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Our Song
They are playing our song
The reasons lost in memory
Anthem of lost youth
Haunting, graceful melody
I feel you standing near, as then
Your face, in mind ,unaged.
your breath lightly caressing me
Open eyes now, truth ablaze.
They are playing our song
The reasons lost in memory
Anthem of lost youth
Haunting, graceful melody
I feel you standing near, as then
Your face, in mind ,unaged.
your breath lightly caressing me
Open eyes now, truth ablaze.
Misplaced youth?
Bitter sweet poem Ros, though it seemed less emotive than the others.
Bitter sweet poem Ros, though it seemed less emotive than the others.
The two "lost" words close together didn't quite sit right, but other than that I liked it. I prefer minimal poetry to over-wordy poetry.
Phooy your just saying that after last time.
I've just written another, should I post that in here too?
I've just written another, should I post that in here too?
It's not pish
:)
:)
Our Song
They are playing our song
The reasons lost in memory
Anthem of lost youth
Haunting, graceful melody
I feel you standing near, as then
Your face, in mind ,unaged.
your breath lightly caressing me
Open eyes now, truth ablaze.
They are playing our song
The reasons lost in memory
Anthem of lost youth
Haunting, graceful melody
I feel you standing near, as then
Your face, in mind ,unaged.
your breath lightly caressing me
Open eyes now, truth ablaze.