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Here it is again to make everyone happy another Romance! But im very tierd so this might not be that good!
It was a beautiful night Mike and Sarah walked across the beach hand in hand. The moon light shone down on them. They let the waves hit against their feet. The sand gets between their toes. Sarah laid down on the sand Mike laid next to her. They looked up at the stars. Sarah turned to her side and Mike turned to his side to the look at each other. Then Sarah rolled on top of Mike. She kissed his lips, she grabbed his trousers and ripped them off. She slowly moved on to him. As they gently kissed she got so much delight. It was her afternoon delight she was getting it raised a smile on her face. She got faster and faster the delight got greater and greater. After so much delight he shot the delight was so great she screamed.
The next morning they woke on the beach a little kid was prodding Mike with a stick. Mike was just in his boxers and Sarah just in a thong. Mike put on his trousers and Sarah put on here skirt. They walked off the beach hand in hand. They walked down the road a little bit and came to a ice cream shop. They got big bowls of ice cream and sat at a table outside feeding ice cream to each other. Sarah had ice cream above her lip. Mike kissed her and got the ice cream off. Later that day they went down to the sea. They went under water and kissed giving air to each other. That night when they got home. Mike gave Sarah some more afternoon delight. The next morning they were going to go on a trip to anywhere Sarah wanted and what did Sarah choose. The carnival first Mike won the biggest bear for her holding a heart.
Then he bought her a load of candy floss. Then they went on the ride of love. On the ride of love they rode around in giant swans. They kissed the whole way though the ride of love they never let go of each other once on the ride of love. When the ride had finished they were still kissing people could see there love was so beautiful, people could see for the ride of love you didn't need other things for it, all you needed for the ride of love was just them to and nothing else. Because they were the ride of love. And this ride of love was never going to stop.
It was a beautiful night Mike and Sarah walked across the beach hand in hand. The moon light shone down on them. They let the waves hit against their feet. The sand gets between their toes. Sarah laid down on the sand Mike laid next to her. They looked up at the stars. Sarah turned to her side and Mike turned to his side to the look at each other. Then Sarah rolled on top of Mike. She kissed his lips, she grabbed his trousers and ripped them off. She slowly moved on to him. As they gently kissed she got so much delight. It was her afternoon delight she was getting it raised a smile on her face. She got faster and faster the delight got greater and greater. After so much delight he shot the delight was so great she screamed.
The next morning they woke on the beach a little kid was prodding Mike with a stick. Mike was just in his boxers and Sarah just in a thong. Mike put on his trousers and Sarah put on here skirt. They walked off the beach hand in hand. They walked down the road a little bit and came to a ice cream shop. They got big bowls of ice cream and sat at a table outside feeding ice cream to each other. Sarah had ice cream above her lip. Mike kissed her and got the ice cream off. Later that day they went down to the sea. They went under water and kissed giving air to each other. That night when they got home. Mike gave Sarah some more afternoon delight. The next morning they were going to go on a trip to anywhere Sarah wanted and what did Sarah choose. The carnival first Mike won the biggest bear for her holding a heart.
Then he bought her a load of candy floss. Then they went on the ride of love. On the ride of love they rode around in giant swans. They kissed the whole way though the ride of love they never let go of each other once on the ride of love. When the ride had finished they were still kissing people could see there love was so beautiful, people could see for the ride of love you didn't need other things for it, all you needed for the ride of love was just them to and nothing else. Because they were the ride of love. And this ride of love was never going to stop.
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What you going to write?
Cross Bob, you've inspired me to write a similar story. Thankyou!
Thank you!
It certainly took me by surprise when Mike started suddenly shooting on the beach.
Classic.
Classic.
hm. Sounds like a trailer for a movie. All the bits of the film that might make the audience interested, without any of the story.
Mills and Bob part 2...
Mills and Bob part 2...
Alright I shall do that soon!
yes it should get to it
Alright then I shall do that soon should it be a action/romance?
My advice, crossbob, would be to write a story like you usually do, like the finding, but then put romance in it. At every available opporunity.
No and yes.
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