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The following takes place between 9am and 10.00am.
J Nash slowly wakes as the hands on his clock,slowly tick like a tortise. He sits up and trys to open his eyes,but there stuck together with so much sleep. So he pulls them open with his fingers. The sleep drips off and now his eyes are open. He looks around the room something is different,his bedroom door has been,flung open. Last night he had tightly shut it and locked it. He goes to the bedside table his hands are shaking,J Nash gets his gun out his draw and loads it with bullets.
He can hear footsteps walking along,on his cold hard frosty floor. He gets out his bed and slowly walks along. He looks round the corner,he see's a man,with a glass eye and a sharp shiny knife in his hand. He looks like the perfect Villan. J Nash holds his gun round the corner at the glass eyed man,he has his back turned to J Nash.
J Nash fires his gun his Desert Eagle,the smooth sharp bullet flys through the air and hits the man in the head,blowing his not smart,juicy brain in. The man drops to the floor,J nash walks over to him and looks down at,he has a big bullet hole in his head.
J Nash runs into his room and picks up his phone. He rings up the officer "Yes hello Dolly here" "Its J Nash,Dolly I've just had a man try,to kill me send back up to my house I think there might be more here" "Ok then J Nash" "Bye Dolly" "Bye J Nash". Beep Beep Beep Beep Beep. "J Nash are you here" "Yeah im in my room" "Ok we've found nothing J Nash but have you checked up stairs?" "No I haven't but can you?" "Yes we will now J Nash". The back up slowly walks up the stairs. "Oh God help quick J Nash Hellpppppppp". Beep Beep Beep Beepppppppppppppppppppp.
J Nash slowly wakes as the hands on his clock,slowly tick like a tortise. He sits up and trys to open his eyes,but there stuck together with so much sleep. So he pulls them open with his fingers. The sleep drips off and now his eyes are open. He looks around the room something is different,his bedroom door has been,flung open. Last night he had tightly shut it and locked it. He goes to the bedside table his hands are shaking,J Nash gets his gun out his draw and loads it with bullets.
He can hear footsteps walking along,on his cold hard frosty floor. He gets out his bed and slowly walks along. He looks round the corner,he see's a man,with a glass eye and a sharp shiny knife in his hand. He looks like the perfect Villan. J Nash holds his gun round the corner at the glass eyed man,he has his back turned to J Nash.
J Nash fires his gun his Desert Eagle,the smooth sharp bullet flys through the air and hits the man in the head,blowing his not smart,juicy brain in. The man drops to the floor,J nash walks over to him and looks down at,he has a big bullet hole in his head.
J Nash runs into his room and picks up his phone. He rings up the officer "Yes hello Dolly here" "Its J Nash,Dolly I've just had a man try,to kill me send back up to my house I think there might be more here" "Ok then J Nash" "Bye Dolly" "Bye J Nash". Beep Beep Beep Beep Beep. "J Nash are you here" "Yeah im in my room" "Ok we've found nothing J Nash but have you checked up stairs?" "No I haven't but can you?" "Yes we will now J Nash". The back up slowly walks up the stairs. "Oh God help quick J Nash Hellpppppppp". Beep Beep Beep Beepppppppppppppppppppp.
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Oriental Rib wrote:
> Any reason why you picked J Nash particularly Crossbob?
He wanted me to write one about him!
> Any reason why you picked J Nash particularly Crossbob?
He wanted me to write one about him!
I'm blown away....by J Nash the secret agent!
That's bob showcasing his amazing imagination for you.
J Nash wrote:
i want a chrkacter called J
> Nash!
FinalFantasyFanatic wrote:
> Yeah, but someone called J Nash as well!
i want a chrkacter called J
> Nash!
FinalFantasyFanatic wrote:
> Yeah, but someone called J Nash as well!
Any reason why you picked J Nash particularly Crossbob?
C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> Yeah ok this wasn't the greatest but I was watching 24 at the time!
"The following takes place between 9am and 10.00am."
I would never have guessed.
> Yeah ok this wasn't the greatest but I was watching 24 at the time!
"The following takes place between 9am and 10.00am."
I would never have guessed.
I can only assume that he does just write them straight in, unless he's using notepad or something similar most programs would probably crash at the amount of errors and no let him copy it.
Don't change Bob. "blowing his not smart,juicy brain in" - heh, classic.
Please don't tell me you write the directly into the new topic box.
Please.
Yes, try using the right words as well - because sleep does not drip, it's solid.
Please.
Yes, try using the right words as well - because sleep does not drip, it's solid.
Crossbob just write your stories in Word first and then copy them across, use spell check and the thesaurus to make sure you are using the correct words in the right sentences.
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