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People were moaning about swearing in the last one so there no swearing this time
I woke up in a hospital with my heart montier going slowy I hadn't died I was ok I was just badly hurt. Boss was looking down at me. "Oh good your awake mike after two weeks" Said Boss to me. " What i've been alsleep for two weeks" I asked. "Yeah we thought you would never wake up it took them ten hours to get all the bullets out of you but now that man is behind bars for life after what he did to you" answered Boss. "Good" I said happily.
I got up and got out of my bed. "I've gota get out of here and get the Deadheads because they set that man on me" I said. "But you can't your get killed" Moaned Boss. "No I won't I have to do this and you can't stop me" I shouted back. I put on my uniform and ran out of the hospital it was good because my car was still in the car park I went and got in it and drove down the road. I looked down at my body it had a load of badagues on it I ripped them all off and drove down the road. I was gona drive to the Deadheads warehouse. I put on my siren so I could get there quicker. But on my way I got a call. "Chase on sild street people with guns need back up there quick" said the call. I sped there and saw a car going flying past in front of me in landed down on the road I turned right and sped after it. I saw one of the police officers Jack at the side of the road I stopped near him and told him to get in.
"Right when we get near the car you shoot at it Jack ok" I asked him. "Alright then" he said. I got a shotgun out the back and gave it to him. "Now shoot with this ok" I said. He dipped his head out the window and got ready. I pulled up behind the car "Shoot now Jack shoot the tyres" I called. He shot both the back tyres and the car went skided round and fell on to its side it flipped over and smashed down on the road. I got out the car. "Good one Jack that was bloody great" I shouted. I walked over to the car and pulled the man out. "Dad" I shouted
To be continued....
I woke up in a hospital with my heart montier going slowy I hadn't died I was ok I was just badly hurt. Boss was looking down at me. "Oh good your awake mike after two weeks" Said Boss to me. " What i've been alsleep for two weeks" I asked. "Yeah we thought you would never wake up it took them ten hours to get all the bullets out of you but now that man is behind bars for life after what he did to you" answered Boss. "Good" I said happily.
I got up and got out of my bed. "I've gota get out of here and get the Deadheads because they set that man on me" I said. "But you can't your get killed" Moaned Boss. "No I won't I have to do this and you can't stop me" I shouted back. I put on my uniform and ran out of the hospital it was good because my car was still in the car park I went and got in it and drove down the road. I looked down at my body it had a load of badagues on it I ripped them all off and drove down the road. I was gona drive to the Deadheads warehouse. I put on my siren so I could get there quicker. But on my way I got a call. "Chase on sild street people with guns need back up there quick" said the call. I sped there and saw a car going flying past in front of me in landed down on the road I turned right and sped after it. I saw one of the police officers Jack at the side of the road I stopped near him and told him to get in.
"Right when we get near the car you shoot at it Jack ok" I asked him. "Alright then" he said. I got a shotgun out the back and gave it to him. "Now shoot with this ok" I said. He dipped his head out the window and got ready. I pulled up behind the car "Shoot now Jack shoot the tyres" I called. He shot both the back tyres and the car went skided round and fell on to its side it flipped over and smashed down on the road. I got out the car. "Good one Jack that was bloody great" I shouted. I walked over to the car and pulled the man out. "Dad" I shouted
To be continued....
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I particularly liked your descriptive detail.
I particularly liked your descriptive detail.
People were moaning about swearing in the last one so there no swearing this time
I woke up in a hospital with my heart montier going slowy I hadn't died I was ok I was just badly hurt. Boss was looking down at me. "Oh good your awake mike after two weeks" Said Boss to me. " What i've been alsleep for two weeks" I asked. "Yeah we thought you would never wake up it took them ten hours to get all the bullets out of you but now that man is behind bars for life after what he did to you" answered Boss. "Good" I said happily.
I got up and got out of my bed. "I've gota get out of here and get the Deadheads because they set that man on me" I said. "But you can't your get killed" Moaned Boss. "No I won't I have to do this and you can't stop me" I shouted back. I put on my uniform and ran out of the hospital it was good because my car was still in the car park I went and got in it and drove down the road. I looked down at my body it had a load of badagues on it I ripped them all off and drove down the road. I was gona drive to the Deadheads warehouse. I put on my siren so I could get there quicker. But on my way I got a call. "Chase on sild street people with guns need back up there quick" said the call. I sped there and saw a car going flying past in front of me in landed down on the road I turned right and sped after it. I saw one of the police officers Jack at the side of the road I stopped near him and told him to get in.
"Right when we get near the car you shoot at it Jack ok" I asked him. "Alright then" he said. I got a shotgun out the back and gave it to him. "Now shoot with this ok" I said. He dipped his head out the window and got ready. I pulled up behind the car "Shoot now Jack shoot the tyres" I called. He shot both the back tyres and the car went skided round and fell on to its side it flipped over and smashed down on the road. I got out the car. "Good one Jack that was bloody great" I shouted. I walked over to the car and pulled the man out. "Dad" I shouted
To be continued....
I woke up in a hospital with my heart montier going slowy I hadn't died I was ok I was just badly hurt. Boss was looking down at me. "Oh good your awake mike after two weeks" Said Boss to me. " What i've been alsleep for two weeks" I asked. "Yeah we thought you would never wake up it took them ten hours to get all the bullets out of you but now that man is behind bars for life after what he did to you" answered Boss. "Good" I said happily.
I got up and got out of my bed. "I've gota get out of here and get the Deadheads because they set that man on me" I said. "But you can't your get killed" Moaned Boss. "No I won't I have to do this and you can't stop me" I shouted back. I put on my uniform and ran out of the hospital it was good because my car was still in the car park I went and got in it and drove down the road. I looked down at my body it had a load of badagues on it I ripped them all off and drove down the road. I was gona drive to the Deadheads warehouse. I put on my siren so I could get there quicker. But on my way I got a call. "Chase on sild street people with guns need back up there quick" said the call. I sped there and saw a car going flying past in front of me in landed down on the road I turned right and sped after it. I saw one of the police officers Jack at the side of the road I stopped near him and told him to get in.
"Right when we get near the car you shoot at it Jack ok" I asked him. "Alright then" he said. I got a shotgun out the back and gave it to him. "Now shoot with this ok" I said. He dipped his head out the window and got ready. I pulled up behind the car "Shoot now Jack shoot the tyres" I called. He shot both the back tyres and the car went skided round and fell on to its side it flipped over and smashed down on the road. I got out the car. "Good one Jack that was bloody great" I shouted. I walked over to the car and pulled the man out. "Dad" I shouted
To be continued....
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