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As Mario lay on his hammock, he dreamt about those lazy summer days at Koopa Beach and how he and his friends would ride their 50cc Karts up and down the sandy shores. Luigi, Yoshi, Peach and Toad, all racing against each other for fun. Throwing bananas and eating mushrooms. It was a gay old time they would spend. It had been a long time since Bowser had been seen and Mario quietly thought about how peaceful and relaxing it was now.
No sooner than these thoughts had left than an aubergine came out of nowhere and clonked Mario on the head. Due to his past experience of being a Doctor, he knew there was no cerebral damage and that the culprit who flung the vegetable at him would pay!
In a Flash he reached for his brown leaf and “poof” with a bushy tail and cute little ears, he flew off into the setting sun on what had been a glorious day, to find out who had disturbed him from his wonderful dream.
No sooner than these thoughts had left than an aubergine came out of nowhere and clonked Mario on the head. Due to his past experience of being a Doctor, he knew there was no cerebral damage and that the culprit who flung the vegetable at him would pay!
In a Flash he reached for his brown leaf and “poof” with a bushy tail and cute little ears, he flew off into the setting sun on what had been a glorious day, to find out who had disturbed him from his wonderful dream.
Your more than welcome, i always try to be helpful.....
thankyou for italicizing the words it was very helpful as my eyes are not all they once were
As Mario lay on his hammock, he dreamt about those lazy summer days at Koopa Beach and how he and his friends would ride their 50cc Karts up and down the sandy shores. Luigi, Yoshi, Peach and Toad, all racing against each other for fun. Throwing bananas and eating mushrooms. It was a gay old time they would spend. It had been a long time since Bowser had been seen and Mario quietly thought about how peaceful and relaxing it was now.
No sooner than these thoughts had left than an aubergine came out of nowhere and clonked Mario on the head. Due to his past experience of being a Doctor, he knew there was no cerebral damage and that the culprit who flung the vegetable at him would pay!
In a Flash he reached for his brown leaf and “poof” with a bushy tail and cute little ears, he flew off into the setting sun on what had been a glorious day, to find out who had disturbed him from his wonderful dream.
No sooner than these thoughts had left than an aubergine came out of nowhere and clonked Mario on the head. Due to his past experience of being a Doctor, he knew there was no cerebral damage and that the culprit who flung the vegetable at him would pay!
In a Flash he reached for his brown leaf and “poof” with a bushy tail and cute little ears, he flew off into the setting sun on what had been a glorious day, to find out who had disturbed him from his wonderful dream.