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"Its Time to play the Game", Triple H's music hits and he knows hes in for the fight of his life in this one as he's either got to pin or submit this monster, Kane. Triple H walks down the ramp and enters the ring.
The room goes dark and Kanes music hits. A "BANG" is heard and flames shoot up from each turnbuckle in the ring. Kane walks down the ramp and enters the ring as Triple H stares into his eyes. Kane looks back at him.
The bell rings, signalling for the match to start. The Game and the Big Red Machine move towards each other still staring their opponent out. They start argueing with each other...
Triple H goes for the first grapple of the match-up but Kane shoves him to the other side of the ring. Triple H stands up on one knee, looks up at Kane and realises that he is going to have to use his quickness advantage if he wants to win this one.
Triple H runs at Kane, Kane goes fo the clothesline bu the Game ducks, runs into the ropes and comes back at Kane and as the Big Red Machine turns around, he gets a knee jabbed straight into his stomach. Kane leans forward holding onto his stomach, but doesnt fall down. HHH runs back into the ropes, then back at Kane with a clothesline. Kane staggers. HHH runs back into the ropes again and comes back at Kane looking for the clothesline, but Kane grabs him by the throat. Triple H hits Kane in the head a few times with his elbow and manages to break free from the hold. He bodyslams Kane and then turns around taunting the crowd, but Kane sits up and is back to his feet within a few seconds. Triple H turns around and punches Kane to no effect. He punches him again, but to no effect. Kane clotheslines the Game and Triple H falls to the canvas but he is quickly back on his feet.
Kane underhooks Triple H and forces him back, into the corner of the ring. He irish whips the Game into the opposite turnbuckle. HHH walks back towards Kane in a daze and Kane picks HHH up and puts him over his shoulder looking for the Tombstone. Triple H somehow manages to counter it pushing Kane into the Ref. As the Referee is down, Ric Flair starts walking down the ramp.
In the ring, Kane has the upper hand as Flair walks around the ring and gets a steel chair. As he does this, the Undertaker comes running down to the ring with a steel chair of his own at hand.
Kane grabs Triple H by the throat looking for the chokeslam as Flair is about to hit him with a chair. Taker gets in the ring, looks at Flair and nods!?! Taker and Flair hit Kane on opposite sides of his head with the steel chairs, knocking Kane down to the canvas.
As Taker walks back out the ring and heads to the back, getting a tremendous amount of "Boo's" from the crowd, Flair eventually wakes up the Ref. HHH slowly gets the cover on Kane. The Ref wakes up and very slowly counts;
1
2
Oh, but Kane somehow reaches down and kicks out. Flair looks on at ringside in disbelief as Triple H sets up Kane for the pedigree. HHH is about to pedigree Kane, but Kane back body drops the Game and falls to the floor. Both men are down...
After about 8 seconds, both men are back to their feet exchanging right-handed punches. Kane gets the better of the Game and hits a chokeslam. Kane goes for the cover;
1
2
Flair pulls the referee out of the ring and starts argueing with him. Kane gets up and goes to the side of the ring watching the arguement. As Kane turns around, Triple H hits the low blow, followed by the pedigree. He goes for the cover and Flair stops argueing with the Ref;
1
2
3!
Its over. Triple H cheats his way out of this one. When it all came down to the end, it was the numbers Game which defeated the Big Red Machine.
How will this affect what happens at No Mercy, though?
***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** *****
Thanks for reading,
Jericho15
The room goes dark and Kanes music hits. A "BANG" is heard and flames shoot up from each turnbuckle in the ring. Kane walks down the ramp and enters the ring as Triple H stares into his eyes. Kane looks back at him.
The bell rings, signalling for the match to start. The Game and the Big Red Machine move towards each other still staring their opponent out. They start argueing with each other...
Triple H goes for the first grapple of the match-up but Kane shoves him to the other side of the ring. Triple H stands up on one knee, looks up at Kane and realises that he is going to have to use his quickness advantage if he wants to win this one.
Triple H runs at Kane, Kane goes fo the clothesline bu the Game ducks, runs into the ropes and comes back at Kane and as the Big Red Machine turns around, he gets a knee jabbed straight into his stomach. Kane leans forward holding onto his stomach, but doesnt fall down. HHH runs back into the ropes, then back at Kane with a clothesline. Kane staggers. HHH runs back into the ropes again and comes back at Kane looking for the clothesline, but Kane grabs him by the throat. Triple H hits Kane in the head a few times with his elbow and manages to break free from the hold. He bodyslams Kane and then turns around taunting the crowd, but Kane sits up and is back to his feet within a few seconds. Triple H turns around and punches Kane to no effect. He punches him again, but to no effect. Kane clotheslines the Game and Triple H falls to the canvas but he is quickly back on his feet.
Kane underhooks Triple H and forces him back, into the corner of the ring. He irish whips the Game into the opposite turnbuckle. HHH walks back towards Kane in a daze and Kane picks HHH up and puts him over his shoulder looking for the Tombstone. Triple H somehow manages to counter it pushing Kane into the Ref. As the Referee is down, Ric Flair starts walking down the ramp.
