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Triple threat: Booker T (Joe Dark) V RVD (Da man24) V John Cena (AfroJoe)
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Welcome back to SRW everyone. We are here for an explosion tonight.
All men have similar styles so this should be one fast-paced match.
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“Can you dig it? Sucka?” The crowd go wild as the 5-time WCW champion makes pyro goes off. Booker T (Joe Dark) looking focused, as always. Of course Booker T (Joe Dark) loosing that Hardcore NO. One contenders match last week. He also lost a lot of blood.
“Word Life! This is Basic thuganomics!” And here comes John Cena (AfroJoe) with a microphone at hand.
“Cut my music! Yo Yo. Chill Chill.
I’m up against Booker T and RVD
They are going to be flyin
With John Cena here
They gonna be cryin!
Booker T does the spin a roony
Man it stinks
I bet he goes home and plays tiddlywinks!
And RVD with the five star frog splash
That’s gotta injure
If he misses it
He becomes a big winger.
So this is me, John Cena
Just in case you ain’t got a clue.
By the end of this match.
I will be screaming F U!"
Whoa! Some strong words there by John Cena as he makes his way to the ring area. And Booker T did not like that one bit. He climbs out the ring and slaps John Cena right in the face. John Cena responds to that with a right hand and an irish whip into the ring stairs. Cena chucks him into the ring.
“Cena Cena Cena!” Echo’s through the arena.
*Ding Ding* the ref has called for the match to start. And there is RVD running to wards the ring. He climbs in and delivers a spinning wheel kick to Booker T.
John Cena now, clobbers RVD’s back, forcing him into the corner. Rob Van Dam, Irish whipped from the turnbuckle and only to be thrown into a Round House kick by Booker T.
RVD, picked up by Cena, Irish whipped into the ropes. RVD bounces off and delivers a huge hurricarana to the doctor of thuganomics.
Booker T goes to work on the lower back of John Cena. Rather opportunistic.
Booker T, grabs Cena and puts him in a headlock, and turns it into a suplex. John Cena landed on his head! BAM! Out of nowhere, Rolling Thunder by RVD.
Cena has taken a lot and I mean a lot of punishment in this early going.
Booker T, picks up John Cena and throws him into the turnbuckle, followed by shots to the mid section.
RVD follows that up with a monkey flip, taking Cena to the out side.
Booker T climbs out the ring, takes Cena by the head. And lifts Cena onto the guard rail.
RVD is on the ring apron! SMACK! Rob Van Dam delivers a huge spinning Leg drop to the upper back of John Cena!
The ref starts his count.
1... No movement
2... Still no movement
3... Booker T clambers back into the ring, quite cocky. I expect he expects both the men will get counted out!
4... 5... 6... 7... 8... RVD pulls his body up....
9.... And climbs into the ring
10... John Cena has been counted out! What does this mean? Will this match now continue with just RVD and Booker T.
*The ref converses to the ring announcer*
“Ladies and Gentlemen, the referee has just informed me that this match will continue as a singles match. Therefore, John Cena has been eliminated!”
What! That’s a bad break for John Cena.RVD from behind, almost taking Booker T’s head off with that spinning wheel kick of his.
RVD goes for the pin. Could this be all?
1...
2...
A kick out by Booker T. What resilience! RVD, picks Booker up, Booker T counters, sends RVD for the Irish whip, bounces off the ropes and a spine buster.
Booker T follows that up with a leg drop!
Wahoo! A spin- a - roony by the Book man! The crowd light up!
“Booker T! Booker T! Booker T!” The fans chant. They are really behind Booker.
Rob Van Dam gets up, Booker T with a kick to the mid section, runs to the ropes, and could it be a scissors kick?! NO! RVD Counters! And a face buster! A pedigree like move plants Booker T deep into that mat!
RVD looks at the turnbuckle. Leaps to the top rope. A FIVE STAR FROG SPLASH!
Wait! Booker T got his knees up! Rob Van Dam can barley stand!
Out of nowhere! A scissors kick!
Could this be all?
1..
2...
3..! *Ding Ding Ding*
Here is your winner! Boookkerrr T!
The referee raises Booker T’s hand! Wait! It’s John Cena with that chain rapped around his fist!
Booker T turns around and that steel chain right to the skull of Booker T.
And Booker T is bleeding. That wound from last week as been opened up!
Awww! RVD, finally gets to deliver that trade mark Five Star Frog Splash!
