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A day in Freeola land is often quite eccentric, but this particular day, Saturday 2nd August 2008 was exceptionally peculiar. Machie walked in the sunshine to his Local market in Tewkesbury for some aubergines, when he got to the market there appeared not to be a fruit and vegetable stool today, when he asked a market trader what happened to them. Vexxed the trader said “Well apparently the trader is in hospital with Cerebral embolism” Machie understandably shocked said “how, where did it happen, what is it? Vexxed said it’s a stroke, which is caused by an embolism. This is a clot, which has travelled from the heart or forms a blood vessel leading to the brain to block a blood vessel in the brain and it happened in a Hammock”. “A hammock?” replied Machie all puzzled, “Yes” Vexxed says, “What a swinging couch or bed type of thing?” Machie asks inquisitively Vexxed replies “no no, a Hammock as in a dense growth of trees on a slightly elevated area, however not wet enough to be a swamp, apparently the hammock was on Jubbachainsaws’ land” Shocked Machie rushes back to the post office where Pb works and tells him.
TBC
TBC
Not actually that good, rubbish at stories and actually I needed more words than I thought.. but never mind, maybe I will continue it another time, and as It doesnt really get started I don't think it will win =( and also seen better storys on here.. my story is excatly 200 words with tbc.
A day in Freeola land is often quite eccentric, but this particular day, Saturday 2nd August 2008 was exceptionally peculiar. Machie walked in the sunshine to his Local market in Tewkesbury for some aubergines, when he got to the market there appeared not to be a fruit and vegetable stool today, when he asked a market trader what happened to them. Vexxed the trader said “Well apparently the trader is in hospital with Cerebral embolism” Machie understandably shocked said “how, where did it happen, what is it? Vexxed said it’s a stroke, which is caused by an embolism. This is a clot, which has travelled from the heart or forms a blood vessel leading to the brain to block a blood vessel in the brain and it happened in a Hammock”. “A hammock?” replied Machie all puzzled, “Yes” Vexxed says, “What a swinging couch or bed type of thing?” Machie asks inquisitively Vexxed replies “no no, a Hammock as in a dense growth of trees on a slightly elevated area, however not wet enough to be a swamp, apparently the hammock was on Jubbachainsaws’ land” Shocked Machie rushes back to the post office where Pb works and tells him.
TBC
TBC