In the ring, Kane has the upper hand as Flair walks around the ring and gets a steel chair. As he does this, the Undertaker comes running down to the ring with a steel chair of his own at hand.
Kane grabs Triple H by the throat looking for the chokeslam as Flair is about to hit him with a chair. Taker gets in the ring, looks at Flair and nods!?! Taker and Flair hit Kane on opposite sides of his head with the steel chairs, knocking Kane down to the canvas.
As Taker walks back out the ring and heads to the back, getting a tremendous amount of "Boo's" from the crowd, Flair eventually wakes up the Ref. HHH slowly gets the cover on Kane. The Ref wakes up and very slowly counts;
1
2
Oh, but Kane somehow reaches down and kicks out. Flair looks on at ringside in disbelief as Triple H sets up Kane for the pedigree. HHH is about to pedigree Kane, but Kane back body drops the Game and falls to the floor. Both men are down...
After about 8 seconds, both men are back to their feet exchanging right-handed punches. Kane gets the better of the Game and hits a chokeslam. Kane goes for the cover;
1
2
Flair pulls the referee out of the ring and starts argueing with him. Kane gets up and goes to the side of the ring watching the arguement. As Kane turns around, Triple H hits the low blow, followed by the pedigree. He goes for the cover and Flair stops argueing with the Ref;
1
2
3!
Its over. Triple H cheats his way out of this one. When it all came down to the end, it was the numbers Game which defeated the Big Red Machine.
How will this affect what happens at No Mercy, though?
***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** *****
Thanks for reading,
Jericho15
Yeah, its true;
**Ric Flair Sucks!**
**Ric Flair Sucks!**
OR...you could just do your matches on a SRW House Show. Then you have an excuse for it being short. This worked for me :c)
...I did think about involving Jericho in it in some way but i thought it had had enough interference in it already...
Wahey, excellent stuff for a first match!
If you want to make it look a little longer (and if you did it would be almost the perfect length for an Eclipse match), split up that big paragraph you have in the middle.
Apart from that, great stuff. Exciting finishes, especially if you use "Ant's Method" by scrolling down line-by-line, and the in-ring action was superb.
Well done. {:)
If you want to make it look a little longer (and if you did it would be almost the perfect length for an Eclipse match), split up that big paragraph you have in the middle.
Apart from that, great stuff. Exciting finishes, especially if you use "Ant's Method" by scrolling down line-by-line, and the in-ring action was superb.
Well done. {:)
Thanks AJ!
I might have made it longer if it was an official SRW match but seeing as it was only a trial match...
:-)
I might have made it longer if it was an official SRW match but seeing as it was only a trial match...
:-)
Great stuff, Jericho 15! Despite being a starter match, that wasn't far off equalling the length and excitment of more 'seasoned' writers' matches.
A tiny bit too short, but I can't say that it needs improved in any way other than that. Maybe the use of capitals and multiple exclamation marks for the top moves, and maybe making some of the paragraphs a bit larger.
Great stuff for a debut match though!
A tiny bit too short, but I can't say that it needs improved in any way other than that. Maybe the use of capitals and multiple exclamation marks for the top moves, and maybe making some of the paragraphs a bit larger.
Great stuff for a debut match though!
"Its Time to play the Game", Triple H's music hits and he knows hes in for the fight of his life in this one as he's either got to pin or submit this monster, Kane. Triple H walks down the ramp and enters the ring.
The room goes dark and Kanes music hits. A "BANG" is heard and flames shoot up from each turnbuckle in the ring. Kane walks down the ramp and enters the ring as Triple H stares into his eyes. Kane looks back at him.
The bell rings, signalling for the match to start. The Game and the Big Red Machine move towards each other still staring their opponent out. They start argueing with each other...
Triple H goes for the first grapple of the match-up but Kane shoves him to the other side of the ring. Triple H stands up on one knee, looks up at Kane and realises that he is going to have to use his quickness advantage if he wants to win this one.
Triple H runs at Kane, Kane goes fo the clothesline bu the Game ducks, runs into the ropes and comes back at Kane and as the Big Red Machine turns around, he gets a knee jabbed straight into his stomach. Kane leans forward holding onto his stomach, but doesnt fall down. HHH runs back into the ropes, then back at Kane with a clothesline. Kane staggers. HHH runs back into the ropes again and comes back at Kane looking for the clothesline, but Kane grabs him by the throat. Triple H hits Kane in the head a few times with his elbow and manages to break free from the hold. He bodyslams Kane and then turns around taunting the crowd, but Kane sits up and is back to his feet within a few seconds. Triple H turns around and punches Kane to no effect. He punches him again, but to no effect. Kane clotheslines the Game and Triple H falls to the canvas but he is quickly back on his feet.