Look! Cena is raising RVD’s hand! What does this all mean? Are RVD and John Cena teaming up? What can happen next week on SRW Eclipse? I cannot wait!
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Please be judgemental. It is the only way I will learn.
-----------------------------------------
Welcome back to SRW everyone. We are here for an explosion tonight.
All men have similar styles so this should be one fast-paced match.
---------------------------------
“Can you dig it? Sucka?” The crowd go wild as the 5-time WCW champion makes pyro goes off. Booker T (Joe Dark) looking focused, as always. Of course Booker T (Joe Dark) loosing that Hardcore NO. One contenders match last week. He also lost a lot of blood.
“Word Life! This is Basic thuganomics!” And here comes John Cena (AfroJoe) with a microphone at hand.
“Cut my music! Yo Yo. Chill Chill.
I’m up against Booker T and RVD
They are going to be flyin
With John Cena here
They gonna be cryin!
Booker T does the spin a roony
Man it stinks
I bet he goes home and plays tiddlywinks!
And RVD with the five star frog splash
That’s gotta injure
If he misses it
He becomes a big winger.
So this is me, John Cena
Just in case you ain’t got a clue.
By the end of this match.
I will be screaming F U!"
Whoa! Some strong words there by John Cena as he makes his way to the ring area. And Booker T did not like that one bit. He climbs out the ring and slaps John Cena right in the face. John Cena responds to that with a right hand and an irish whip into the ring stairs. Cena chucks him into the ring.
“Cena Cena Cena!” Echo’s through the arena.
*Ding Ding* the ref has called for the match to start. And there is RVD running to wards the ring. He climbs in and delivers a spinning wheel kick to Booker T.
John Cena now, clobbers RVD’s back, forcing him into the corner. Rob Van Dam, Irish whipped from the turnbuckle and only to be thrown into a Round House kick by Booker T.
RVD, picked up by Cena, Irish whipped into the ropes. RVD bounces off and delivers a huge hurricarana to the doctor of thuganomics.
Booker T goes to work on the lower back of John Cena. Rather opportunistic.
Booker T, grabs Cena and puts him in a headlock, and turns it into a suplex. John Cena landed on his head! BAM! Out of nowhere, Rolling Thunder by RVD.
Cena has taken a lot and I mean a lot of punishment in this early going.
Booker T, picks up John Cena and throws him into the turnbuckle, followed by shots to the mid section.
RVD follows that up with a monkey flip, taking Cena to the out side.
Booker T climbs out the ring, takes Cena by the head. And lifts Cena onto the guard rail.
RVD is on the ring apron! SMACK! Rob Van Dam delivers a huge spinning Leg drop to the upper back of John Cena!
The ref starts his count.
1... No movement
2... Still no movement
3... Booker T clambers back into the ring, quite cocky. I expect he expects both the men will get counted out!
4... 5... 6... 7... 8... RVD pulls his body up....
9.... And climbs into the ring
10... John Cena has been counted out! What does this mean? Will this match now continue with just RVD and Booker T.
*The ref converses to the ring announcer*
“Ladies and Gentlemen, the referee has just informed me that this match will continue as a singles match. Therefore, John Cena has been eliminated!”
What! That’s a bad break for John Cena.RVD from behind, almost taking Booker T’s head off with that spinning wheel kick of his.
RVD goes for the pin. Could this be all?
1...
2...
A kick out by Booker T. What resilience! RVD, picks Booker up, Booker T counters, sends RVD for the Irish whip, bounces off the ropes and a spine buster.
Booker T follows that up with a leg drop!
Wahoo! A spin- a - roony by the Book man! The crowd light up!
“Booker T! Booker T! Booker T!” The fans chant. They are really behind Booker.
Rob Van Dam gets up, Booker T with a kick to the mid section, runs to the ropes, and could it be a scissors kick?! NO! RVD Counters! And a face buster! A pedigree like move plants Booker T deep into that mat!
RVD looks at the turnbuckle. Leaps to the top rope. A FIVE STAR FROG SPLASH!
Wait! Booker T got his knees up! Rob Van Dam can barley stand!
Out of nowhere! A scissors kick!
Could this be all?
1..
2...
3..! *Ding Ding Ding*
Here is your winner! Boookkerrr T!
The referee raises Booker T’s hand! Wait! It’s John Cena with that chain rapped around his fist!
Booker T turns around and that steel chain right to the skull of Booker T.
And Booker T is bleeding. That wound from last week as been opened up!
