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Thu 04/12/03 at 18:04
"Shotgun+Zombie=Mess"
Posts: 379
If I knew what I did to you I wouldn't of did it... I didn't know I was hurting you, or treating you like that... but now it's to late... I've lost you my love, my heart and soul... I will never ever get that chance to be with you once again in that sweet romance... As time goes by I now knew what I did but its to late now and I will suffer all my life becuz of this... If I knew you were hurt I would of stopped but I didn't... I loved you with all my heart and now what do I have? nothing but a broken heart and will never be whole again.... I think I deserve it anyway I never deserved you. You were too good for me and how I treated you was like crap and made you cry and hurting for me ... but I didn't care just only for my self... I never realised it untill now and now I shall be alone once again for the rest of my life....

Wrote this a while ago, Tell me what you think!
Fri 05/12/03 at 16:41
Regular
"gsybe you!"
Posts: 18,825
It's a bit...

Er, no a lot. Generic.

Has nothing to distinguish it above any other thing like it.

But like you said, its aaages old.
Fri 05/12/03 at 16:30
"Shotgun+Zombie=Mess"
Posts: 379
No, I wouldn't treat a girl badly.
Like I said, I wrote this quite some time ago. 5 years or so, when I was in school
Thu 04/12/03 at 18:11
Regular
"Light of the world"
Posts: 4,763
Well that is mushy depressing yet strangely romantic.

If you did tehse things you are a fool.

If this has been created and sent to a lover - you may get her back


But the '.....' could have been exchanged for paragraphs or commas?? (I know I am not one to talk!)
Thu 04/12/03 at 18:11
Regular
"+34 Intellect"
Posts: 21,334
This grammatical error annoys me when i see it.

"wouldn't of did it"

This should be "wouldn't have done it". The have is essential, i changed did to done because it sounds a bit better.

So, um yeah, watch out for the grammer monster.
Thu 04/12/03 at 18:06
Regular
"Puerile Shagging"
Posts: 15,009
Not...for...me...
Thu 04/12/03 at 18:04
"Shotgun+Zombie=Mess"
Posts: 379
If I knew what I did to you I wouldn't of did it... I didn't know I was hurting you, or treating you like that... but now it's to late... I've lost you my love, my heart and soul... I will never ever get that chance to be with you once again in that sweet romance... As time goes by I now knew what I did but its to late now and I will suffer all my life becuz of this... If I knew you were hurt I would of stopped but I didn't... I loved you with all my heart and now what do I have? nothing but a broken heart and will never be whole again.... I think I deserve it anyway I never deserved you. You were too good for me and how I treated you was like crap and made you cry and hurting for me ... but I didn't care just only for my self... I never realised it untill now and now I shall be alone once again for the rest of my life....

Wrote this a while ago, Tell me what you think!

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