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I wake with the sound of a knocking,a police man is knocking on my car window. A touch light shines in my eyes blinding me,it's like a giant sun. "Yes Officer what is it what have I done?" I asked with the torch still blinding me. "Are you ok sir" asked the police officer still blinding me. I look up the front of my car has smoke coming out of it,like a chimmney.
I had crashed,"How did you crash sir?" asked the police officer. "I don't know officer must of dozed off but where am I?" "Well sir you are on the main road smashed into a lamp post,and I think I should take you to the station sir" "Ok then officer". I sat up and opened my car door,but when I got out I dropped to the floor and blacked out. I woke in a room it was cold,I could hear rain falling,it hadn't rained for age's. Why was it raining the rain sounded like it was fallling down so hard. Like bombs dropping thats what the rain sounded like. I stood up I was in a prison cell. A strange creature walked past my cell. I looked at it,it had red eyes. "What the hell are you" I asked puzzled.
He just ignored me and walked off. I layed down on my bed and looked up at the ceiling,it has cracks in it and water has started to drip through. A drip falls on my head and I jumped up. "WHY THE HELL AM I IN THIS PLACE?"I scream out. But then im standing in the middle of a field where was I this,was like my last dream when I woke in the woods,then this woman had a orgasm,what the hell was happening. Then gun shots,tears running down my face,I could hear gun shots,ringing in my ears. But I was still in the field. My ears were bleeding,Then I woke but I was stil in a dream and I was lost in it and was about to be killed by a giant spider......
I had crashed,"How did you crash sir?" asked the police officer. "I don't know officer must of dozed off but where am I?" "Well sir you are on the main road smashed into a lamp post,and I think I should take you to the station sir" "Ok then officer". I sat up and opened my car door,but when I got out I dropped to the floor and blacked out. I woke in a room it was cold,I could hear rain falling,it hadn't rained for age's. Why was it raining the rain sounded like it was fallling down so hard. Like bombs dropping thats what the rain sounded like. I stood up I was in a prison cell. A strange creature walked past my cell. I looked at it,it had red eyes. "What the hell are you" I asked puzzled.
He just ignored me and walked off. I layed down on my bed and looked up at the ceiling,it has cracks in it and water has started to drip through. A drip falls on my head and I jumped up. "WHY THE HELL AM I IN THIS PLACE?"I scream out. But then im standing in the middle of a field where was I this,was like my last dream when I woke in the woods,then this woman had a orgasm,what the hell was happening. Then gun shots,tears running down my face,I could hear gun shots,ringing in my ears. But I was still in the field. My ears were bleeding,Then I woke but I was stil in a dream and I was lost in it and was about to be killed by a giant spider......
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Or could you write a story about a happy go lucky character I've made up and written about in the past, he's called, 'Jody Adams'
You should write a story about the army crossbob.
Funny. I'm a Crossbob fan.
Forgot all about that, just started writing it a 11.20pm yesterday, and it was really quick.
Why does it turn into a different story, the one you wrote the other day? Why isn't there more boob touching? Where's Mike?
You need to sort out grammar mistakes, also it was way too random to soon. And some of the descriptions were pretyy weak. Other than that it was ok/
Why post it then?
Sorry this was quite rubbish!
I wake with the sound of a knocking,a police man is knocking on my car window. A touch light shines in my eyes blinding me,it's like a giant sun. "Yes Officer what is it what have I done?" I asked with the torch still blinding me. "Are you ok sir" asked the police officer still blinding me. I look up the front of my car has smoke coming out of it,like a chimmney.
I had crashed,"How did you crash sir?" asked the police officer. "I don't know officer must of dozed off but where am I?" "Well sir you are on the main road smashed into a lamp post,and I think I should take you to the station sir" "Ok then officer". I sat up and opened my car door,but when I got out I dropped to the floor and blacked out. I woke in a room it was cold,I could hear rain falling,it hadn't rained for age's. Why was it raining the rain sounded like it was fallling down so hard. Like bombs dropping thats what the rain sounded like. I stood up I was in a prison cell. A strange creature walked past my cell. I looked at it,it had red eyes. "What the hell are you" I asked puzzled.
He just ignored me and walked off. I layed down on my bed and looked up at the ceiling,it has cracks in it and water has started to drip through. A drip falls on my head and I jumped up. "WHY THE HELL AM I IN THIS PLACE?"I scream out. But then im standing in the middle of a field where was I this,was like my last dream when I woke in the woods,then this woman had a orgasm,what the hell was happening. Then gun shots,tears running down my face,I could hear gun shots,ringing in my ears. But I was still in the field. My ears were bleeding,Then I woke but I was stil in a dream and I was lost in it and was about to be killed by a giant spider......
I had crashed,"How did you crash sir?" asked the police officer. "I don't know officer must of dozed off but where am I?" "Well sir you are on the main road smashed into a lamp post,and I think I should take you to the station sir" "Ok then officer". I sat up and opened my car door,but when I got out I dropped to the floor and blacked out. I woke in a room it was cold,I could hear rain falling,it hadn't rained for age's. Why was it raining the rain sounded like it was fallling down so hard. Like bombs dropping thats what the rain sounded like. I stood up I was in a prison cell. A strange creature walked past my cell. I looked at it,it had red eyes. "What the hell are you" I asked puzzled.
He just ignored me and walked off. I layed down on my bed and looked up at the ceiling,it has cracks in it and water has started to drip through. A drip falls on my head and I jumped up. "WHY THE HELL AM I IN THIS PLACE?"I scream out. But then im standing in the middle of a field where was I this,was like my last dream when I woke in the woods,then this woman had a orgasm,what the hell was happening. Then gun shots,tears running down my face,I could hear gun shots,ringing in my ears. But I was still in the field. My ears were bleeding,Then I woke but I was stil in a dream and I was lost in it and was about to be killed by a giant spider......
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