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"What are my true feelings?"

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Wed 18/03/09 at 18:49
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I have been wanting to write a poem for you. I've been thinking really hard as to what I could say to describe you; to describe the feelings I have for you. It has been eating away at me for a long time. Although, I have realised that this is not the way. Everytime I think of something to write or say, it just feels so.... so.... superficial. I now know that I can't simply just throw around a few passionate phrases and try to decide how best to make you fall in love with me. Anybody could compliment your eyes or your hair, but does that make it seem genuine? No. No it certainly does not. Anything I can think of seems like the compulsary things to say in a poem. Nothing I say or write could capture my true feelings. But, how can I do it then? I wish there was a part of my brain that could scream the answers to me right now, but I am left with nothing. Why do you have to be.... you?
Mon 20/07/09 at 18:37
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"Seek and know"
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Do it. Do it. Do it. And see where you go.
Mon 01/06/09 at 15:08
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Warhunt wrote:
> Marink wrote:
> *General poem post*
>
> Wow. Who would have thought Freeola could inspire such feelings?

It's the turquoise that does it.
Mon 01/06/09 at 14:50
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"Freeola Ltd"
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Marink wrote:
> *General poem post*

Wow. Who would have thought Freeola could inspire such feelings? :D

And I'm sure this was meant to go into the writings section, so I will move it there
Fri 29/05/09 at 00:10
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"How Ironic"
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That was beautiful man :')
Wed 18/03/09 at 18:49
Regular
"What's basketball?"
Posts: 379
I have been wanting to write a poem for you. I've been thinking really hard as to what I could say to describe you; to describe the feelings I have for you. It has been eating away at me for a long time. Although, I have realised that this is not the way. Everytime I think of something to write or say, it just feels so.... so.... superficial. I now know that I can't simply just throw around a few passionate phrases and try to decide how best to make you fall in love with me. Anybody could compliment your eyes or your hair, but does that make it seem genuine? No. No it certainly does not. Anything I can think of seems like the compulsary things to say in a poem. Nothing I say or write could capture my true feelings. But, how can I do it then? I wish there was a part of my brain that could scream the answers to me right now, but I am left with nothing. Why do you have to be.... you?

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