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This is actually Vitypo part 2 but I changed the name.
So the first one was a rip off but this one is a complete change!
Bill drop Mike to the floor and let him die once and for all. Bill thought he had the virus. He was hallucinating but then he thought what the hell is happening, Fire? Fire was all around him he did have the virus, his heart was burning up he dropped to the floor.
His blood was crawling then tick he stopped and threw up a load of blood the shade of his blood was the darkest red. The army started firing bullets at him why the hell were they doing that? “GET HIM HE’S INFECTED!!!” screamed one of the Army men. Bullet holes were punched into Bills suit. Then everything went slow motion as blood flew from Bill the glass shattered on Bills mask and a bullet went between his eyes. Blowing the contents of his head out he dropped to the ground with a bang. The army men ran over to him and grabbed him by the wrists they then dragged him out the room. Where they threw him into another room where all the other bodies were being kept which were going to be set on fire later.
The army men ran back into the room where all the monkeys were there were shades of all sorts of different things on the walls. Sick, blood, guts things that were to horrible to mention the monkeys had even wiped poo on the walls. The Army shone their touches around but there was no sound of the monkeys no movement about the room.
In till a blood drip dropped from the ceiling the army men looked up a monkey hung from a pipe on the ceiling. All of a sudden the monkey jumped down at one of the army men and ripped his mask off. Then he stabbed his fingers into straight into the man’s eyes then pulled them back out killing him instantly. The army men started running backwards shooting at the same time. But the monkey kept on jumping all different places then a shade ran over them, like something was going to jump at them and it did the thing that jumped at them was the monkeys. “Quick kill them men kill them now….
To Be Continued
Ok so not really a change but I tryed but I have wrote another one as well that is not about Vitypo which I will be adding soon.
So the first one was a rip off but this one is a complete change!
Bill drop Mike to the floor and let him die once and for all. Bill thought he had the virus. He was hallucinating but then he thought what the hell is happening, Fire? Fire was all around him he did have the virus, his heart was burning up he dropped to the floor.
His blood was crawling then tick he stopped and threw up a load of blood the shade of his blood was the darkest red. The army started firing bullets at him why the hell were they doing that? “GET HIM HE’S INFECTED!!!” screamed one of the Army men. Bullet holes were punched into Bills suit. Then everything went slow motion as blood flew from Bill the glass shattered on Bills mask and a bullet went between his eyes. Blowing the contents of his head out he dropped to the ground with a bang. The army men ran over to him and grabbed him by the wrists they then dragged him out the room. Where they threw him into another room where all the other bodies were being kept which were going to be set on fire later.
The army men ran back into the room where all the monkeys were there were shades of all sorts of different things on the walls. Sick, blood, guts things that were to horrible to mention the monkeys had even wiped poo on the walls. The Army shone their touches around but there was no sound of the monkeys no movement about the room.
In till a blood drip dropped from the ceiling the army men looked up a monkey hung from a pipe on the ceiling. All of a sudden the monkey jumped down at one of the army men and ripped his mask off. Then he stabbed his fingers into straight into the man’s eyes then pulled them back out killing him instantly. The army men started running backwards shooting at the same time. But the monkey kept on jumping all different places then a shade ran over them, like something was going to jump at them and it did the thing that jumped at them was the monkeys. “Quick kill them men kill them now….
To Be Continued
Ok so not really a change but I tryed but I have wrote another one as well that is not about Vitypo which I will be adding soon.
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Ok thanks but the Cyborg piece was terrible and just a quick one.
Well, it's an entry so I'll judge this one. 'Gory,' would be the operative word here I feel.
The bit about the monkey pulling the soldier's pupils out of his head certainly 'caught my eye'! :D
Anyway, well, it was a valiant effort but still not as good as your Cyborg piece. Keep trying, crossbob.
The bit about the monkey pulling the soldier's pupils out of his head certainly 'caught my eye'! :D
Anyway, well, it was a valiant effort but still not as good as your Cyborg piece. Keep trying, crossbob.
[URL]http://www.putfile.com/media.php?n=Vitypo2[/URL] well theres the recording of this.
Yeah that is a very big pity.
Nah, I've got plans for the next 386 days. Pity.
Still, I have a tendancy not to pay for trains and i'd have to switch meaning i'd get caught.
tribute's just jealous
ask him too!
ask him too!
Yeah, go on, Bobs mum doesn't seem to care about it much - why don't you go down and play?
Oriental Rib wrote:
> C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> But I told you my mum would pick you up.
>
> I couldn't do that as I would feel abliged to pay petrol fees. I'm
> just like that, I don't take nothing from no-one and I pay my way.
But I don't even live that far away from the train station. Only 5 minutes away and you won't have to pay petrol fees. My mum won't make you.
> C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> But I told you my mum would pick you up.
>
> I couldn't do that as I would feel abliged to pay petrol fees. I'm
> just like that, I don't take nothing from no-one and I pay my way.
But I don't even live that far away from the train station. Only 5 minutes away and you won't have to pay petrol fees. My mum won't make you.
The stories not bad, but it's very short and the use of shades looks to have been put in as a after thought.
This shouldn't have really been a second part as the first part was truely a rubbish rip-off and ruins this one.
This shouldn't have really been a second part as the first part was truely a rubbish rip-off and ruins this one.
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