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Robot Ward: Series 1
It all started on the dusty planet, planet X, Dnyx, the most powerful and cleverest creature living (this is what he thought!) He was rolling on his two wheels to Dusts house; as usual Dust was working on an aircraft what was suitable to take of on the dusty ground, it is supposed to hover in the air like helicopters as well! He was building this because Dust and his farther had wanted to travel around the universe for about a hundred years. Dnyx had been arguing with Dust that he was the most strongest and most powerful creature alive.
“Prove it”, muttered Dust, not knowing what he has just said!
“Alright then, I will!”
Dnyx stood back, Dust followed, zzzzzzzzzz, Dnyx with his mighty powered double laser beams had just burnt Dusts curtains!
“You idiot, they were beige, they are now blimin’ pitch black! Dust went up to Dnyx and used his sharp golden spears to puncture his tire. “LET THE FIGHT BEGIN!” They
both shouted at the same time! ZzZzZzZeEeD! Dnyx used a laser rocket, POOF! Dust got striked in the electric voice box! “Yuz ad itz ows”, (you’ve had it now). ZeeL, ZeeL, ZeeL! Three arrows shot out of Dust, following each other the arrows all landed in Dnyx’s right eye!
“Right, you blinded me, now it is my turn!” TRIPLE BLAZE!!! Dnyx got a direct hit in Dust’s only eye!
“Ha sucker, you are blinded forever, nothing heels triple blaze…”
BANG!
A helicopter missile hit the two fighters…
They woke up, woke up somewhere different, put inside, inside the bars, not outside them…
I hope you enjoyed Robot Ward: series 1, find out what happens next week. (Max. 10 days)
CoOlCaL…
It all started on the dusty planet, planet X, Dnyx, the most powerful and cleverest creature living (this is what he thought!) He was rolling on his two wheels to Dusts house; as usual Dust was working on an aircraft what was suitable to take of on the dusty ground, it is supposed to hover in the air like helicopters as well! He was building this because Dust and his farther had wanted to travel around the universe for about a hundred years. Dnyx had been arguing with Dust that he was the most strongest and most powerful creature alive.
“Prove it”, muttered Dust, not knowing what he has just said!
“Alright then, I will!”
Dnyx stood back, Dust followed, zzzzzzzzzz, Dnyx with his mighty powered double laser beams had just burnt Dusts curtains!
“You idiot, they were beige, they are now blimin’ pitch black! Dust went up to Dnyx and used his sharp golden spears to puncture his tire. “LET THE FIGHT BEGIN!” They
both shouted at the same time! ZzZzZzZeEeD! Dnyx used a laser rocket, POOF! Dust got striked in the electric voice box! “Yuz ad itz ows”, (you’ve had it now). ZeeL, ZeeL, ZeeL! Three arrows shot out of Dust, following each other the arrows all landed in Dnyx’s right eye!
“Right, you blinded me, now it is my turn!” TRIPLE BLAZE!!! Dnyx got a direct hit in Dust’s only eye!
“Ha sucker, you are blinded forever, nothing heels triple blaze…”
BANG!
A helicopter missile hit the two fighters…
They woke up, woke up somewhere different, put inside, inside the bars, not outside them…
I hope you enjoyed Robot Ward: series 1, find out what happens next week. (Max. 10 days)
CoOlCaL…
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Robot Ward: Series 1
It all started on the dusty planet, planet X, Dnyx, the most powerful and cleverest creature living (this is what he thought!) He was rolling on his two wheels to Dusts house; as usual Dust was working on an aircraft what was suitable to take of on the dusty ground, it is supposed to hover in the air like helicopters as well! He was building this because Dust and his farther had wanted to travel around the universe for about a hundred years. Dnyx had been arguing with Dust that he was the most strongest and most powerful creature alive.
“Prove it”, muttered Dust, not knowing what he has just said!
“Alright then, I will!”
Dnyx stood back, Dust followed, zzzzzzzzzz, Dnyx with his mighty powered double laser beams had just burnt Dusts curtains!
“You idiot, they were beige, they are now blimin’ pitch black! Dust went up to Dnyx and used his sharp golden spears to puncture his tire. “LET THE FIGHT BEGIN!” They
both shouted at the same time! ZzZzZzZeEeD! Dnyx used a laser rocket, POOF! Dust got striked in the electric voice box! “Yuz ad itz ows”, (you’ve had it now). ZeeL, ZeeL, ZeeL! Three arrows shot out of Dust, following each other the arrows all landed in Dnyx’s right eye!
“Right, you blinded me, now it is my turn!” TRIPLE BLAZE!!! Dnyx got a direct hit in Dust’s only eye!
“Ha sucker, you are blinded forever, nothing heels triple blaze…”
BANG!
A helicopter missile hit the two fighters…
They woke up, woke up somewhere different, put inside, inside the bars, not outside them…
I hope you enjoyed Robot Ward: series 1, find out what happens next week. (Max. 10 days)
CoOlCaL…
It all started on the dusty planet, planet X, Dnyx, the most powerful and cleverest creature living (this is what he thought!) He was rolling on his two wheels to Dusts house; as usual Dust was working on an aircraft what was suitable to take of on the dusty ground, it is supposed to hover in the air like helicopters as well! He was building this because Dust and his farther had wanted to travel around the universe for about a hundred years. Dnyx had been arguing with Dust that he was the most strongest and most powerful creature alive.
“Prove it”, muttered Dust, not knowing what he has just said!
“Alright then, I will!”
Dnyx stood back, Dust followed, zzzzzzzzzz, Dnyx with his mighty powered double laser beams had just burnt Dusts curtains!
“You idiot, they were beige, they are now blimin’ pitch black! Dust went up to Dnyx and used his sharp golden spears to puncture his tire. “LET THE FIGHT BEGIN!” They
both shouted at the same time! ZzZzZzZeEeD! Dnyx used a laser rocket, POOF! Dust got striked in the electric voice box! “Yuz ad itz ows”, (you’ve had it now). ZeeL, ZeeL, ZeeL! Three arrows shot out of Dust, following each other the arrows all landed in Dnyx’s right eye!
“Right, you blinded me, now it is my turn!” TRIPLE BLAZE!!! Dnyx got a direct hit in Dust’s only eye!
“Ha sucker, you are blinded forever, nothing heels triple blaze…”
BANG!
A helicopter missile hit the two fighters…
They woke up, woke up somewhere different, put inside, inside the bars, not outside them…
I hope you enjoyed Robot Ward: series 1, find out what happens next week. (Max. 10 days)
CoOlCaL…