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I wandered lonely as a cloud,
and then began to shout outloud,
they didn't like what I had to say,
so people came and took me away.
and then began to shout outloud,
they didn't like what I had to say,
so people came and took me away.
I'm thinking 'aloud' would work better than outloud (which isn't a word as far as I'm aware).
thrilling
edit: i always wondered what happened to ya anyways.. lol
edit: i always wondered what happened to ya anyways.. lol
I wandered lonely as a cloud,
and then began to shout outloud,
they didn't like what I had to say,
so people came and took me away.
and then began to shout outloud,
they didn't like what I had to say,
so people came and took me away.