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The massive, metal security door hissed to a close behind him, bolts shooting back into place. He walked on, back into the city - pinpricks of blood dappling the dust behind him.
At the slight disturbance in the taste of night, twin guns spun effortlessly from their straps at his side. He pushed forwards, wide barrels ringing the eyes of the girl standing in the shadows - pinning her head back against the concrete.
“Mika.” He nodded a greeting, did not remove the guns.
“Talan, please,” she squirmed against the warm metal. Talan pressed further into her eye sockets - something, blood or tear in the darkness, crept out under the barrel. She stilled.
“Tell me, Mika, where is he?”
“I-I don’t know. Please, let me-”
His laugh cut her off - bitter, lifeless sarcasm razing the night.
He tightened his grip on the guns.
She sighed, “I just wanted to see ...”
“See what, exactly? And for who?”
Her gaze burned past the weapons holding her in place, her mouth an angry line.
“For who? What the füçk happened to you, Talan? You think I’d just sell you out - just like that?” She put hand against his chest, disturbed by its total stillness.
He said nothing - the words unable reach through.
“For me,” Mika said, “That’s who. I needed to know what happened, the truth. I needed to see for myself. But you won’t let me.”
He twisted the guns slightly around her precious eyes.
“No, I won’t.”
The foreign blood, running cold through his veins; the deep, unhealed wounds across face and chest; the harsh glint of new metal. She was not supposed to see this.
“Wait for me, Mika. I won’t be long.”
Two red-tinged bullets hit the wall.
*
In the dull moonglow Talan’s back shone pale, his spine ridged up between the rips in his clothes. Blackened blood dripped down onto the rooftop from tiny round holes; half-formed clots swung from the tattered material of his jacket. His guns stayed at his side
He felt the eyes on him, watching, willing him onwards into the deal.
“This is it,” Talan whispered into the darkness, “Then you let me go.”
From the buildings behind him, a nod spun through the silence.
Talan dropped to the street, the fall nothing, landing in front of his old friend. The man, beyond rank or title, looked briefly surprised.
“Talan? My my, I thought you were ...”
Dead eyes stared out at him, dry and faded.
“ ... I see, very well.”
He pulled on a pair of gloves. Talan shook his head
Small metal spikes crept out of the small, ever-bleeding holes along his back. They curved around his back slowly, unseen. With a small hiss, Talan’s spine unravelled itself.
The spiked metal lines shot through the buildings at either side, arching round inside, towards the target.
The man looked not at Talan but the buildings around, searching the darkness for a familiar shape. He growled through gritted teeth, spotting the shine from an amused set of eyes and a small, glass container he’d held too many times before.
A thousand lines raped the man’s flesh, piercing deep inside every inch of fatty tissue, deeper still to the core. He closed his eyes in the second of peace, then was ripped apart from the inside. Muscle, bone, tendon and tissue streamed out from the silent explosion within, lacing the walls and Talan with envied life.
In the centre, where the lines had gathered, a undefined glow was held. Tinged black at the edges, with a dot of pure white in the middle, the man’s soul hovered above the street.
Talan turned to the footstep above him, on the roof he’d stood on seconds before.
Leytch smiled, nodded his thanks. He held the glass container out towards the lost soul, drawing it tentatively in. He clamped the lid on, tucked the container safely inside his long coat.
“Good.” Talan said, “Now, let me free, let me rest.”
Silent arrogance rained down on him from above.
“Our deal is done, Leytch, let me go.”
Silence again. Leytch again reached inside his coat, pulled out another glass container. Inside, a warm orange glow dimly lit his blank features.
With a massive hand he reached down, dragged something up from beside feet.
He held Mika’s body out over the street by her shattered skull and shook the container slightly, mockingly at Talan.
Dead blood fell from her empty eye sockets.
She stirred slightly, screamed blind agony to the sky.
At the slight disturbance in the taste of night, twin guns spun effortlessly from their straps at his side. He pushed forwards, wide barrels ringing the eyes of the girl standing in the shadows - pinning her head back against the concrete.
