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> Dolores I wrote:
> Hold on, your main characters dead and its to be continued?
>
> No hes not actually dead something happens to him.
Ooh, I love stories with a secret twist at the end....
You sir, are scum.
Be creative and find substitute words for the F-word!
I still prefer The Finding, though.
> Dolores I wrote:
> Hold on, your main characters dead and its to be continued?
>
> No hes not actually dead something happens to him.
"Then everything there and was just one thing that had stopped at that thing was my life!"
Sorta implies (once I decyphered it) that "you" have died. Unless it's a resurrection story.
> Hold on, your main characters dead and its to be continued?
No hes not actually dead something happens to him.