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Wrote this a while ago, Tell me what you think!
Er, no a lot. Generic.
Has nothing to distinguish it above any other thing like it.
But like you said, its aaages old.
Like I said, I wrote this quite some time ago. 5 years or so, when I was in school
If you did tehse things you are a fool.
If this has been created and sent to a lover - you may get her back
But the '.....' could have been exchanged for paragraphs or commas?? (I know I am not one to talk!)
"wouldn't of did it"
This should be "wouldn't have done it". The have is essential, i changed did to done because it sounds a bit better.
So, um yeah, watch out for the grammer monster.
Wrote this a while ago, Tell me what you think!