“Mika.” He nodded a greeting, did not remove the guns.
“Talan, please,” she squirmed against the warm metal. Talan pressed further into her eye sockets - something, blood or tear in the darkness, crept out under the barrel. She stilled.
“Tell me, Mika, where is he?”
“I-I don’t know. Please, let me-”
His laugh cut her off - bitter, lifeless sarcasm razing the night.
He tightened his grip on the guns.
She sighed, “I just wanted to see ...”
“See what, exactly? And for who?”
Her gaze burned past the weapons holding her in place, her mouth an angry line.
“For who? What the füçk happened to you, Talan? You think I’d just sell you out - just like that?” She put hand against his chest, disturbed by its total stillness.
He said nothing - the words unable reach through.
“For me,” Mika said, “That’s who. I needed to know what happened, the truth. I needed to see for myself. But you won’t let me.”
He twisted the guns slightly around her precious eyes.
“No, I won’t.”
The foreign blood, running cold through his veins; the deep, unhealed wounds across face and chest; the harsh glint of new metal. She was not supposed to see this.
“Wait for me, Mika. I won’t be long.”
Two red-tinged bullets hit the wall.
*
In the dull moonglow Talan’s back shone pale, his spine ridged up between the rips in his clothes. Blackened blood dripped down onto the rooftop from tiny round holes; half-formed clots swung from the tattered material of his jacket. His guns stayed at his side
He felt the eyes on him, watching, willing him onwards into the deal.
“This is it,” Talan whispered into the darkness, “Then you let me go.”
From the buildings behind him, a nod spun through the silence.
Talan dropped to the street, the fall nothing, landing in front of his old friend. The man, beyond rank or title, looked briefly surprised.
“Talan? My my, I thought you were ...”
Dead eyes stared out at him, dry and faded.
“ ... I see, very well.”
He pulled on a pair of gloves. Talan shook his head
Small metal spikes crept out of the small, ever-bleeding holes along his back. They curved around his back slowly, unseen. With a small hiss, Talan’s spine unravelled itself.
The spiked metal lines shot through the buildings at either side, arching round inside, towards the target.
The man looked not at Talan but the buildings around, searching the darkness for a familiar shape. He growled through gritted teeth, spotting the shine from an amused set of eyes and a small, glass container he’d held too many times before.
A thousand lines raped the man’s flesh, piercing deep inside every inch of fatty tissue, deeper still to the core. He closed his eyes in the second of peace, then was ripped apart from the inside. Muscle, bone, tendon and tissue streamed out from the silent explosion within, lacing the walls and Talan with envied life.
In the centre, where the lines had gathered, a undefined glow was held. Tinged black at the edges, with a dot of pure white in the middle, the man’s soul hovered above the street.
Talan turned to the footstep above him, on the roof he’d stood on seconds before.
Leytch smiled, nodded his thanks. He held the glass container out towards the lost soul, drawing it tentatively in. He clamped the lid on, tucked the container safely inside his long coat.
“Good.” Talan said, “Now, let me free, let me rest.”
Silent arrogance rained down on him from above.
“Our deal is done, Leytch, let me go.”
Silence again. Leytch again reached inside his coat, pulled out another glass container. Inside, a warm orange glow dimly lit his blank features.
With a massive hand he reached down, dragged something up from beside feet.
He held Mika’s body out over the street by her shattered skull and shook the container slightly, mockingly at Talan.
Dead blood fell from her empty eye sockets.
She stirred slightly, screamed blind agony to the sky.
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I pictured a sort of Animatrix setting of some kind, with all the gear and ultramodern backdrop you'd expect for that time.
*wipes brow*
Cheers - as with everything a bit new, I wasn't sure if it was any good.
It was actually a joining + expanding of two other very, very short random scrawls from way back when. I imagined it as an Manga short, if that helps anyone reading it.
Cheers - as with everything a bit new, I wasn't sure if it was any good.
It was actually a joining + expanding of two other very, very short random scrawls from way back when. I imagined it as an Manga short, if that helps anyone reading it.
