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"Final Version of my Composition"

Hurrah etc etc.
Now before I go any further, I must once again make it clear that yes, the melody sounds like it's from some cheap Master System 2 game, and the fact that it is in Midi format doesn't help.

Anyway, this is it -- [URL]http://firestorm.staghosting.com/musique.mid[/URL] (14kb)

Does it sound all ok?
Does it flow alright?
And does the rallentando at the end bring you to the point of orgasm?

Well, probably not.
But please, don't listen for about 10 seconds and decide you despise it - it does gradually build up.
Even if you did listen to the first one, trust me, listen to this one - there's a whole loada changes been made.
And I figured out how to sort the tempo when converting to Midi.
And once again, yes, it's not rock, it's not blues, it's not jazz.

But just blimmin' listen and give me your opinion, not on the melody itself, but whether it does sound alright.
And by the way, the main instrument is a tenor saxophone, and accompaniment is drum kit (obviously) and honky tonk piano.
I know, hard to believe.

Chhaaarrrssss.

That's gd but it sounds like its from 1 of the old classic games for the sega master

DW luvz u!!!!!!11111 wrote:
> The start, like people have been saying, isn't too brilliant. It does
> get better though. Quite catchy...but not my cuppa tea.

Don't worry, not mine either. When I get time, I'm going to try and work on some kind of bluesy or jazz tune, with sax, piano etc. I can sort of hear what I'm going to do with it in my head. It's just a case of getting it written down.
Yes, I can see the excitement in your faces.
...


The end is pretty cool too. Okay, I thought it was the ending, but it wasn't. I
> think it was the middle 8 not the ending.
>
> (Y)

Ta.

The start, like people have been saying, isn't too brilliant. It does get better though. Quite catchy...but not my cuppa tea. The end is pretty cool too. Okay, I thought it was the ending, but it wasn't. I think it was the middle 8 not the ending.

(Y)

By having it in that sound it shrink's it, if you could imagine it on a church organ it would work.

Azul wrote:
> The only time it changes tempo is at the last 5 seconds with
> rallentando, so...
> *Shrugs*

No i'm on about the little flourishes that i actually cant remember now.

Carradiothief boy.

Makes two of us.

Farm boy.

Peanut Head wrote:
> It makes my ears hurt.

At least I'm not a scccccaaaseeeeerrrrr.

It makes my ears hurt.

The only time it changes tempo is at the last 5 seconds with rallentando, so...
*Shrugs*