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Hey folks, I would have liked a little more feedback on some of my stories that were originally posted in 'Life' over January. Constructive criticism, if you have the time.
Let me known what you thought of the characters, any parts you particularly enjoyed, anything you felt didn't work, things like that I'd really appreciate.
To save you the effort of finding them, and me the effort of posting them all here, here are the URL's, remove the space after the /
"There Is no Spoon"
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66658&forumid=423
"Fire Disaster"
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66842&forumid=423
The Maze: I wonder if this happens to a lot of people
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66935&forumid=423
Lost Love
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66735&forumid=423
Cubicle 3
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66421&forumid=423
New Years Day
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=65274&forumid=423
So if you have any comments... :o)
Let me known what you thought of the characters, any parts you particularly enjoyed, anything you felt didn't work, things like that I'd really appreciate.
To save you the effort of finding them, and me the effort of posting them all here, here are the URL's, remove the space after the /
"There Is no Spoon"
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66658&forumid=423
"Fire Disaster"
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66842&forumid=423
The Maze: I wonder if this happens to a lot of people
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66935&forumid=423
Lost Love
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66735&forumid=423
Cubicle 3
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66421&forumid=423
New Years Day
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=65274&forumid=423
So if you have any comments... :o)
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Hey folks, I would have liked a little more feedback on some of my stories that were originally posted in 'Life' over January. Constructive criticism, if you have the time.
Let me known what you thought of the characters, any parts you particularly enjoyed, anything you felt didn't work, things like that I'd really appreciate.
To save you the effort of finding them, and me the effort of posting them all here, here are the URL's, remove the space after the /
"There Is no Spoon"
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66658&forumid=423
"Fire Disaster"
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66842&forumid=423
The Maze: I wonder if this happens to a lot of people
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66935&forumid=423
Lost Love
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66735&forumid=423
Cubicle 3
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66421&forumid=423
New Years Day
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=65274&forumid=423
So if you have any comments... :o)
Let me known what you thought of the characters, any parts you particularly enjoyed, anything you felt didn't work, things like that I'd really appreciate.
To save you the effort of finding them, and me the effort of posting them all here, here are the URL's, remove the space after the /
"There Is no Spoon"
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66658&forumid=423
"Fire Disaster"
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66842&forumid=423
The Maze: I wonder if this happens to a lot of people
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66935&forumid=423
Lost Love
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66735&forumid=423
Cubicle 3
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=66421&forumid=423
New Years Day
ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/ display_messages.php?threadid=65274&forumid=423
So if you have any comments... :o)