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Mon 28/03/05 at 13:31
Crossb00b
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Today at 2.30am I thought I would start doing some writing. So I wrote two poems here they are!


I Look- By Luke Poulton

I look at the floor and see nothing.
I look at the ceiling and see nothing.
I look at the door and see nothing.
I look at the bed and see nothing.
But then I look at you and see something.
A beautiful face,a lovely smile,lovely lips.
I look at you and see the greatest thing in the world.

What Is Love- By Luke Poulton

Is love a kiss?
Is love a hug?
Is love a word?
Can love be a smile?
Can love be a wave?
can love be a wink?
what is love and are you loved?
 
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Mon 28/03/05 at 20:00
Crossb00b
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Oriental Rib wrote:
> Those poems hurt.

Why you say that?
 
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Mon 28/03/05 at 15:08
arctic hobo
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There's a song by Elliot Smith called 2:30 AM.
 
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Mon 28/03/05 at 14:24
Hedfix
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I look at nothing and see everything.

I took some drugs
 
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Mon 28/03/05 at 14:23
Joe Frankers
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Those poems hurt.
 
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Mon 28/03/05 at 14:06
SHEEPY
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Bootigal
 
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Mon 28/03/05 at 13:56
J Nash
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I look at crossbob and I see woe.
 
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Mon 28/03/05 at 13:34
FinalFantasyFanatic
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It took you 11 hours to come up with these?

I look at the topic and see nothing.
 
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Mon 28/03/05 at 13:31
Crossb00b
Regular
"Catch it!"
Posts: 6,840
Today at 2.30am I thought I would start doing some writing. So I wrote two poems here they are!


I Look- By Luke Poulton

I look at the floor and see nothing.
I look at the ceiling and see nothing.
I look at the door and see nothing.
I look at the bed and see nothing.
But then I look at you and see something.
A beautiful face,a lovely smile,lovely lips.
I look at you and see the greatest thing in the world.

What Is Love- By Luke Poulton

Is love a kiss?
Is love a hug?
Is love a word?
Can love be a smile?
Can love be a wave?
can love be a wink?
what is love and are you loved?
 
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