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Timmy didn't like it when the big men came. They never looked at him, they just went upstairs. Timmy would watch the saturday film and try to ignore the comings and goings.
He watched the war film focusing as hard as he could on the action. Men were dying on a beach, good men it seemed from their talking before they got into the funny shaped boats. Those men were good people.
He watched the good men climb up a steep hill to get to the bad men. The bad men fired guns down on the good men and many good men were dying. Timmy wanted the good men to win, he crossed his fingers and hoped they would.
His mother came down and made him a bowl of coco pops. There was a noise from upstairs and she hurried backup. Timmy watched the film. He wondered where all the good men had gone, perhaps they'd all died in wars? He didn't know.
The good men seemed to be winning, although some were hung from churches. A man left, Timmy didn't watch him go.
His mother picked him up saying 'time for your nap timmy'.
He wondered where all the good men were.
He watched the war film focusing as hard as he could on the action. Men were dying on a beach, good men it seemed from their talking before they got into the funny shaped boats. Those men were good people.
He watched the good men climb up a steep hill to get to the bad men. The bad men fired guns down on the good men and many good men were dying. Timmy wanted the good men to win, he crossed his fingers and hoped they would.
His mother came down and made him a bowl of coco pops. There was a noise from upstairs and she hurried backup. Timmy watched the film. He wondered where all the good men had gone, perhaps they'd all died in wars? He didn't know.
The good men seemed to be winning, although some were hung from churches. A man left, Timmy didn't watch him go.
His mother picked him up saying 'time for your nap timmy'.
He wondered where all the good men were.
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You should get warned for spamming just like that guy who did the story about animals.
Quite, pointless?
Some of it was hard to read, you need to work on some of your sentence structure.
Some of it was hard to read, you need to work on some of your sentence structure.
Post it in the creative writing forum. The maybe someone will care.
...creative writing?
Timmy didn't like it when the big men came. They never looked at him, they just went upstairs. Timmy would watch the saturday film and try to ignore the comings and goings.
He watched the war film focusing as hard as he could on the action. Men were dying on a beach, good men it seemed from their talking before they got into the funny shaped boats. Those men were good people.
He watched the good men climb up a steep hill to get to the bad men. The bad men fired guns down on the good men and many good men were dying. Timmy wanted the good men to win, he crossed his fingers and hoped they would.
His mother came down and made him a bowl of coco pops. There was a noise from upstairs and she hurried backup. Timmy watched the film. He wondered where all the good men had gone, perhaps they'd all died in wars? He didn't know.
The good men seemed to be winning, although some were hung from churches. A man left, Timmy didn't watch him go.
His mother picked him up saying 'time for your nap timmy'.
He wondered where all the good men were.
He watched the war film focusing as hard as he could on the action. Men were dying on a beach, good men it seemed from their talking before they got into the funny shaped boats. Those men were good people.
He watched the good men climb up a steep hill to get to the bad men. The bad men fired guns down on the good men and many good men were dying. Timmy wanted the good men to win, he crossed his fingers and hoped they would.
His mother came down and made him a bowl of coco pops. There was a noise from upstairs and she hurried backup. Timmy watched the film. He wondered where all the good men had gone, perhaps they'd all died in wars? He didn't know.
The good men seemed to be winning, although some were hung from churches. A man left, Timmy didn't watch him go.
His mother picked him up saying 'time for your nap timmy'.
He wondered where all the good men were.
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