GetDotted Domains

Viewing Thread:
"Something a bit different - A child's story no. 2!"

The "Freeola Customer Forum" forum, which includes Retro Game Reviews, has been archived and is now read-only. You cannot post here or create a new thread or review on this forum.

Sun 25/04/04 at 17:50
Regular
"Light of the world"
Posts: 4,763
Well, One of my earlier child's stories but here it is

Manic McGee
Three miles south
Of a huge oak tree
A tatty young squirrel
Goes by the name of McGee

Was chasing and racing
A feather in the wind
He jumped up and caught it
To the floor it was pinned

A rebel of a rodent
A naughty little fiend
At doing chores and good things
He was so unkeen

His Nana squirrel
Would tut and mutter
Just a glimpse of the pest
Got her in a flutter

No cause could be captured
For the ways he so strayed
Watching the hard work of others
On the grass he laid

Oh, Why, Oh, Why
Mama squirrel would ask
Why won’t he do
Just a tiny task!

Such a naughty young fellow
They would say as he passed
As he took every hazelnut
And ran away fast

None of the others
Would be McGee’s friend
So McGee all alone
For himself he would fend

He would huff and puff
As he chewed on some straw
That wasn’t enough
He always wanted more

For such a mischievous squirrel
Goes by the name of McGee
Three miles south
Of a huge oak tree
Sun 25/04/04 at 18:27
Regular
"SOUP!"
Posts: 13,017
Yeah but he's little and as such symbolised children, or at least makes them relate to him. Just like Incey Wincey spider.
Sun 25/04/04 at 18:01
Regular
"Light of the world"
Posts: 4,763
Paradox: wrote:
> Thats really sad :-( Poor McGee

McGee's a git so it ok!

:)
Sun 25/04/04 at 17:59
Regular
"SOUP!"
Posts: 13,017
Thats really sad :-( Poor McGee
Sun 25/04/04 at 17:50
Regular
"Light of the world"
Posts: 4,763
Well, One of my earlier child's stories but here it is

Manic McGee
Three miles south
Of a huge oak tree
A tatty young squirrel
Goes by the name of McGee

Was chasing and racing
A feather in the wind
He jumped up and caught it
To the floor it was pinned

A rebel of a rodent
A naughty little fiend
At doing chores and good things
He was so unkeen

His Nana squirrel
Would tut and mutter
Just a glimpse of the pest
Got her in a flutter

No cause could be captured
For the ways he so strayed
Watching the hard work of others
On the grass he laid

Oh, Why, Oh, Why
Mama squirrel would ask
Why won’t he do
Just a tiny task!

Such a naughty young fellow
They would say as he passed
As he took every hazelnut
And ran away fast

None of the others
Would be McGee’s friend
So McGee all alone
For himself he would fend

He would huff and puff
As he chewed on some straw
That wasn’t enough
He always wanted more

For such a mischievous squirrel
Goes by the name of McGee
Three miles south
Of a huge oak tree

Freeola & GetDotted are rated 5 Stars

Check out some of our customer reviews below:

First Class!
I feel that your service on this occasion was absolutely first class - a model of excellence. After this, I hope to stay with Freeola for a long time!
Easy and free service!
I think it's fab that you provide an easy-to-follow service, and even better that it's free...!
Cerrie

View More Reviews

Need some help? Give us a call on 01376 55 60 60

Go to Support Centre

It appears you are using an old browser, as such, some parts of the Freeola and Getdotted site will not work as intended. Using the latest version of your browser, or another browser such as Google Chrome, Mozilla Firefox, or Opera will provide a better, safer browsing experience for you.