Awww! RVD, finally gets to deliver that trade mark Five Star Frog Splash!
Look! Cena is raising RVD’s hand! What does this all mean? Are RVD and John Cena teaming up? What can happen next week on SRW Eclipse? I cannot wait!
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Please be judgemental. It is the only way I will learn.
It just clogs up the match with names that you don't need to read so I don't bother.
Fígó wrote:
> Lipe wrote:
> Also, you forgot to add in the owner of each wrestler in brackets.
> You did at the start but after that you didn't.
>
> I never put the owner in brackets next to the wrestler during the
> match. I only put it at the start, which is all you need really.
That's not what I was told to do.
> Lipe wrote:
> Also, you forgot to add in the owner of each wrestler in brackets.
> You did at the start but after that you didn't.
>
> I never put the owner in brackets next to the wrestler during the
> match. I only put it at the start, which is all you need really.
That's not what I was told to do.
Lipe wrote:
> Also, you forgot to add in the owner of each wrestler in brackets.
> You did at the start but after that you didn't.
I never put the owner in brackets next to the wrestler during the match. I only put it at the start, which is all you need really.
> Also, you forgot to add in the owner of each wrestler in brackets.
> You did at the start but after that you didn't.
I never put the owner in brackets next to the wrestler during the match. I only put it at the start, which is all you need really.
Right, I think GP has said it all pretty much. It was a much better effort from you CGJ, good to see your not using JR and King anymore. Keep trying and you'll keep improving.
Also, you forgot to add in the owner of each wrestler in brackets. You did at the start but after that you didn't.
Also, you forgot to add in the owner of each wrestler in brackets. You did at the start but after that you didn't.
That was quite a good match with great ideas although you could have extended the match a little more and have more damage done to Cena.
Good win for the Book Man but what will happen with RVD and Cena. *wonders*
Good win for the Book Man but what will happen with RVD and Cena. *wonders*
Okay, what you have there is pretty good, except it's pretty short. There was not really enough action for me to buy the 10 count elimination of Cena.
The end was very good. You started a possible feud and created a possible new team, although I'm sure the fact that RVD is a heel and Cena is a face might complicate things, but that might be my fault as I made a guess as to what Cena was, either heel or face.
What I would suggest is that you increase your paragraph sizes to 3 or 4 lines on Word, focus on visualising the flow of the entire match and make your Eclipse matches at least a page long on Word and that does not include the introduction and the ending.
If you are having trouble coming up with moves and connecting it all together, email the match to someone and they can give you a few pointers. Don't rush into the match, give it time and thought, jot some ideas down if you have to. There are plenty of matches in the SRW Wrestling topic that have plenty of description and flow in there to help.
So, just concentrate on padding your match out with more moves. If you don't know their moves, make them up depending on their style or look at a wrestling game to give you some more ideas. You could even check some reports of matches on wrestling websites to get some more moves.
There are plenty of ways to get the improvement. You've just got to keep focused and keep plugging away, making sure you get everything you want out of it.
Congratulations to Booker T, although he's got a bit to do if he can overcome RVD and Cena.
The end was very good. You started a possible feud and created a possible new team, although I'm sure the fact that RVD is a heel and Cena is a face might complicate things, but that might be my fault as I made a guess as to what Cena was, either heel or face.
What I would suggest is that you increase your paragraph sizes to 3 or 4 lines on Word, focus on visualising the flow of the entire match and make your Eclipse matches at least a page long on Word and that does not include the introduction and the ending.
If you are having trouble coming up with moves and connecting it all together, email the match to someone and they can give you a few pointers. Don't rush into the match, give it time and thought, jot some ideas down if you have to. There are plenty of matches in the SRW Wrestling topic that have plenty of description and flow in there to help.
So, just concentrate on padding your match out with more moves. If you don't know their moves, make them up depending on their style or look at a wrestling game to give you some more ideas. You could even check some reports of matches on wrestling websites to get some more moves.
There are plenty of ways to get the improvement. You've just got to keep focused and keep plugging away, making sure you get everything you want out of it.
Congratulations to Booker T, although he's got a bit to do if he can overcome RVD and Cena.
Triple threat: Booker T (Joe Dark) V RVD (Da man24) V John Cena (AfroJoe)
-----------------------------------------
Welcome back to SRW everyone. We are here for an explosion tonight.
All men have similar styles so this should be one fast-paced match.
