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"I try and try and try lol!"

I try and try and try lol and I still can't win one prize on gameaday, any suggestions about my reviews?

Do they suck, have they got a fair chance, are they good?

Thanks sorry if this post annoys you, it's just I wanted some pointers on how to win.

Do walkthroughs have more chances of winning?

I find it easier to put a curse on my reviews or walkthroughs.

Yea I do to but I'm just saying it for future reference.

No problemo, dante, but I think Timmargh was joking. I really doubt that anyone of his status would dare copy a review at the disgraced of being De-Notabled.

Thanks reefer, timmargh can't do anything either because I could report him and say that he is copying my review and I could easily prove it because of the time I posted this and the time he would have submitted the review lol.

dante son of sparda wrote:
> You're writing a walkthrough? then you will definitely win. Am I
> getting better at these reviews though?
>
> I am doing a burnout 3 one now.
> What do you think of this so far:-
>
Well, here's how I would've written/punctuated it:

"Burnout, Burnout, Burnout!

Sorry, I got caught up in the moment. Anyway, this game is even faster than Burnout 2 (is that even possible!?), and it has a massive ammount of gameplay in it. You can unlock a total of 67 cars to go nicely with your garage, go through training, go online and race, or even crash against other people around the world. On top of all that, it allows two players to play on the same console. The radio station, which just happens to be called Crash FM (I wonder why), is often very funny, as the DJ tells you the most obvious ways to crash - e.g. how to get a lot of points in crash mode - just crash. If you played Burnout 2 and thought that was fast, then be prepared to watch Burnout 3 sky-rocket ahead. Also, have you ever wished that a game could have good music in? Well, this one certainly has, from Funeral For A Friend to Atreyu, and Franz Ferdinand, this game has to have one of the best soundtracks that a racing game could ever have."

There :0)

*'Select all'*
*'Copy'*
*'Paste'*

It's all my own work, honest.

You're writing a walkthrough? then you will definitely win. Am I getting better at these reviews though?

I am doing a burnout 3 one now.
What do you think of this so far:-

---Burnout 3: Takedown---

Burnout, burnout, burnout.

Sorry I got caught up in the moment. Anyway this game is even faster than burnout 2(is that even possible) and it has a massive amount of game play in it. You can unlock a total of 67 cars to go nicely with your garage, go through training, go online and race or even crash against other people around the world and on top of all that it allows 2 players to play on the same console. The radio station which just happens to be called crash fm(I wonder why) is often very funny as the dj tells you the most obvious ways to crash e.g. how to get a lot of points in crash mode, just crash. If you played burnout 2 and thought that was fast then be prepared to watch burnout 3 sky rocket ahead. Also have you ever wished that a game could have good music in, because this one certainly has, from funeral for a friend to atreyu and franz Ferdinand this game has to have one of the best soundtracks that a racing game could ever have.

by dante son of sparda.

Yeah it's alright, but you definately need to think about what I wrote for your next review. Also try and tidy up your grammar a bit. Still, we're getting there :0D

Damnit, writing a walkthrough takes a while, heh. Time to start writing Mission 4.

*plays Vietnam whilst writing walkthrough*

well I was stuck on what to type on this one from the second paragraph down lol. Is it okay though?

I think you need to organise your paragraps a little more and make it longer.