTED!!!” screamed one of the Army men. Bullet holes were punched into Bills suit. Then everything went slow motion as blood flew from Bill the glass shattered on Bills mask and a bullet went between his eyes. Blowing the contents of his head out he dropped to the ground with a bang. The army men ran over to him and grabbed him by the wrists they then dragged him out the room. Where they threw him into another room where all the other bodies were being kept which were going to be set on fire later.
The army men ran back into the room where all the monkeys were there were shades of all sorts of different things on the walls. Sick, blood, guts things that were to horrible to mention the monkeys had even wiped poo on the walls. The Army shone their touches around but there was no sound of the monkeys no movement about the room.
In till a blood drip dropped from the ceiling the army men looked up a monkey hung from a pipe on the ceiling. All of a sudden the monkey jumped down at one of the army men and ripped his mask off. Then he stabbed his fingers into straight into the man’s eyes then pulled them back out killing him instantly. The army men started running backwards shooting at the same time. But the monkey kept on jumping all different places then a shade ran over them, like something was going to jump at them and it did the thing that jumped at them was the monkeys. “Quick kill them men kill them now….
To Be Continued
Ok so not really a change but I tryed but I have wrote another one as well that is not about Vitypo which I will be adding soon.
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