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Today at 2.30am I thought I would start doing some writing. So I wrote two poems here they are!
I Look- By Luke Poulton
I look at the floor and see nothing.
I look at the ceiling and see nothing.
I look at the door and see nothing.
I look at the bed and see nothing.
But then I look at you and see something.
A beautiful face,a lovely smile,lovely lips.
I look at you and see the greatest thing in the world.
What Is Love- By Luke Poulton
Is love a kiss?
Is love a hug?
Is love a word?
Can love be a smile?
Can love be a wave?
can love be a wink?
what is love and are you loved?
I Look- By Luke Poulton
I look at the floor and see nothing.
I look at the ceiling and see nothing.
I look at the door and see nothing.
I look at the bed and see nothing.
But then I look at you and see something.
A beautiful face,a lovely smile,lovely lips.
I look at you and see the greatest thing in the world.
What Is Love- By Luke Poulton
Is love a kiss?
Is love a hug?
Is love a word?
Can love be a smile?
Can love be a wave?
can love be a wink?
what is love and are you loved?
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I know I will!
no you won't, you know you won't.
Yeah I will think about it next time I promise!
Thing is, if you write something rubbish, you shouldn't post it.
Or at least rewrite it into something partially good, then post it.
Or at least rewrite it into something partially good, then post it.
There not the best and I don't love them but I tried!
Then surely you realise that they suck.
Yeah!
C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> Why you think that?
Though the sentiment may be on target, have you actually read these out loud? I mean, really read them and tried to make them 'flow'?
> Why you think that?
Though the sentiment may be on target, have you actually read these out loud? I mean, really read them and tried to make them 'flow'?
Why you think that?
He says that because your poems are awful.
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