---------------------------------
“Can you dig it? Sucka?” The crowd go wild as the 5-time WCW champion makes pyro goes off. Booker T (Joe Dark) looking focused, as always. Of course Booker T (Joe Dark) loosing that Hardcore NO. One contenders match last week. He also lost a lot of blood.
“Word Life! This is Basic thuganomics!” And here comes John Cena (AfroJoe) with a microphone at hand.
“Cut my music! Yo Yo. Chill Chill.
I’m up against Booker T and RVD
They are going to be flyin
With John Cena here
They gonna be cryin!
Booker T does the spin a roony
Man it stinks
I bet he goes home and plays tiddlywinks!
And RVD with the five star frog splash
That’s gotta injure
If he misses it
He becomes a big winger.
So this is me, John Cena
Just in case you ain’t got a clue.
By the end of this match.
I will be screaming F U!"
Whoa! Some strong words there by John Cena as he makes his way to the ring area. And Booker T did not like that one bit. He climbs out the ring and slaps John Cena right in the face. John Cena responds to that with a right hand and an irish whip into the ring stairs. Cena chucks him into the ring.
“Cena Cena Cena!” Echo’s through the arena.
*Ding Ding* the ref has called for the match to start. And there is RVD running to wards the ring. He climbs in and delivers a spinning wheel kick to Booker T.
John Cena now, clobbers RVD’s back, forcing him into the corner. Rob Van Dam, Irish whipped from the turnbuckle and only to be thrown into a Round House kick by Booker T.
RVD, picked up by Cena, Irish whipped into the ropes. RVD bounces off and delivers a huge hurricarana to the doctor of thuganomics.
Booker T goes to work on the lower back of John Cena. Rather opportunistic.
Booker T, grabs Cena and puts him in a headlock, and turns it into a suplex. John Cena landed on his head! BAM! Out of nowhere, Rolling Thunder by RVD.
Cena has taken a lot and I mean a lot of punishment in this early going.
Booker T, picks up John Cena and throws him into the turnbuckle, followed by shots to the mid section.
RVD follows that up with a monkey flip, taking Cena to the out side.
Booker T climbs out the ring, takes Cena by the head. And lifts Cena onto the guard rail.
RVD is on the ring apron! SMACK! Rob Van Dam delivers a huge spinning Leg drop to the upper back of John Cena!
The ref starts his count.
1... No movement
2... Still no movement
3... Booker T clambers back into the ring, quite cocky. I expect he expects both the men will get counted out!
4... 5... 6... 7... 8... RVD pulls his body up....
9.... And climbs into the ring
10... John Cena has been counted out! What does this mean? Will this match now continue with just RVD and Booker T.
*The ref converses to the ring announcer*
“Ladies and Gentlemen, the referee has just informed me that this match will continue as a singles match. Therefore, John Cena has been eliminated!”
What! That’s a bad break for John Cena.RVD from behind, almost taking Booker T’s head off with that spinning wheel kick of his.
RVD goes for the pin. Could this be all?
1...
2...
A kick out by Booker T. What resilience! RVD, picks Booker up, Booker T counters, sends RVD for the Irish whip, bounces off the ropes and a spine buster.
Booker T follows that up with a leg drop!
Wahoo! A spin- a - roony by the Book man! The crowd light up!
“Booker T! Booker T! Booker T!” The fans chant. They are really behind Booker.
Rob Van Dam gets up, Booker T with a kick to the mid section, runs to the ropes, and could it be a scissors kick?! NO! RVD Counters! And a face buster! A pedigree like move plants Booker T deep into that mat!
RVD looks at the turnbuckle. Leaps to the top rope. A FIVE STAR FROG SPLASH!
Wait! Booker T got his knees up! Rob Van Dam can barley stand!
Out of nowhere! A scissors kick!
Could this be all?
1..
2...
3..! *Ding Ding Ding*
Here is your winner! Boookkerrr T!
The referee raises Booker T’s hand! Wait! It’s John Cena with that chain rapped around his fist!
Booker T turns around and that steel chain right to the skull of Booker T.
And Booker T is bleeding. That wound from last week as been opened up!
Awww! RVD, finally gets to deliver that trade mark Five Star Frog Splash!
Look! Cena is raising RVD’s hand! What does this all mean? Are RVD and John Cena teaming up? What can happen next week on SRW Eclipse? I cannot wait!
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Please be judgemental. It is the only way I will learn.
-----------------------------------------
Welcome back to SRW everyone. We are here for an explosion tonight.
