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from "Wolves of the Calla" by Stephen King.
What an image. Sums up the characters desperation at the time *perfectly*
> That was lots of lines of text. Stick to one please.
fair enough, but you've got to create an atmosphere - hard to do that with one line.
that's it I'm taking my ball and I'm going home
*reaches up onto bookshelf*
*clears throat*
... the sound became louder. There was only one last choice to make - to keep open or to close his eyes to sights he could no see anyway. He closed them. Kora's smell reached him upon that subterranean breeze as did the sound of her groan. He held his breath. He'd never been afraid like this and his cowardice was a revelation. They - Kora and her captor - came around the corner. Her breathing was tortured. She was dying. Her pain was epic, beyond words .......
from The Descent by Jeff Long
from "Wolves of the Calla" by Stephen King.
What an image. Sums up the characters desperation at the time *perfectly*