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Not a story, apologies but I didn't have time. Don't know if this could be counted, if not enjoy the poem, if so, meh I won't win anyway.
So I give you 'Down by the mill'
Down by the mill we used to sit
Rolling around in the grass.
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Many an hour would pass
The mill was big and old it was
With huge wings like a bird.
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Never a sound would be heard
The light blue sky just out our reach
Filled with singing birds
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Sheep would graze in their herds
But when the sky went dark and grey
The clouds they start to leak
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Life begins to look terribly bleak
Alec
So I give you 'Down by the mill'
Down by the mill we used to sit
Rolling around in the grass.
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Many an hour would pass
The mill was big and old it was
With huge wings like a bird.
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Never a sound would be heard
The light blue sky just out our reach
Filled with singing birds
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Sheep would graze in their herds
But when the sky went dark and grey
The clouds they start to leak
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Life begins to look terribly bleak
Alec
I like the use of repetition - down by the mill where we used to sit - it's an effective way of make the whole thing more complete.
However, I did struggle at times to make the poem flow - but that's probably down to my own struggles with any peotry.
However, I did struggle at times to make the poem flow - but that's probably down to my own struggles with any peotry.
Not a story, apologies but I didn't have time. Don't know if this could be counted, if not enjoy the poem, if so, meh I won't win anyway.
So I give you 'Down by the mill'
Down by the mill we used to sit
Rolling around in the grass.
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Many an hour would pass
The mill was big and old it was
With huge wings like a bird.
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Never a sound would be heard
The light blue sky just out our reach
Filled with singing birds
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Sheep would graze in their herds
But when the sky went dark and grey
The clouds they start to leak
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Life begins to look terribly bleak
Alec
So I give you 'Down by the mill'
Down by the mill we used to sit
Rolling around in the grass.
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Many an hour would pass
The mill was big and old it was
With huge wings like a bird.
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Never a sound would be heard
The light blue sky just out our reach
Filled with singing birds
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Sheep would graze in their herds
But when the sky went dark and grey
The clouds they start to leak
And down by the mill where we used to sit
Life begins to look terribly bleak
Alec