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"Iraq Poem"

Just something I wrote, um yeah.

A bullet through an arm like a knife through butter
Snipers on the rooftops and dead soldiers in the gutter
The tanks are rolling forth and back
They’re here to liberate Iraq
The stars and stripes are flying high
Saddam, lay down your rifle or die
You are the worlds most wanted man
The next knock on your door will be Uncle Sam
The bullets coming, one by one
Leap out of bed and grab your gun
Here ends your fearful dictation
Iraq is now a free nation

Sorry, rephrase that last line.
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It wasn't good.
Sorry, gah.
It was crap.

gamezfreak wrote:
> Thats one hell of a good poem Kyz22, I enjoyed reading everyline of
> that. Superbly written.

5 Words.

Faaarrr too over the top.
It wasn't that good, Christ.

Don't be fooled by the bombs that I got
I'm still (I'm still) Saddam from Iraq

*Slap*

Me? And IB?

Compared? Linked?

This is my reply:

!?!?!?!?

a poem.
another poem.

Cheers gamezfreak :-D

Seeing as no-one complimented you on your poem, I feel its suitable to say now........

Thats one hell of a good poem Kyz22, I enjoyed reading everyline of that. Superbly written.

"Whats a T.S. Elliot"

The youth of today...tsk.

Kyz22 wrote:
-----> I guess they are a 'famous' poet. Gah!

I wont say anything, but you might want to get that of screen before Memorandum or Insane Bartender see's it!