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Fri 27/08/04 at 11:39
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"SOUP!"
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I just got a letter from United Press asking my permission (MY PERMISSION) to publish a poem in a collection called Still Life. The poem? It seems to be everyones favourite - An Inner Monologue Of A Teddybear, which goes..

I sit, angle poised, my beady eyes see all
Sulking in dust and waiting for my time to come
The gift that lived for a day before being abandoned on a high shelf
Never to be played with again

Devoid of love, my stitching intact
But I yearn to be battered and bruised though overuse
My stuffing doesn’t spill out at the seams as it rightfully should
It sits neatly inside me

My flimsily stitched limbs, attached
Not amiably dangling off, dog eared and sick stained
I’m not the comfort tool I wish to be, but a decorative prop
In the play known as life

Gift tag still sewn and neat
My fur is thick, not healthily worn away
I bear no scars nor marks of amusement that I beg for
I sit here, angle poised


--- Apparently the poem made it to the final selection stages to appear in the national anthology (which would have got me a financial reward) but just didnt make it sadly. There are only 100 poems in the final anthology and there were something like 10,000 entries - so I didnt do too badly I dont think.

The book called Still Life is availible in October and will be availible from large bookstores or online at unitedpress.co.uk.

Also my poem Politics was published in an anthology this month by ForwardPress - I've forgotten the anthology name, though.
Fri 27/08/04 at 21:24
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"I like cheese"
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Whitestripes DX wrote:
> Don't Take My Hat
> Don't take my hat,
> Don't take my hat,
> Alright I won't take your hat.


LOL!

Quality. :D
Fri 27/08/04 at 19:05
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Great, well done
Fri 27/08/04 at 19:02
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Posts: 11,875
True story:

One of my friends (Matthew Hooper) had a poem published in a book of poems written by school children, they were all about 5-6 years old when they were asked to write them.

The piece?

Don't Take My Hat
Don't take my hat,
Don't take my hat,
Alright I won't take your hat.



A potent metaphor for modern day primary eduction? Or a stupid piece of crap?

Only time will tell.
Fri 27/08/04 at 17:47
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"+34 Intellect"
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My poem was so good that i was invited to a symposium in florida.

Unfortunately no travelling expenses would be paid.
Fri 27/08/04 at 16:36
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Yeah, this happened to me a couple of times.

I too decided to ignore buying the book.
Fri 27/08/04 at 13:27
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"SOUP!"
Posts: 13,017
Thought you'd found a funktabular new organisation.

bah
Fri 27/08/04 at 13:16
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"tokyo police club"
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Short Story Competitions, man.
Fri 27/08/04 at 13:12
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"SOUP!"
Posts: 13,017
Who are the SSC?
Fri 27/08/04 at 12:58
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"tokyo police club"
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I'm just going to have to make do with sending in random crap to the SSC, then, aren't I?
Fri 27/08/04 at 12:57
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"SOUP!"
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If you send them to agents they'll just ignore or reject you mattribute - theres very few places of any real use unless you have a degree or a huge patience.

the BBC have a website that offers lots of critique thats apparently good - I however found it awkward.

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