All men have similar styles so this should be one fast-paced match.
---------------------------------
“Can you dig it? Sucka?” The crowd go wild as the 5-time WCW champion makes pyro goes off. Booker T (Joe Dark) looking focused, as always. Of course Booker T (Joe Dark) loosing that Hardcore NO. One contenders match last week. He also lost a lot of blood.
“Word Life! This is Basic thuganomics!” And here comes John Cena (AfroJoe) with a microphone at hand.
“Cut my music! Yo Yo. Chill Chill.
I’m up against Booker T and RVD
They are going to be flyin
With John Cena here
They gonna be cryin!
Booker T does the spin a roony
Man it stinks
I bet he goes home and plays tiddlywinks!
And RVD with the five star frog splash
That’s gotta injure
If he misses it
He becomes a big winger.
So this is me, John Cena
Just in case you ain’t got a clue.
By the end of this match.
I will be screaming F U!"
Whoa! Some strong words there by John Cena as he makes his way to the ring area. And Booker T did not like that one bit. He climbs out the ring and slaps John Cena right in the face. John Cena responds to that with a right hand and an irish whip into the ring stairs. Cena chucks him into the ring.
“Cena Cena Cena!” Echo’s through the arena.
*Ding Ding* the ref has called for the match to start. And there is RVD running to wards the ring. He climbs in and delivers a spinning wheel kick to Booker T.
John Cena now, clobbers RVD’s back, forcing him into the corner. Rob Van Dam, Irish whipped from the turnbuckle and only to be thrown into a Round House kick by Booker T.
RVD, picked up by Cena, Irish whipped into the ropes. RVD bounces off and delivers a huge hurricarana to the doctor of thuganomics.
Booker T goes to work on the lower back of John Cena. Rather opportunistic.
Booker T, grabs Cena and puts him in a headlock, and turns it into a suplex. John Cena landed on his head! BAM! Out of nowhere, Rolling Thunder by RVD.
Cena has taken a lot and I mean a lot of punishment in this early going.
Booker T, picks up John Cena and throws him into the turnbuckle, followed by shots to the mid section.
RVD follows that up with a monkey flip, taking Cena to the out side.
Booker T climbs out the ring, takes Cena by the head. And lifts Cena onto the guard rail.
RVD is on the ring apron! SMACK! Rob Van Dam delivers a huge spinning Leg drop to the upper back of John Cena!
The ref starts his count.
1... No movement
2... Still no movement
3... Booker T clambers back into the ring, quite cocky. I expect he expects both the men will get counted out!
4... 5... 6... 7... 8... RVD pulls his body up....
9.... And climbs into the ring
10... John Cena has been counted out! What does this mean? Will this match now continue with just RVD and Booker T.
*The ref converses to the ring announcer*
“Ladies and Gentlemen, the referee has just informed me that this match will continue as a singles match. Therefore, John Cena has been eliminated!”
What! That’s a bad break for John Cena.RVD from behind, almost taking Booker T’s head off with that spinning wheel kick of his.
RVD goes for the pin. Could this be all?
1...
2...
A kick out by Booker T. What resilience! RVD, picks Booker up, Booker T counters, sends RVD for the Irish whip, bounces off the ropes and a spine buster.
Booker T follows that up with a leg drop!
Wahoo! A spin- a - roony by the Book man! The crowd light up!
“Booker T! Booker T! Booker T!” The fans chant. They are really behind Booker.
Rob Van Dam gets up, Booker T with a kick to the mid section, runs to the ropes, and could it be a scissors kick?! NO! RVD Counters! And a face buster! A pedigree like move plants Booker T deep into that mat!
RVD looks at the turnbuckle. Leaps to the top rope. A FIVE STAR FROG SPLASH!
Wait! Booker T got his knees up! Rob Van Dam can barley stand!
Out of nowhere! A scissors kick!
Could this be all?
1..
2...
3..! *Ding Ding Ding*
Here is your winner! Boookkerrr T!
The referee raises Booker T’s hand! Wait! It’s John Cena with that chain rapped around his fist!
Booker T turns around and that steel chain right to the skull of Booker T.
And Booker T is bleeding. That wound from last week as been opened up!
Awww! RVD, finally gets to deliver that trade mark Five Star Frog Splash!
Look! Cena is raising RVD’s hand! What does this all mean? Are RVD and John Cena teaming up? What can happen next week on SRW Eclipse? I cannot wait!
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Please be judgemental. It is the only way I will learn.