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Thu 19/05/05 at 22:37
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I Woke in the woods,silence nothing to be heard for miles you could hear a pin dropped. I jumped up were was I,I was lost how had I got here. I looked a round I was like a Little baby bird. Like when they go on there first fly,but when they fly somewhere they don't know where they are. That was like me I had got here but I didn't know how. I walked though the woods. My eyes weren't open propaly because I was still tied. But then I looked down at myself. Oh god I was just in my boxers this had to be a dream.

I walked along more the air was cold it felt like I was inside a freezer. I looked up the sky was dark with black clouds. Then it started raining the raindrops fell down like rocks. Hitting me really hard,then I felt it,it was hailstones. They smacked me so badly on my bareback,I started running.

I stopped I was so lost I came to a dead end. But then all of a sudden I looked around tree were surrounding me like a load of bullys. I sat down on the floor and closed my eyes. I woke laying on a bed in a cold musty old room with a big man in a bed next to me. I stood up I was in a room with bars at the window I was in Jail. How the hell did I get here. Just now I was in the woods now im in a jail. With a fat man near me who's probaly think up new things to do to me,when I sleep.

I start screaming out "Why the hell am I here" the fat man jumps up. "Alright murderer". "What did you just say"I asked him. "I said Murderer coz you murdered them people" he answered. I got a horrible cold feeling down my back like someone had dropped a ice cube down there. I dropped down to the floor. I just started to cry rocking back and fourth on the floor. I now was really lost,lost in the world,lost in my life. What had I done I wasn't a Murderer I hadn't Murdered anyone. I was just a normal man with a normal life but now I was lost in this normal life and I didn't know what was going to happen.

The next day I woke too find my self somewhere else. I had a women in the bed I was lying in with me. She was really lovely she looked like a cute little puppy cute and cuddly. I put my arm around her she was naked. I grabbed her breast in my hand. I rubbed it nicely and firmly. She woke having such a orgasm. But then I woke again in a pitch black room. I couldn't see. I tried to stand up but I Couldn't I was paralyzed. I couldn't get up I couldn't do anything. I closed my eyes hoping I would wake up somewhere else but no I didn't I was still so lost and I wouldn't stop being lost. I hated this and it would never stop.
Mon 23/05/05 at 10:34
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"who wrote that?"
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"I hated this and it would never stop"
Sat 21/05/05 at 12:35
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"spongemycarpetydont"
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I've decided crossbob is around 10-11
Sat 21/05/05 at 12:20
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I woman can't get an orgasm from you rubbing her breast.
Do you even know what an orgasm is crossbob?
Sat 21/05/05 at 11:31
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I don't know if you're for real Crossbob, but that was funny goddamit! Ohh man. Every line had me chuckling.
Sat 21/05/05 at 08:23
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"WhaleOilBeefHooked"
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Kinda reminded me of the Butterfly Effect. Not a bad entry, I'd run it through a spell check though.
Fri 20/05/05 at 10:11
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Why can't it?
Thu 19/05/05 at 22:47
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Powerful stuff, especially the "having such an orgasm."

You know, biologically, that couldn't actually happen?
Thu 19/05/05 at 22:37
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"Catch it!"
Posts: 6,840
I Woke in the woods,silence nothing to be heard for miles you could hear a pin dropped. I jumped up were was I,I was lost how had I got here. I looked a round I was like a Little baby bird. Like when they go on there first fly,but when they fly somewhere they don't know where they are. That was like me I had got here but I didn't know how. I walked though the woods. My eyes weren't open propaly because I was still tied. But then I looked down at myself. Oh god I was just in my boxers this had to be a dream.

I walked along more the air was cold it felt like I was inside a freezer. I looked up the sky was dark with black clouds. Then it started raining the raindrops fell down like rocks. Hitting me really hard,then I felt it,it was hailstones. They smacked me so badly on my bareback,I started running.

I stopped I was so lost I came to a dead end. But then all of a sudden I looked around tree were surrounding me like a load of bullys. I sat down on the floor and closed my eyes. I woke laying on a bed in a cold musty old room with a big man in a bed next to me. I stood up I was in a room with bars at the window I was in Jail. How the hell did I get here. Just now I was in the woods now im in a jail. With a fat man near me who's probaly think up new things to do to me,when I sleep.

I start screaming out "Why the hell am I here" the fat man jumps up. "Alright murderer". "What did you just say"I asked him. "I said Murderer coz you murdered them people" he answered. I got a horrible cold feeling down my back like someone had dropped a ice cube down there. I dropped down to the floor. I just started to cry rocking back and fourth on the floor. I now was really lost,lost in the world,lost in my life. What had I done I wasn't a Murderer I hadn't Murdered anyone. I was just a normal man with a normal life but now I was lost in this normal life and I didn't know what was going to happen.

The next day I woke too find my self somewhere else. I had a women in the bed I was lying in with me. She was really lovely she looked like a cute little puppy cute and cuddly. I put my arm around her she was naked. I grabbed her breast in my hand. I rubbed it nicely and firmly. She woke having such a orgasm. But then I woke again in a pitch black room. I couldn't see. I tried to stand up but I Couldn't I was paralyzed. I couldn't get up I couldn't do anything. I closed my eyes hoping I would wake up somewhere else but no I didn't I was still so lost and I wouldn't stop being lost. I hated this and it would never stop.

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