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Hi,
Like many people here, I would like to write about games in the future as a job. So I was just wondering if you could tell me what you think of my review.
I posted it in the Nintendo Forum (http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=74236&forumid=132), so could you tell me what you think?
I know I've got a long way to go if I do want toget a job writing game reviews, but I'm only 14 and hopefully, I'll be able to get better.
Just a few questions, do you think I will be good enough and, if not, how could I improve?
Thanks everyone.
Like many people here, I would like to write about games in the future as a job. So I was just wondering if you could tell me what you think of my review.
I posted it in the Nintendo Forum (http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=74236&forumid=132), so could you tell me what you think?
I know I've got a long way to go if I do want toget a job writing game reviews, but I'm only 14 and hopefully, I'll be able to get better.
Just a few questions, do you think I will be good enough and, if not, how could I improve?
Thanks everyone.
But I hate FOG Chat...
Anyway, this is about my life, and it's in the Life forum, so nerrr :-P
Anyway, this is about my life, and it's in the Life forum, so nerrr :-P
Rickoss wrote:
> I tried to find bad points, like I always do, all I could find is that
> FPS fans won't like it.
Just be a bit more objective. Not everything is 'fantastically brilliant', try and really explain what's so new and special.
> Oh and it's not in the wrong forum. If I posted the review in this
> forum, it'd be in the wrong forum, but I want the people who visit
> here often to give me their opinion. So it is you who is the moron,
> Mr. Blokey. :-P
No, you're asking for opinions on a game review. So it should be in FOG, or nowhere at all (attention seeker).
Hah!
> I tried to find bad points, like I always do, all I could find is that
> FPS fans won't like it.
Just be a bit more objective. Not everything is 'fantastically brilliant', try and really explain what's so new and special.
> Oh and it's not in the wrong forum. If I posted the review in this
> forum, it'd be in the wrong forum, but I want the people who visit
> here often to give me their opinion. So it is you who is the moron,
> Mr. Blokey. :-P
No, you're asking for opinions on a game review. So it should be in FOG, or nowhere at all (attention seeker).
Hah!
El Blokey wrote:
> Seems a bit too enthusiastic. "Ooh this game is the bestest
> ooh" kind of thing...but other from some other minor niggles like
> too much comma usage, it's a good base. Maybe try writing for some
> internet sites first?
I tried to find bad points, like I always do, all I could find is that FPS fans won't like it.
Oh and it's not in the wrong forum. If I posted the review in this forum, it'd be in the wrong forum, but I want the people who visit here often to give me their opinion. So it is you who is the moron, Mr. Blokey. :-P
> Seems a bit too enthusiastic. "Ooh this game is the bestest
> ooh" kind of thing...but other from some other minor niggles like
> too much comma usage, it's a good base. Maybe try writing for some
> internet sites first?
I tried to find bad points, like I always do, all I could find is that FPS fans won't like it.
Oh and it's not in the wrong forum. If I posted the review in this forum, it'd be in the wrong forum, but I want the people who visit here often to give me their opinion. So it is you who is the moron, Mr. Blokey. :-P
Oh yes, and:
WRONG FORUM, MORON
WRONG FORUM, MORON
Seems a bit too enthusiastic. "Ooh this game is the bestest ooh" kind of thing...but other from some other minor niggles like too much comma usage, it's a good base. Maybe try writing for some internet sites first?
Cheers :-)
I'll have to just keep trying.
I'll have to just keep trying.
You're only 14? I always thought you were like 18, 19.
It's a very good review, yeah you could just make it.
:-)
It's a very good review, yeah you could just make it.
:-)
Hi,
Like many people here, I would like to write about games in the future as a job. So I was just wondering if you could tell me what you think of my review.
I posted it in the Nintendo Forum (http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=74236&forumid=132), so could you tell me what you think?
I know I've got a long way to go if I do want toget a job writing game reviews, but I'm only 14 and hopefully, I'll be able to get better.
Just a few questions, do you think I will be good enough and, if not, how could I improve?
Thanks everyone.
Like many people here, I would like to write about games in the future as a job. So I was just wondering if you could tell me what you think of my review.
I posted it in the Nintendo Forum (http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=74236&forumid=132), so could you tell me what you think?
I know I've got a long way to go if I do want toget a job writing game reviews, but I'm only 14 and hopefully, I'll be able to get better.
Just a few questions, do you think I will be good enough and, if not, how could I improve?
Thanks everyone.