I enjoyed its more cast away exterior to what you normally write, it excited me, and yet you still had all the excellent describing that I'd expect of you, if a little more clear. This, in particular stood out:
> Two red-tinged bullets hit the wall.
Genius, really.
I liked this, felt futuristically spontaneous and proves you can write in vastly diverse styles. Nice.
> Two red-tinged bullets hit the wall.
Genius, really.
I liked this, felt futuristically spontaneous and proves you can write in vastly diverse styles. Nice.
The massive, metal security door hissed to a close behind him, bolts shooting back into place. He walked on, back into the city - pinpricks of blood dappling the dust behind him.
At the slight disturbance in the taste of night, twin guns spun effortlessly from their straps at his side. He pushed forwards, wide barrels ringing the eyes of the girl standing in the shadows - pinning her head back against the concrete.
“Mika.” He nodded a greeting, did not remove the guns.
“Talan, please,” she squirmed against the warm metal. Talan pressed further into her eye sockets - something, blood or tear in the darkness, crept out under the barrel. She stilled.
“Tell me, Mika, where is he?”
“I-I don’t know. Please, let me-”
His laugh cut her off - bitter, lifeless sarcasm razing the night.
He tightened his grip on the guns.
She sighed, “I just wanted to see ...”
“See what, exactly? And for who?”
Her gaze burned past the weapons holding her in place, her mouth an angry line.
“For who? What the füçk happened to you, Talan? You think I’d just sell you out - just like that?” She put hand against his chest, disturbed by its total stillness.
He said nothing - the words unable reach through.
“For me,” Mika said, “That’s who. I needed to know what happened, the truth. I needed to see for myself. But you won’t let me.”
He twisted the guns slightly around her precious eyes.
“No, I won’t.”
The foreign blood, running cold through his veins; the deep, unhealed wounds across face and chest; the harsh glint of new metal. She was not supposed to see this.
“Wait for me, Mika. I won’t be long.”
Two red-tinged bullets hit the wall.
*
In the dull moonglow Talan’s back shone pale, his spine ridged up between the rips in his clothes. Blackened blood dripped down onto the rooftop from tiny round holes; half-formed clots swung from the tattered material of his jacket. His guns stayed at his side
He felt the eyes on him, watching, willing him onwards into the deal.
“This is it,” Talan whispered into the darkness, “Then you let me go.”
From the buildings behind him, a nod spun through the silence.
Talan dropped to the street, the fall nothing, landing in front of his old friend. The man, beyond rank or title, looked briefly surprised.
“Talan? My my, I thought you were ...”
Dead eyes stared out at him, dry and faded.
“ ... I see, very well.”
He pulled on a pair of gloves. Talan shook his head
Small metal spikes crept out of the small, ever-bleeding holes along his back. They curved around his back slowly, unseen. With a small hiss, Talan’s spine unravelled itself.
The spiked metal lines shot through the buildings at either side, arching round inside, towards the target.
The man looked not at Talan but the buildings around, searching the darkness for a familiar shape. He growled through gritted teeth, spotting the shine from an amused set of eyes and a small, glass container he’d held too many times before.
A thousand lines raped the man’s flesh, piercing deep inside every inch of fatty tissue, deeper still to the core. He closed his eyes in the second of peace, then was ripped apart from the inside. Muscle, bone, tendon and tissue streamed out from the silent explosion within, lacing the walls and Talan with envied life.
In the centre, where the lines had gathered, a undefined glow was held. Tinged black at the edges, with a dot of pure white in the middle, the man’s soul hovered above the street.
Talan turned to the footstep above him, on the roof he’d stood on seconds before.
Leytch smiled, nodded his thanks. He held the glass container out towards the lost soul, drawing it tentatively in. He clamped the lid on, tucked the container safely inside his long coat.
“Good.” Talan said, “Now, let me free, let me rest.”
Silent arrogance rained down on him from above.
“Our deal is done, Leytch, let me go.”
