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Sun 18/01/04 at 19:07
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"SOUP!"
Posts: 13,017
Crafting an offering for my white collar God
A shrine made of paper and tipex and ink
The deadline a tidal wave to fall at five-thirty
If my God is displeased I surely will sink
The ten laminated commandments taped to the copier
“For work use only” A disciple has penned
But I am the Judas, traitor of the office
As I photocopy photos I later will send
Expressionless faces buckle under frustration
Clones with key cards and woolly jumpers, they bleat
My heart drops as Romans approach in their chariots
Crushing all spirits within 100 cubic feet.
Mon 19/01/04 at 15:22
Regular
"SOUP!"
Posts: 13,017
Whats the point in posting anything because whatever you post someone will winge about.
Mon 19/01/04 at 12:52
Regular
"That's right!"
Posts: 10,645
Sorry, I don't "do" poems (as in write or read them)

Not bad, though. I think we should have a poetry forum, just to keep it from infecting the rest of us.
Mon 19/01/04 at 12:23
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"Not a Jew"
Posts: 7,532
Shut up Belldandy, you pratt. Do you ever stop moaning?
Sun 18/01/04 at 20:55
Regular
"Gundammmmm!"
Posts: 2,339
Exactly, if I want to read substandard poems and stories then there are a billion internet sites out there for that. Time we had a poems and stories thread to throw all these topics in out of the way.

Being able to use basic imagery and add predictable but last paragraph twists to a story does not an amazingly interesting post make.
Sun 18/01/04 at 20:48
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"Which one's pink?"
Posts: 12,152
Why is it that, because it's a poem, it's instantly regarded as something to be involved in "Intelligent Discussion"?

Bah, it's getting to be too much.
Sun 18/01/04 at 20:44
"Uzi Lover"
Posts: 7,403
Can't we just have a single thread for this pap?
Sun 18/01/04 at 19:07
Regular
"SOUP!"
Posts: 13,017
Crafting an offering for my white collar God
A shrine made of paper and tipex and ink
The deadline a tidal wave to fall at five-thirty
If my God is displeased I surely will sink
The ten laminated commandments taped to the copier
“For work use only” A disciple has penned
But I am the Judas, traitor of the office
As I photocopy photos I later will send
Expressionless faces buckle under frustration
Clones with key cards and woolly jumpers, they bleat
My heart drops as Romans approach in their chariots
Crushing all spirits within 100 cubic feet.

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