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I'm slowly going. My essence is becoming weaker and weaker. I no longer have a place on this earth, and there's nothing I can do about it.
The Doctor said it best, "You should try and achieve what you can before you run out of time". Time is my enemy now. Before it was lack of money. Every day I'm slipping away from this world.
I handed in my notice last week. There's no room for a dying man in the office. My family should be here for me, yet even they deserted me. What can I achieve now? I feel so helpless. Al that time spent in the gym getting fit, improvin my body, working on my muscles- now they're going to erode anyway. Where'd this virus come from anyway?
Then the phone rang.
I nearly collapsed. I had been mixed up with another patient.
That makes everything worse. My life will not end, yet it already has. No family, no job, no nothing. I'm ruined, game over, the end of the line.
Maybe I should really catch the virus…
The Doctor said it best, "You should try and achieve what you can before you run out of time". Time is my enemy now. Before it was lack of money. Every day I'm slipping away from this world.
I handed in my notice last week. There's no room for a dying man in the office. My family should be here for me, yet even they deserted me. What can I achieve now? I feel so helpless. Al that time spent in the gym getting fit, improvin my body, working on my muscles- now they're going to erode anyway. Where'd this virus come from anyway?
Then the phone rang.
I nearly collapsed. I had been mixed up with another patient.
That makes everything worse. My life will not end, yet it already has. No family, no job, no nothing. I'm ruined, game over, the end of the line.
Maybe I should really catch the virus…
I'm slowly going. My essence is becoming weaker and weaker. I no longer have a place on this earth, and there's nothing I can do about it.
The Doctor said it best, "You should try and achieve what you can before you run out of time". Time is my enemy now. Before it was lack of money. Every day I'm slipping away from this world.
I handed in my notice last week. There's no room for a dying man in the office. My family should be here for me, yet even they deserted me. What can I achieve now? I feel so helpless. Al that time spent in the gym getting fit, improvin my body, working on my muscles- now they're going to erode anyway. Where'd this virus come from anyway?
Then the phone rang.
I nearly collapsed. I had been mixed up with another patient.
That makes everything worse. My life will not end, yet it already has. No family, no job, no nothing. I'm ruined, game over, the end of the line.
Maybe I should really catch the virus…
The Doctor said it best, "You should try and achieve what you can before you run out of time". Time is my enemy now. Before it was lack of money. Every day I'm slipping away from this world.
I handed in my notice last week. There's no room for a dying man in the office. My family should be here for me, yet even they deserted me. What can I achieve now? I feel so helpless. Al that time spent in the gym getting fit, improvin my body, working on my muscles- now they're going to erode anyway. Where'd this virus come from anyway?
Then the phone rang.
I nearly collapsed. I had been mixed up with another patient.
That makes everything worse. My life will not end, yet it already has. No family, no job, no nothing. I'm ruined, game over, the end of the line.
Maybe I should really catch the virus…
Nice, short piece.
Cool, nice little post there.
A short short story. Nice.
Funnily enough I've just eaten some microchips - the new ones that are crispy like MacDonalds french fries.
Funnily enough I've just eaten some microchips - the new ones that are crispy like MacDonalds french fries.
Nicely done. {:)
Is there going to be a second part? Where you murder the doctor responsible for the mix up, and then baracade yourself in the clinic taking a two luscious nurses hostage, and then in the stand off you undress the nurses and.... Better stop there.
short, simple and amusing. i like it.
Nice post. Even if I am too thick yo understand it...
Thanks for all the replies. :)