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"When's the next crossbob novel coming out?"

I really liked his stories, all the cliffhangers and stuff. Plus it's nothing but action! There's always people dying and getting chased!

They seem to remind me of that girl on American Pie. "I shot him but he shot me back and we shot together it was really funny I like shooting."

I like the guy, he keeps us entertained, well done crossbob

Our crossbob readings = genius

This is the best bit in the whole thing;

'His mum was going to moan at him. "oh your always getting your shoes muddy someone would have thought you had of walked though a field of mud,"as his mum would say.But he had walked though a field of mud because because all the grass had gone from that field because lots of people had walked though there and got rid of the grass.'

When Dolores read that on Live, I actually fell off my chair.

He walked slowy over to the body with the mud still sqelching under his shoes. He looked down at the body. To see if he could recognize the body. But then he saw a light shining down on him. He looked up it was a Police Officer. "Hey what are you doing down there"shouted the Police Officer.

"''nothing!" Thundered Jay"Ijust found the body here!" Jay stormed.

My god shanted the polise man.

"I'm arresting you on the suspision of murder, you do not have to say anything, anything you do say will be will be noted and used in court against you."


noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo said Jay and i shot him, and he shot me i jumped on to a helicopter and flew it and killed the pilot i sat in the chopper and flew it into the city i wanted to find out who killed gaybys and why

I actually read the complete Finding story over the weekend.

I was in stitches :D

crossbob wrote:
> Lipe wrote:
> "The web site you are trying to access has exceeded its
> allocated
> data transfer"
>
> Nooooooooo! The website is down! Now we'll never know what happened
> to Jay :(
>
> No it hasn't

It was when I wrote that message.

I like the bit where he gets shot twice and then seems to forget about the two bullets in his body for the rest of the story.

Let it be known that me and Dolores have been RAVING over cross' work for MONTHS

I liked the bit when baggage got spelt right, then there was a massive explosion. Then this 13-year-old-boy with a credit card fought off the bad guys with a painball gun, then managed to learn how to drive a motorbike and then a car in seconds.

Blood still dripping from his head he just layed there cold and unconcuse!

I wrote an alternative Part 2:

He walked slowy over to the body with the mud still sqelching under his shoes. He looked down at the body. To see if he could recognize the body. But then he saw a light shining down on him. He looked up it was a Police Officer. "Hey what are you doing down there"shouted the Police Officer.

"''nothing!" Thundered Jay"Ijust found the body here!" Jay stormed.

okay kid' said the Police Officer. he called for baccup on his radio and he took Jay home to hsi mum who said Jay! " Why is there mud on your shooes

THE END>

'The man ran over and grabbed hold of his throat Jay was choking he tried to press the button to call the nurse'











.......

Gold.

everything went into slow-mo