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"Murdered 10 innocent people, not the full story!"

Bullets fired through 10 heads, blood painted on the damp floor. Bodies scattered, panic sets in heart going like a racehorse emerging the finish line at the races. I hear sirens faintly in the background. I want it all over, but when it is where will I end up. Banged up with low life’s, murderers somewhere I never thought id be. I could move the bodies of 10 innocent people, but I don’t have the strength, I barely had it to fire the gun.

I could run, but how long until the men in uniform get here and I’m surrounded. It’s something I could try but to be honest I feel like I cant move, 10 bodies surround me and I’m in shock I actually pulled that trigger. Why did I even do it I haven’t a clue. No reason for my action at all.

Where did I get the gun and how did I get here, still questions I am asking myself and I do not have the answers.

I drop the gun down on the floor, and drop to my knees. Sirens are there, flashing lights. Men emerging from cars and vans, I’m surrounded. It’s like something I have only seen in the movies. I look about and see people from the town just looking in horror.

Woman pushing a pushchair child crying, screams getting louder surely she cant understand what I have done. My face comes confronted with the blood soaked ground and I close my eyes and just cry. Never ever did I think I would be a murderer and take 1 life never mind 10.

I still hear the child crying, I open my eye’s and there is my son. Must be that time of the morning again. Bang on time, it’s 7:30.

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You know I'm not keen in getting in to dreams. A dream that didn’t seem to have a beginning or a middle just an end. Either that or I just couldn’t recall it when I woke. It was more graphic and horrifying, but I’m no writer and cant express myself so you will have to make do with that.

Anyone else have dreams, that when you have woken you can’t remember dreaming a part of it. Don’t what you dreamed about don’t quite tell the full story. Does'nt fully make sence. I guess we all have dreams like that. Usually i get the full picture though and good at remembering them :P

Just hope its one of these reoccurring dreams. Ive had enough of them!

Heh she isnt in to war films...

Dont think she watches many. She is the type that doesnt like to watch films, especially with her partner if there is a pretty actress on that dont wear much, or wear much for long. She dont trust her partner... actually he has never cheated on her and never would. She has to him though :S some people!

So im sure a war film she would still find something to moan at and not watch it lol

What the ... you and your sis have some pretty horrific dreams ... too many war films :)

Oh :(

Sister was just on MSN saying that i was killed in her dream and had my legs blown off!

What a nice thing to hear this friday morning!

Borat §agdiyev wrote:

> I think you're very expressive :)

Maybe thats why you dream a lot?

I think you're very expressive :)

Thanks Rob :)

I'd like to read a story of yours. That dream description itself was a pretty good read.

Hmmm maybe i should have ago at this short story thing then. I will see what i can do. I was good at english at school. Not to sure about my imagination and creative side to writing though.

Nothing to lose though eh?

Actually, it wasn't badly written at all. I reckon you could write a decent short story if you put your mind to it, and a lot of good ideas do come from half remembered dreams...

pb wrote:
> Ah, but you did. You just don't remember it.

Your probably right :P


> Anyway, I'm sure whatever you're worrying about will turn out
> ok. Hope you can relax a bit more before the baby comes!

Yeah i hope so to, i probably just worry about things more then i should anyway. Think im just a worrier and think the worst of everything.