Silence again. Leytch again reached inside his coat, pulled out another glass container. Inside, a warm orange glow dimly lit his blank features.
With a massive hand he reached down, dragged something up from beside feet.
He held Mika’s body out over the street by her shattered skull and shook the container slightly, mockingly at Talan.
Dead blood fell from her empty eye sockets.
She stirred slightly, screamed blind agony to the sky.
At the slight disturbance in the taste of night, twin guns spun effortlessly from their straps at his side. He pushed forwards, wide barrels ringing the eyes of the girl standing in the shadows - pinning her head back against the concrete.
“Mika.” He nodded a greeting, did not remove the guns.
“Talan, please,” she squirmed against the warm metal. Talan pressed further into her eye sockets - something, blood or tear in the darkness, crept out under the barrel. She stilled.
“Tell me, Mika, where is he?”
“I-I don’t know. Please, let me-”
His laugh cut her off - bitter, lifeless sarcasm razing the night.
He tightened his grip on the guns.
She sighed, “I just wanted to see ...”
“See what, exactly? And for who?”
Her gaze burned past the weapons holding her in place, her mouth an angry line.
“For who? What the füçk happened to you, Talan? You think I’d just sell you out - just like that?” She put hand against his chest, disturbed by its total stillness.
He said nothing - the words unable reach through.
“For me,” Mika said, “That’s who. I needed to know what happened, the truth. I needed to see for myself. But you won’t let me.”
He twisted the guns slightly around her precious eyes.
“No, I won’t.”
The foreign blood, running cold through his veins; the deep, unhealed wounds across face and chest; the harsh glint of new metal. She was not supposed to see this.
“Wait for me, Mika. I won’t be long.”
Two red-tinged bullets hit the wall.
*
In the dull moonglow Talan’s back shone pale, his spine ridged up between the rips in his clothes. Blackened blood dripped down onto the rooftop from tiny round holes; half-formed clots swung from the tattered material of his jacket. His guns stayed at his side
He felt the eyes on him, watching, willing him onwards into the deal.
“This is it,” Talan whispered into the darkness, “Then you let me go.”
From the buildings behind him, a nod spun through the silence.
Talan dropped to the street, the fall nothing, landing in front of his old friend. The man, beyond rank or title, looked briefly surprised.
“Talan? My my, I thought you were ...”
Dead eyes stared out at him, dry and faded.
“ ... I see, very well.”
He pulled on a pair of gloves. Talan shook his head
Small metal spikes crept out of the small, ever-bleeding holes along his back. They curved around his back slowly, unseen. With a small hiss, Talan’s spine unravelled itself.
The spiked metal lines shot through the buildings at either side, arching round inside, towards the target.
The man looked not at Talan but the buildings around, searching the darkness for a familiar shape. He growled through gritted teeth, spotting the shine from an amused set of eyes and a small, glass container he’d held too many times before.
A thousand lines raped the man’s flesh, piercing deep inside every inch of fatty tissue, deeper still to the core. He closed his eyes in the second of peace, then was ripped apart from the inside. Muscle, bone, tendon and tissue streamed out from the silent explosion within, lacing the walls and Talan with envied life.
In the centre, where the lines had gathered, a undefined glow was held. Tinged black at the edges, with a dot of pure white in the middle, the man’s soul hovered above the street.
Talan turned to the footstep above him, on the roof he’d stood on seconds before.
Leytch smiled, nodded his thanks. He held the glass container out towards the lost soul, drawing it tentatively in. He clamped the lid on, tucked the container safely inside his long coat.
“Good.” Talan said, “Now, let me free, let me rest.”
Silent arrogance rained down on him from above.
“Our deal is done, Leytch, let me go.”
Silence again. Leytch again reached inside his coat, pulled out another glass container. Inside, a warm orange glow dimly lit his blank features.
With a massive hand he reached down, dragged something up from beside feet.
He held Mika’s body out over the street by her shattered skull and shook the container slightly, mockingly at Talan.
Dead blood fell from her empty eye sockets.
She stirred slightly, screamed blind agony to the sky.
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