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"The Worrier's Mind"

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Tue 24/06/08 at 14:37
"nitrogoat.co.uk"
Posts: 76
Encased in an impenetrable coffin
Free to play havoc abundantly
Undisputable.
Equally irrational

And engraved in mind;
Flowing through consciousness
Opal and ominously translucent
Submerged beneath

The depths of the brain.
Grasping and tormenting
Sinking its talons relentlessly
Cutting canals of thought

Deep into the organ’s flesh
Feeding off its host;
Suddenly it writhers
Only to return but in mounting
Desperation, it plunges its
Razors into the mind

Of the worrier
Incapable of escaping worry’s grasp
Salvaging, dissecting fragments
Of yesterday’s thoughts
They hover. Clinging

To the cortex. And

Of no use are the words
Of the worriless.
Unique, devilishly lonely
In one’s ability to perceive
The world.

Wasting energy
The mind is exhausted
Inflicting such pointless worry
Yet. It remains unrivaled

In my mind it feeds.
Thu 26/06/08 at 22:30
"nitrogoat.co.uk"
Posts: 76
I can see nobody appreciates my literary genius ahah :P
Tue 24/06/08 at 14:37
"nitrogoat.co.uk"
Posts: 76
Encased in an impenetrable coffin
Free to play havoc abundantly
Undisputable.
Equally irrational

And engraved in mind;
Flowing through consciousness
Opal and ominously translucent
Submerged beneath

The depths of the brain.
Grasping and tormenting
Sinking its talons relentlessly
Cutting canals of thought

Deep into the organ’s flesh
Feeding off its host;
Suddenly it writhers
Only to return but in mounting
Desperation, it plunges its
Razors into the mind

Of the worrier
Incapable of escaping worry’s grasp
Salvaging, dissecting fragments
Of yesterday’s thoughts
They hover. Clinging

To the cortex. And

Of no use are the words
Of the worriless.
Unique, devilishly lonely
In one’s ability to perceive
The world.

Wasting energy
The mind is exhausted
Inflicting such pointless worry
Yet. It remains unrivaled

In my mind it feeds.

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