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the crash

as they walked morning the death
the children held thier brused and cut hands out like zombies
they we becoming the victim
black bags under the eyes
pale white frightend skin
petrfied expresions
blinking rapidly
covering thier faces
or blankly staring at one spot
without blinking, the children walked
step by fightend step
blood pooring from their blood shot eyes
they followed the coffin and went with it
the bus caused one death and meny suisiedes

by $miley

What the hell is a suisiedes is it sushi or something like that. Are you saying they made sushi to raise there spirits. Is it somting about eating roar fish and everythig will be better.

Ms NY wrote:
> Finding Nemo.
> The turtle dude says it.
> Coo coo cachoooo!

*

Doesn't Bill Cosby say it too? :P

I've heard good things about it I must admit!

Galacticdramon wrote:
> PLEASE don't tell me you've watched that...

What?! It's a damn good film!

I've not watched it, I think it was someones screen name once. Yes - that'll cover it up! heh

Ms NY wrote:
> Finding Nemo.
> The turtle dude says it.
> Coo coo cachoooo!

PLEASE don't tell me you've watched that...

Azul wrote:
> If I pay you, will you edit this to remove it?
> Please?
>
> Name your price.
> I'll even throw in a free car.

Pay him Azul, please....

I'm sorry but some of you need to learn that the ability to throw basic sentences together and then spread them across several lines and throw in a bit of disjointed imagery and vague storytelling does not make you poets in the least sense.

Finding Nemo.
The turtle dude says it.
Coo coo cachoooo!

where's "coo coo cachoo" from MsNy?

Well I liked it. A few annoying spelling mistakes, but there's always the Edit button.. ;)
I gots confused towards the end though.