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"Possibly the worst thing i have ever written"

Feel free to take the p**s out this it is awful, it started with a good line and went to hell after that.

To have a girl like her
It's been like a dream
How much do i love her
She is my queen

But you'd take her from me
If i gave you a chance
I watched with fury
When you asked her to dance

Your eyes can wander
Because it's not your fault
I can stare all night
While you can only ponder
She'll say thanks very much
I say look but don't touch
Keep your hands off my woman

The more i read it the more appalling it get's.

Yep, like Biggles or Borat or someone else said,

"90% of the time I am right, the other 10% I am pleasantly surprsied."

RoJ wrote:
> Pessimism is the best way to live.
> You leave it alone.
> *pokes*
True, alot of more things please you

RoJ wrote:
> If it is so bad then why did you post it?

Indeed, foolish child.

Anyhoo, I really enjoyed it, it may have sounded pretty simple but it rhymed faultlessly. Short but sweet.

When i get round to editing my stuff next month it will be throw out, i do it every 6 months i go through what i have written and get rid of what hasnt aged well.
Sometimes you can get caught up in just having written something that you are blinded as to whether it is any good.

Exactly, a lot of the stuff I write I dislike, a lot of people have prejudices against their own work.

It's not half as bad as you'd have us believe. You're just looking at it critcally as you wrote it.

RoJ wrote:
> If it is so bad then why did you post it?

I thought it was so bad that it was funny, generally the stuff i put up on here is the stuff that isnt good enough.

Pessimism is the best way to live.
You leave it alone.
*pokes*

It's not as bad as you make it out to be, you pessimist.
It's alright, really.

If it is so bad then why did you post it?