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Thu 25/03/04 at 18:07
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Posts: 2,774
The blade draws closer.
Scanning for a clean section of flesh between the scars,
The muscles wake and plunge the cold steel downwards.
Here I stand above the reservoir.
My tired eyes are starting to lose colour,
My skin no longer flaunts the health I used to have.
Here I stand above the reservoir,
My Anguish and distress trickles out of me,
down below into the water, poisoned.
It stains each mouth and takes over each heart,
The unsuspecting people take a piece of my pain.
Here I stand above their life source.
My work here is done, All my seeds have been planted.
I can pass away.



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Hmmm...
Fri 26/03/04 at 10:07
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Posts: 1,646
Dark poetry is twisted.
Thu 25/03/04 at 18:25
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"They Call Her 1 Eye"
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Wow that was "po mo...post modern? Ok wierd for the sake of wierd"
Thu 25/03/04 at 18:21
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Posts: 2,774
Why thank you, sheepeh.

I love dark poetry. I love writing it even more.
Thu 25/03/04 at 18:20
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It's good I just don't like dark poetry
Thu 25/03/04 at 18:19
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It's about a bloke who stands above a reservoir (duh) and cuts his-self, spilling his blood into the water supply. Everyone who drinks from it drinks a piece of him.
Thu 25/03/04 at 18:17
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Deep maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
Thu 25/03/04 at 18:07
Regular
Posts: 2,774
The blade draws closer.
Scanning for a clean section of flesh between the scars,
The muscles wake and plunge the cold steel downwards.
Here I stand above the reservoir.
My tired eyes are starting to lose colour,
My skin no longer flaunts the health I used to have.
Here I stand above the reservoir,
My Anguish and distress trickles out of me,
down below into the water, poisoned.
It stains each mouth and takes over each heart,
The unsuspecting people take a piece of my pain.
Here I stand above their life source.
My work here is done, All my seeds have been planted.
I can pass away.



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Hmmm...

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