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Running,Running,Running as my feet splash though the puddles as the kids chase me. I run down a hill the world flew past me I felt so sad the blood dripped from my nose time went slow my legs felt numb I couldn't run and I felt so bad. The kids ran towards me I jumped and landed in a bush I had to hide the kids ran past and didn't see me. I crawled across the floor watching out for the kids they were going to smash me in. As I crawled across the leaves crunched. The kids had gone I stood up and ran for it but then I saw them again. I was so scared I hid behind a tree and they missed me again. I ran so fast this time not stopping for them. As I pushed though the woods twigs snapped birds flew over my head. It was a cold winter evening I was so freezing. I slipped and landed down on my face I dragged myself across the floor. My legs still felt so numb and cold. Tears ran down my face I felt so sad why were the kids after me they just liked beating me up I hadn't done anything.
I dragged myself behind a tree and leaned against it and tryed to pull myself up by a branch the branch snapped and I slammed to the ground mud covered my face and eyes I couldn't see the next second I felt a smack in my head and I dropped to the ground. I woke with the horrible smell of rotting eggs a bag was over my head I was laying in the floor I could fill I was on leaves. My hands were tied together. I rolled over and the bag was ripped off my head. "Hi Peter how are you" Shouted one of the Bullys. I looked around no one else was there. I was about to talk but I found out my mouth was stuck together with tape. I started making a load of noise "Sorry what was that Peter" boomed the bully. His name was Gary he was always trying to act hard he was so stupid. "See you Peter have fun" called Gary as he ran off. I lay there crying why was my life like this why was it so bad why were they so unkind.
I tried to stand up but my feet were tied together so I hopped along the ground trying to get out of the woods it was almost night. I had to get to the road. But then I felt a cold horrible hand grab hold of my shoulder I was in the wrong woods I wasn't in the woods I was before. I was in Mad Man woods now we called it that because a Mad Man lived in the woods and he had just grabbed hold of me. "What are you doing in my woods kid I live here your going to die now" boomed Mad Man. I tried to hope for it but a knife flew over my head I ducked down and kept hopping I felt a knife go into my back. But not straight in only a little p***k. So I still kept on hopping I was very lucky the rope broke on my hands I turned round and smacked the man in the face I then quickly untied the rope at my feet. But then the knife stabbed into my stomach I kicked my foot forwards and kicked it into the mans balls. He dropped the knife I picked it up and stabbed it into him aload of times his eyes flickered then stopped I put my hand over his face and shut his eye lids. I ran though the woods with the blood covered knife still in my hand.
Then I saw all the bullys at the side of the road I was going to stabbed them now I ran at Gary stabbed him in the back he dropped to the floor. It was my time to kill the bullies they had ruined my life for fifthteen years now I was going to ruin theres. I slashed the knife at Mike right into his stomach he dropped to the ground then Fred right in his head he died straight away I flipped over stabbed it into Alex's balls he started screaming out I ripped the knife out and he smashed to the floor. Now the last bully this had to be good. I flipped again stabbed it in his stomach then his chest then his eye I had now killed all the bullies and I felt good!
I dragged myself behind a tree and leaned against it and tryed to pull myself up by a branch the branch snapped and I slammed to the ground mud covered my face and eyes I couldn't see the next second I felt a smack in my head and I dropped to the ground. I woke with the horrible smell of rotting eggs a bag was over my head I was laying in the floor I could fill I was on leaves. My hands were tied together. I rolled over and the bag was ripped off my head. "Hi Peter how are you" Shouted one of the Bullys. I looked around no one else was there. I was about to talk but I found out my mouth was stuck together with tape. I started making a load of noise "Sorry what was that Peter" boomed the bully. His name was Gary he was always trying to act hard he was so stupid. "See you Peter have fun" called Gary as he ran off. I lay there crying why was my life like this why was it so bad why were they so unkind.
I tried to stand up but my feet were tied together so I hopped along the ground trying to get out of the woods it was almost night. I had to get to the road. But then I felt a cold horrible hand grab hold of my shoulder I was in the wrong woods I wasn't in the woods I was before. I was in Mad Man woods now we called it that because a Mad Man lived in the woods and he had just grabbed hold of me. "What are you doing in my woods kid I live here your going to die now" boomed Mad Man. I tried to hope for it but a knife flew over my head I ducked down and kept hopping I felt a knife go into my back. But not straight in only a little p***k. So I still kept on hopping I was very lucky the rope broke on my hands I turned round and smacked the man in the face I then quickly untied the rope at my feet. But then the knife stabbed into my stomach I kicked my foot forwards and kicked it into the mans balls. He dropped the knife I picked it up and stabbed it into him aload of times his eyes flickered then stopped I put my hand over his face and shut his eye lids. I ran though the woods with the blood covered knife still in my hand.
Then I saw all the bullys at the side of the road I was going to stabbed them now I ran at Gary stabbed him in the back he dropped to the floor. It was my time to kill the bullies they had ruined my life for fifthteen years now I was going to ruin theres. I slashed the knife at Mike right into his stomach he dropped to the ground then Fred right in his head he died straight away I flipped over stabbed it into Alex's balls he started screaming out I ripped the knife out and he smashed to the floor. Now the last bully this had to be good. I flipped again stabbed it in his stomach then his chest then his eye I had now killed all the bullies and I felt good!
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I just felt doing a load of deaths so I had to do one person being stabbed in the eye I won't do it in my next one!
Why do you keep on stabbing some one in eyes. Ok you, didn't stab someone in his eyes in the last story; but your eyeball were ripped out for sure.
At the rate you are going and considering that you are barely a teenager, by the time that you reach your late teens, you might be writing in your stories some thing like this: -
I stabbed him in his stomach but it didn't have any effect so I started ripping apart his manhood instea It was not a good job but had to take revenge so I did all that even then it was no funny an I di not enjoy it..
