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Examples: georgy porgy, jorjy porjy, georgie porgie...
2) Remember GTA on the Playstation? Those people dressed in orange doing a konga line kinda thing? When you ran them all over in one, the word "Gouranga" would appear on screen. Now, ive seen this word on bridges too and after no success with google... does anybody know what this word means?
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CLOSING DATE: 31st July 04.
> Georgie Porgie, pudding and pie, (8)
> Kissed the girls and made them cry, (7)
> And when the boys came out to play, (7)
> He kissed them too 'cause he was gay. (7)
In fact they every line is 8 syllables.
> Georgie Porgie, pudding and pie, (8)
> Kissed the girls and made them cry, (7)
> And when the boys came out to play, (7)
> He kissed them too 'cause he was gay. (7)
>
> That is not correct either.
It's fine. An opening line longer than the rest makes the poem start off strongly, before flowing fine.
Kissed the girls and made them cry, (7)
And when the boys came out to play, (7)
He kissed them too 'cause he was gay. (7)
That is not correct either.
> Little Georgie had not a friend,
> He always wanted the day to end,
> He never had anyone on his side,
> So he ended up committing suicide.
Little Georgie had not a friend, (8)
He always wanted the day to end, (9)
He never had anyone on his side, (10)
So he ended up committing suicide. (11)
Syllable balance Wakka. You need to learn syllable balance. Unless of course you were attempting to raise a syllable each line, but even then it doesn't flow and barely rhymes which you were clearly trying to do.
> None of them = winning entry, Wakka... although you may win for
> effort.
>
> :|
Result!
Kissed the girls and made them cry,
Because his lips were made from RAZOR BLADES.
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