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"Little Solace"

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Wed 29/07/09 at 20:44
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"the j-man"
Posts: 68
I can see you stalking like a predator
I've been here before
Temptation calls like Adam to the apple
But I will not be caught
Cause I can read those velvet eyes
And all I see is lies

No more poison
Killing my emotion
I will not be frozen
Dancing is my remedy, remedy, oh
Stop stop prayin'
Cause I'm not not playin'
I'm not frozen
Dancing is my remedy.
Wed 29/07/09 at 21:40
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"the j-man"
Posts: 68
fair enough mate sorry mate
Wed 29/07/09 at 21:32
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"bit of a brain"
Posts: 18,933
i posted it on that website originally mate
Wed 29/07/09 at 21:30
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"the j-man"
Posts: 68
that's a nice poem mate nice really nice but a quick google tells me that you have in fact copied it from another website. what are you, Shaneo???? Reported.
Wed 29/07/09 at 21:15
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"bit of a brain"
Posts: 18,933
Once they came to you, in their shroves
Why they stopped, nobody knows
Their chief departed, their King dethroned
Never forgotten, but now alone

Your trust was broken by hate and spite
Your one chance taken, for not being white
I yearn for you to rise again
Lest you suffer forever, this torment and pain
Wed 29/07/09 at 21:10
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"bit of a brain"
Posts: 18,933
fair play mate great poem
Wed 29/07/09 at 20:44
Regular
"the j-man"
Posts: 68
I can see you stalking like a predator
I've been here before
Temptation calls like Adam to the apple
But I will not be caught
Cause I can read those velvet eyes
And all I see is lies

No more poison
Killing my emotion
I will not be frozen
Dancing is my remedy, remedy, oh
Stop stop prayin'
Cause I'm not not playin'
I'm not frozen
Dancing is my remedy.

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