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I really liked his stories, all the cliffhangers and stuff. Plus it's nothing but action! There's always people dying and getting chased!
They seem to remind me of that girl on American Pie. "I shot him but he shot me back and we shot together it was really funny I like shooting."
They seem to remind me of that girl on American Pie. "I shot him but he shot me back and we shot together it was really funny I like shooting."
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The more you put on your "I'm only doing this to annoy you and amuse me!" face, the less believable it is.
and Nash, you're missing the point.
Nathan Barley's on in a min.
Hope you're posting during the ads too.
Hope you're posting during the ads too.
Why won't you just accept how dire you are and go away?
Oh, and:
Hedfix wrote:
> anyway I was just giving you constructive criticism on your life as a
> whole.
"1 Hedfix 1184 31400"
Oh, and:
Hedfix wrote:
> anyway I was just giving you constructive criticism on your life as a
> whole.
"1 Hedfix 1184 31400"
*Looks really serious*
Yus.
anyway I was just giving you constructive criticism on your life as a whole.
Yus.
anyway I was just giving you constructive criticism on your life as a whole.
It's called constructive criticism (well, that last post was anyway). I was under the impression that giving/receiving constructive criticism was the purpose of this forum.
And digs at personal wealth? That's just sad.
And digs at personal wealth? That's just sad.
Don't worry Crossbob, Memo's one of these people we like to call 'analy retentive'.
Especially if we spell it wrong.
Memo can't afford many fun things so he decided to have a go at you this evening, if you would like to combat this I suggest you carry on as you are by pretending to be an imbecile.
That approach hasn't failed me yet.
and yes that's exactly what I meant.
oh la de da de dody dee
Especially if we spell it wrong.
Memo can't afford many fun things so he decided to have a go at you this evening, if you would like to combat this I suggest you carry on as you are by pretending to be an imbecile.
That approach hasn't failed me yet.
and yes that's exactly what I meant.
oh la de da de dody dee
It affects the reader's perception of a story. The placement of an exclamation mark can make the difference between something being perceived as serious or as a ****take. As a storyteller, you should be aware of the importance that punctuation holds. It can be more important than the words themselves when used correctly.
I just like doing that why you so bothered!
Why do all the titles of your poems/stories have exclamation marks?
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