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Mon 24/03/03 at 22:16
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Posts: 787
As I stare at the bleakness of the padded walls,
I wonder what I'm doing here,
I did nothing; there is nothing wrong with me,
Yet they tell me I'm crazy.

Stop that screaming. Stop.
I've had enough of your abuse, kill me.

The padded walls develop a shadowy pattern,
It resembles a face, a screaming man.
He taunts me, as I continue to fist the wall,
My hands inflame, for mercy

He screams louder, as I hit harder.
A tear rolls down my shattered face,

I look at my hands,
Two bruises in the centre
I watch from above as my mind enters a state of disorientation.
From the centre of my hands, I bleed...

Two rusty impediments, centralised, in my flesh
I wonder.

Stop screaming, I need to concentrate.

I fall to the floor, as I stare at the nails left in my hands
I laugh so hysterically, I lose consciousness

Kill me, while I still no I'm alive
I exclaim...
Wed 26/03/03 at 21:05
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"sdomehtongng"
Posts: 23,695
I liked that.

Nice one.
Wed 26/03/03 at 20:57
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"QPR 1974"
Posts: 2,539
pop
Mon 24/03/03 at 22:24
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"QPR 1974"
Posts: 2,539
Thanks very much.

One day soon, when you least expect it, you will find a story written by me.

Some day...

I have a few ideas, so just wait and see.

Not like tomorrow or anything, like. But some day :-)
Mon 24/03/03 at 22:21
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"Hmmm....."
Posts: 12,243
Oy, you, ever decided becoming a writer?

Ive noticed many of your posts recently, all of which are to a high standard... even if they are quite sick sometimes.

You write brilliantly and the content is spot on. How about you write a few stories to keep us entertained.

Well done, keep it up.

:o)
Mon 24/03/03 at 22:17
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"Omnipresent"
Posts: 1,646
But in a cool way.
Mon 24/03/03 at 22:17
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"Omnipresent"
Posts: 1,646
You're more ****** up than I am.
Mon 24/03/03 at 22:16
Regular
"QPR 1974"
Posts: 2,539
As I stare at the bleakness of the padded walls,
I wonder what I'm doing here,
I did nothing; there is nothing wrong with me,
Yet they tell me I'm crazy.

Stop that screaming. Stop.
I've had enough of your abuse, kill me.

The padded walls develop a shadowy pattern,
It resembles a face, a screaming man.
He taunts me, as I continue to fist the wall,
My hands inflame, for mercy

He screams louder, as I hit harder.
A tear rolls down my shattered face,

I look at my hands,
Two bruises in the centre
I watch from above as my mind enters a state of disorientation.
From the centre of my hands, I bleed...

Two rusty impediments, centralised, in my flesh
I wonder.

Stop screaming, I need to concentrate.

I fall to the floor, as I stare at the nails left in my hands
I laugh so hysterically, I lose consciousness

Kill me, while I still no I'm alive
I exclaim...

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