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The dude at his desk... (short story)
As I type, I dont know why I type, it doesnt make sence, but what does in this crazy old world. Making you work and work.
He sat at that desk for hours typing, the very sound of hitting those keys over and over again was like white noise. Horrible! He sat there almost for five minutes with out blinking, his eyes were watering now. The heat over powering, the old fan kept on turning and turning producing nothing but stale hot air, like a rhinos breath.
He sat and sat, through sun and snow typing...
...typing for what, no not to be famous for a book or review, and no not extremely important work which had to be finished and he would have a years holiday and pay.
Just typing. Sweat pouring down his face, the keys stained with blood where his fingers had been scraped raw by annoying continious typing.
Enough to drive any sane man mad, but this was no sane man as you can probably gather by now.
For this man had one computer with one desk, for that was all he owned, he was contained in a little room with a little fan and a flickering light, like I said madness.
As I type, I dont know why I type, it doesnt make sence, but what does in this crazy old world. Making you work and work.
He sat at that desk for hours typing, the very sound of hitting those keys over and over again was like white noise. Horrible! He sat there almost for five minutes with out blinking, his eyes were watering now. The heat over powering, the old fan kept on turning and turning producing nothing but stale hot air, like a rhinos breath.
He sat and sat, through sun and snow typing...
...typing for what, no not to be famous for a book or review, and no not extremely important work which had to be finished and he would have a years holiday and pay.
Just typing. Sweat pouring down his face, the keys stained with blood where his fingers had been scraped raw by annoying continious typing.
Enough to drive any sane man mad, but this was no sane man as you can probably gather by now.
For this man had one computer with one desk, for that was all he owned, he was contained in a little room with a little fan and a flickering light, like I said madness.
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Any one else like this weird and mad, keeps changing tense stroy?
GAME WHIZ wrote:
> cool story
and i said i like it cool story just because i said cool story in my reply it dont mean that game whiz is me cus she is NOT
> cool story
and i said i like it cool story just because i said cool story in my reply it dont mean that game whiz is me cus she is NOT
Game Whiz 2002 wrote:
> I like it its cool
Isn't it just, thats what the old Game Whiz use to say. :o
*Crowd mutters*
> I like it its cool
Isn't it just, thats what the old Game Whiz use to say. :o
*Crowd mutters*
I like it its cool
Any one else like this story?
UrkiE-UK wrote:
> the long pause before coughing was because i was struggling to breath,
> then a mysterious person ran into my house and did the heimlich
> maneuver, and the little cough came.
>
> mmm?
Probably an insult to me and my story, but still nice. :D
> the long pause before coughing was because i was struggling to breath,
> then a mysterious person ran into my house and did the heimlich
> maneuver, and the little cough came.
>
> mmm?
Probably an insult to me and my story, but still nice. :D
the long pause before coughing was because i was struggling to breath, then a mysterious person ran into my house and did the heimlich maneuver, and the little cough came.
mmm?
mmm?
now THAT'S spamming....
Gigs wrote:
> Tahnks for all the comments what do you think should I write another
> one?
*cough*
> Tahnks for all the comments what do you think should I write another
> one?
*cough*
spammethat is spam spammer
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