Kane underhooks Triple H and forces him back, into the corner of the ring. He irish whips the Game into the opposite turnbuckle. HHH walks back towards Kane in a daze and Kane picks HHH up and puts him over his shoulder looking for the Tombstone. Triple H somehow manages to counter it pushing Kane into the Ref. As the Referee is down, Ric Flair starts walking down the ramp.
In the ring, Kane has the upper hand as Flair walks around the ring and gets a steel chair. As he does this, the Undertaker comes running down to the ring with a steel chair of his own at hand.
Kane grabs Triple H by the throat looking for the chokeslam as Flair is about to hit him with a chair. Taker gets in the ring, looks at Flair and nods!?! Taker and Flair hit Kane on opposite sides of his head with the steel chairs, knocking Kane down to the canvas.
As Taker walks back out the ring and heads to the back, getting a tremendous amount of "Boo's" from the crowd, Flair eventually wakes up the Ref. HHH slowly gets the cover on Kane. The Ref wakes up and very slowly counts;
1
2
Oh, but Kane somehow reaches down and kicks out. Flair looks on at ringside in disbelief as Triple H sets up Kane for the pedigree. HHH is about to pedigree Kane, but Kane back body drops the Game and falls to the floor. Both men are down...
After about 8 seconds, both men are back to their feet exchanging right-handed punches. Kane gets the better of the Game and hits a chokeslam. Kane goes for the cover;
1
2
Flair pulls the referee out of the ring and starts argueing with him. Kane gets up and goes to the side of the ring watching the arguement. As Kane turns around, Triple H hits the low blow, followed by the pedigree. He goes for the cover and Flair stops argueing with the Ref;
1
2
3!
Its over. Triple H cheats his way out of this one. When it all came down to the end, it was the numbers Game which defeated the Big Red Machine.
How will this affect what happens at No Mercy, though?
***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** *****
Thanks for reading,
Jericho15
The room goes dark and Kanes music hits. A "BANG" is heard and flames shoot up from each turnbuckle in the ring. Kane walks down the ramp and enters the ring as Triple H stares into his eyes. Kane looks back at him.
The bell rings, signalling for the match to start. The Game and the Big Red Machine move towards each other still staring their opponent out. They start argueing with each other...
Triple H goes for the first grapple of the match-up but Kane shoves him to the other side of the ring. Triple H stands up on one knee, looks up at Kane and realises that he is going to have to use his quickness advantage if he wants to win this one.
Triple H runs at Kane, Kane goes fo the clothesline bu the Game ducks, runs into the ropes and comes back at Kane and as the Big Red Machine turns around, he gets a knee jabbed straight into his stomach. Kane leans forward holding onto his stomach, but doesnt fall down. HHH runs back into the ropes, then back at Kane with a clothesline. Kane staggers. HHH runs back into the ropes again and comes back at Kane looking for the clothesline, but Kane grabs him by the throat. Triple H hits Kane in the head a few times with his elbow and manages to break free from the hold. He bodyslams Kane and then turns around taunting the crowd, but Kane sits up and is back to his feet within a few seconds. Triple H turns around and punches Kane to no effect. He punches him again, but to no effect. Kane clotheslines the Game and Triple H falls to the canvas but he is quickly back on his feet.
Kane underhooks Triple H and forces him back, into the corner of the ring. He irish whips the Game into the opposite turnbuckle. HHH walks back towards Kane in a daze and Kane picks HHH up and puts him over his shoulder looking for the Tombstone. Triple H somehow manages to counter it pushing Kane into the Ref. As the Referee is down, Ric Flair starts walking down the ramp.
In the ring, Kane has the upper hand as Flair walks around the ring and gets a steel chair. As he does this, the Undertaker comes running down to the ring with a steel chair of his own at hand.
Kane grabs Triple H by the throat looking for the chokeslam as Flair is about to hit him with a chair. Taker gets in the ring, looks at Flair and nods!?! Taker and Flair hit Kane on opposite sides of his head with the steel chairs, knocking Kane down to the canvas.
As Taker walks back out the ring and heads to the back, getting a tremendous amount of "Boo's" from the crowd, Flair eventually wakes up the Ref. HHH slowly gets the cover on Kane. The Ref wakes up and very slowly counts;
1
2
Oh, but Kane somehow reaches down and kicks out. Flair looks on at ringside in disbelief as Triple H sets up Kane for the pedigree. HHH is about to pedigree Kane, but Kane back body drops the Game and falls to the floor. Both men are down...
After about 8 seconds, both men are back to their feet exchanging right-handed punches. Kane gets the better of the Game and hits a chokeslam. Kane goes for the cover;
1
2
Flair pulls the referee out of the ring and starts argueing with him. Kane gets up and goes to the side of the ring watching the arguement. As Kane turns around, Triple H hits the low blow, followed by the pedigree. He goes for the cover and Flair stops argueing with the Ref;
1
2
3!
Its over. Triple H cheats his way out of this one. When it all came down to the end, it was the numbers Game which defeated the Big Red Machine.
How will this affect what happens at No Mercy, though?
***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** *****
Thanks for reading,
Jericho15