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Tue 14/10/03 at 19:36
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The Zoo Plaque

And here we have a magnificent specimen of a Deamonu Mortarion Slayrendus, or More commonly known as a Summoned Skull-Craver. Captured in London after escaping from a cultist Demonic circle. after devouring their bone marrow. It uses up large amounts of calcium in keeping its large resilient Exoskeleton strong. Not aligned to any particular blasphemous god, it is quite a powerful Demon, easily able to take down even a Flesh-Rhino of Khraz-durn. Note the almost Ape-like slouching, and awfully strong forearms, covered in tiny barbs of bone, used to rend flesh quite effectively. These can be seen often roaming the plains of Africa, where they are often summoned to attack rival tribes, despite their reputation (quite rightly so) of devouring those foolish enough to think they could control it.

Further down the road, are the Deamoni Mortarius Serviquonus, also known as the Summoned Skull-Keeper, a far more docile and obedient variety, and the Deamonu Mortaion Kharnatius, A larger, also more docile, yet far more destructive beast of the same family. Alongside them is more information of the Mortarious family, and the many different marking, including all available information of the Deamonus Mortritaun Juggernautic, the most powerful recorded Mortarious demon ever summoned, allegedly created by the great summoner Naresh Gre’hek, and defeated by the Legendary dragon Arillius Squall.



This is a poem that I am doing as homework, we needed to create a powerful image of something terrible, writing in the style of an imformative zoo plaque.
Thu 16/10/03 at 18:47
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Nice descriptions..though I don't think it could be classed as a poem.

Discuss... ;-)
Wed 15/10/03 at 21:58
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Cheers.
Wed 15/10/03 at 07:53
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A zoo of captured supernatural creatures - I want to pay this zoo a visit :) I'd say you've pretty much achieved what you needed to.
Tue 14/10/03 at 19:36
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"Proffesional Eejit."
Posts: 1,631
The Zoo Plaque

And here we have a magnificent specimen of a Deamonu Mortarion Slayrendus, or More commonly known as a Summoned Skull-Craver. Captured in London after escaping from a cultist Demonic circle. after devouring their bone marrow. It uses up large amounts of calcium in keeping its large resilient Exoskeleton strong. Not aligned to any particular blasphemous god, it is quite a powerful Demon, easily able to take down even a Flesh-Rhino of Khraz-durn. Note the almost Ape-like slouching, and awfully strong forearms, covered in tiny barbs of bone, used to rend flesh quite effectively. These can be seen often roaming the plains of Africa, where they are often summoned to attack rival tribes, despite their reputation (quite rightly so) of devouring those foolish enough to think they could control it.

Further down the road, are the Deamoni Mortarius Serviquonus, also known as the Summoned Skull-Keeper, a far more docile and obedient variety, and the Deamonu Mortaion Kharnatius, A larger, also more docile, yet far more destructive beast of the same family. Alongside them is more information of the Mortarious family, and the many different marking, including all available information of the Deamonus Mortritaun Juggernautic, the most powerful recorded Mortarious demon ever summoned, allegedly created by the great summoner Naresh Gre’hek, and defeated by the Legendary dragon Arillius Squall.



This is a poem that I am doing as homework, we needed to create a powerful image of something terrible, writing in the style of an imformative zoo plaque.

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