At the rate you are going and considering that you are barely a teenager, by the time that you reach your late teens, you might be writing in your stories some thing like this: -
I stabbed him in his stomach but it didn't have any effect so I started ripping apart his manhood instea It was not a good job but had to take revenge so I did all that even then it was no funny an I di not enjoy it..
Running,Running,Running as my feet splash though the puddles as the kids chase me. I run down a hill the world flew past me I felt so sad the blood dripped from my nose time went slow my legs felt numb I couldn't run and I felt so bad. The kids ran towards me I jumped and landed in a bush I had to hide the kids ran past and didn't see me. I crawled across the floor watching out for the kids they were going to smash me in. As I crawled across the leaves crunched. The kids had gone I stood up and ran for it but then I saw them again. I was so scared I hid behind a tree and they missed me again. I ran so fast this time not stopping for them. As I pushed though the woods twigs snapped birds flew over my head. It was a cold winter evening I was so freezing. I slipped and landed down on my face I dragged myself across the floor. My legs still felt so numb and cold. Tears ran down my face I felt so sad why were the kids after me they just liked beating me up I hadn't done anything.
I dragged myself behind a tree and leaned against it and tryed to pull myself up by a branch the branch snapped and I slammed to the ground mud covered my face and eyes I couldn't see the next second I felt a smack in my head and I dropped to the ground. I woke with the horrible smell of rotting eggs a bag was over my head I was laying in the floor I could fill I was on leaves. My hands were tied together. I rolled over and the bag was ripped off my head. "Hi Peter how are you" Shouted one of the Bullys. I looked around no one else was there. I was about to talk but I found out my mouth was stuck together with tape. I started making a load of noise "Sorry what was that Peter" boomed the bully. His name was Gary he was always trying to act hard he was so stupid. "See you Peter have fun" called Gary as he ran off. I lay there crying why was my life like this why was it so bad why were they so unkind.
I tried to stand up but my feet were tied together so I hopped along the ground trying to get out of the woods it was almost night. I had to get to the road. But then I felt a cold horrible hand grab hold of my shoulder I was in the wrong woods I wasn't in the woods I was before. I was in Mad Man woods now we called it that because a Mad Man lived in the woods and he had just grabbed hold of me. "What are you doing in my woods kid I live here your going to die now" boomed Mad Man. I tried to hope for it but a knife flew over my head I ducked down and kept hopping I felt a knife go into my back. But not straight in only a little p***k. So I still kept on hopping I was very lucky the rope broke on my hands I turned round and smacked the man in the face I then quickly untied the rope at my feet. But then the knife stabbed into my stomach I kicked my foot forwards and kicked it into the mans balls. He dropped the knife I picked it up and stabbed it into him aload of times his eyes flickered then stopped I put my hand over his face and shut his eye lids. I ran though the woods with the blood covered knife still in my hand.
Then I saw all the bullys at the side of the road I was going to stabbed them now I ran at Gary stabbed him in the back he dropped to the floor. It was my time to kill the bullies they had ruined my life for fifthteen years now I was going to ruin theres. I slashed the knife at Mike right into his stomach he dropped to the ground then Fred right in his head he died straight away I flipped over stabbed it into Alex's balls he started screaming out I ripped the knife out and he smashed to the floor. Now the last bully this had to be good. I flipped again stabbed it in his stomach then his chest then his eye I had now killed all the bullies and I felt good!
I dragged myself behind a tree and leaned against it and tryed to pull myself up by a branch the branch snapped and I slammed to the ground mud covered my face and eyes I couldn't see the next second I felt a smack in my head and I dropped to the ground. I woke with the horrible smell of rotting eggs a bag was over my head I was laying in the floor I could fill I was on leaves. My hands were tied together. I rolled over and the bag was ripped off my head. "Hi Peter how are you" Shouted one of the Bullys. I looked around no one else was there. I was about to talk but I found out my mouth was stuck together with tape. I started making a load of noise "Sorry what was that Peter" boomed the bully. His name was Gary he was always trying to act hard he was so stupid. "See you Peter have fun" called Gary as he ran off. I lay there crying why was my life like this why was it so bad why were they so unkind.
I tried to stand up but my feet were tied together so I hopped along the ground trying to get out of the woods it was almost night. I had to get to the road. But then I felt a cold horrible hand grab hold of my shoulder I was in the wrong woods I wasn't in the woods I was before. I was in Mad Man woods now we called it that because a Mad Man lived in the woods and he had just grabbed hold of me. "What are you doing in my woods kid I live here your going to die now" boomed Mad Man. I tried to hope for it but a knife flew over my head I ducked down and kept hopping I felt a knife go into my back. But not straight in only a little p***k. So I still kept on hopping I was very lucky the rope broke on my hands I turned round and smacked the man in the face I then quickly untied the rope at my feet. But then the knife stabbed into my stomach I kicked my foot forwards and kicked it into the mans balls. He dropped the knife I picked it up and stabbed it into him aload of times his eyes flickered then stopped I put my hand over his face and shut his eye lids. I ran though the woods with the blood covered knife still in my hand.
Then I saw all the bullys at the side of the road I was going to stabbed them now I ran at Gary stabbed him in the back he dropped to the floor. It was my time to kill the bullies they had ruined my life for fifthteen years now I was going to ruin theres. I slashed the knife at Mike right into his stomach he dropped to the ground then Fred right in his head he died straight away I flipped over stabbed it into Alex's balls he started screaming out I ripped the knife out and he smashed to the floor. Now the last bully this had to be good. I flipped again stabbed it in his stomach then his chest then his eye I had now killed all the bullies and I felt good!
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