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don't go getting offended by this, just a bit of fun. I picked the names at random. I edited the gore OUT as A) it isn't appropriate, and B) then you would take offence.
<9:15> Somewhere in the northwest of England
Sheepy (the defector) takes his eyes off the road for a moment, and looks back. "ETA 5 minutes guyz"
"Right", is the reply
Sheepy returns his gaze to the road
<9:18> The 'Bay horse'. A small pub on the outskirts of a small town in Lancashire
Goatboy leans over the bar. "Another fosters bar-man, and to the top this time". "yeah alright", says the freak behind the counter, and begins pouring.
Ant looks up from his half empty glass. "We certainly took the mick out of those cretinous regulars and newbies the other night". "Bunch of f*ckin mammies boys".
"Couldn't beat themselves out of a wet paper bag", utters Rastabillyskank.
In the pool room, the clatter of two pool balls colliding, and a cheer from meka dragon can be heard.
"You suck at this big time, Grix" He says, and slams his cue against the wall.
<9:21> Outside the bay horse. A van pulls up, the rear door handle comes down, and the door opens with a squeak.
<9:21> Inside the bay horse
"Loser", meka is saying, just as the door is kicked nearly off its hinges.
In lightning speed, 5 figures storm the pub, it is several seconds before the notables can focus on what they are seeing. The coward behind the bar makes a hasty retreat out the back door.
As their vision becomes clear, they can now make out Pappa Lazarou, Tiltawhirl, Asher D, Ben and Mele standing half in the shadows.
"Knock Knock" says Lazarou, an evil grin appearing on his face.
"What the HE........", but Goatboy is unable to finish his question, for Ben has already picked up a nearby chair and is half way through swinging it, full force, at his head. At the last second he manages to raise an arm in defence, but the chair is still deflected into his head, and goatboy is temporarily stunned.
"SCUMBAGS" bellows ant, and charges the nearest opponent, tiltawhirl, with fists raised. Tiltawhirl has seen it coming and raises a foot at crotch level. Ants full weight is used against him in the worst possible way, and he doubles over with a face that is almost comical.
Meka has watched all this happen, and has taken the initiative to pick up a cue, as has Grix. they both approach the mob in a calculated way, ready to back each other up. Mele realises this is going to be tough, and taps asher d on the arm. Asher realises the seriousness of the situation, and looks desperately around for a weapon of his own.
Meanwhile, Lazarou has had his eyes rivetted on Rastabillyskank. Rasta returns the gaze with menacing intent. They both rush at the same time, mentally choosing the best method of attack. Lazarou chooses wrong and goes for an uppercut, Rasta has seen this coming, and goes for a leg sweep. His opponent drops hard onto his chest, luckily he had his arms up to save his face. Wasting no time, Lazarou rolls over and kicks rasta hard in the back. "Bad move" lazarou manages to utter, as he stands an prepares to finish the now floored rasta.
Asher d and Mele decide, having found no weapons, to rush their opponents for theirs. Mele goes for Grix, trying to kick the makeshift baton out of his hand. Grix dodges, and brings it down hard on Mele's head. He drops to the floor unconscious, and asher is left wondering why the hell he bothered coming here. Luckily though, he has had more luck tackling Meka, and has broke the cue, getting the thicker end. Without hesitating at all he swings hard at Meka, then at Grix, in one fluid motion. Grix was too busy smiling at his downed opponent, and doesn't see it coming. Grix's fight is over. Meka is not hurt though, and uses a nearby chair to ensure Asher sees stars for some time to come.
Ben raises the chair again to put goatboy out of action permanently, but goatboy is not going without a fight. Coming to his senses, he stands and grabs the chair, knees ben in the crotch, and begins to mount an attack of his own. Tiltawhirl, having made ant look a bit of a wet lettuce, sees this, and kicks the back of his legs. Goatboy falls down and drops the chair on his own head, seemingly unconscious. Ben cannot help smiling at this, and gets up to shake tiltawhirls hand.
The rage meka felt at seeing his comrade knock himself out with a chair was too much, a flying kick was in order he thought. Luckily for him, ben and tiltawhirl were stood in front of each other, and didn't see it coming. Tiltawhirl was knocked straight into a nearby wall, and made to take early retirement. Some of the kick caught ben, who was once again knocked off his feet.
Rasta is able to stand far quicker than lazarou anticipated. meka has stood up after his knockout flying kick, as has ben. the four stand staring for a minute, trying to get their breath. "two against two" meka says, breaking the silence. There is a groan, and in the background, asher d can be seen getting to his feet. "I don't think so" sneers lazarou.
rasta makes a run for asher, hoping to floor him before he has come to his senses, but ben takes his legs, and unluckily for rasta, there is a table en route, which stops his flying body quite well, leaving only meka.
"B****r", he manages to utter.
Just then, sirens are audible in the distance. Meka grins, "You've had it" he says.
Horrified looks from the anti-notables. "It's the SR police".
The three stand there briefly with that "what the hell do we do now" look on their faces.
Suddenly, a car horn can be heard from round the back of the pub. Lazarou looks outside to see sheepy, grinning maniacly, in their black transit van.
"So long sucker", shouts ben as they all pile out the fire escape.
"DAMN YOU ALL" shouts meka as asher d, the last of the three, disappears from view.
2 minutes later two SR police, schroeder and Mr. Snuggly arrive, but it is too late, the notables have had a pasting, and meka swears to himself that this is not the final chapter.
Episode 2 (hopefully) coming soon......
<9:15> Somewhere in the northwest of England
Sheepy (the defector) takes his eyes off the road for a moment, and looks back. "ETA 5 minutes guyz"
"Right", is the reply
Sheepy returns his gaze to the road
<9:18> The 'Bay horse'. A small pub on the outskirts of a small town in Lancashire
Goatboy leans over the bar. "Another fosters bar-man, and to the top this time". "yeah alright", says the freak behind the counter, and begins pouring.
Ant looks up from his half empty glass. "We certainly took the mick out of those cretinous regulars and newbies the other night". "Bunch of f*ckin mammies boys".
"Couldn't beat themselves out of a wet paper bag", utters Rastabillyskank.
In the pool room, the clatter of two pool balls colliding, and a cheer from meka dragon can be heard.
"You suck at this big time, Grix" He says, and slams his cue against the wall.
<9:21> Outside the bay horse. A van pulls up, the rear door handle comes down, and the door opens with a squeak.
<9:21> Inside the bay horse
"Loser", meka is saying, just as the door is kicked nearly off its hinges.
In lightning speed, 5 figures storm the pub, it is several seconds before the notables can focus on what they are seeing. The coward behind the bar makes a hasty retreat out the back door.
As their vision becomes clear, they can now make out Pappa Lazarou, Tiltawhirl, Asher D, Ben and Mele standing half in the shadows.
"Knock Knock" says Lazarou, an evil grin appearing on his face.
"What the HE........", but Goatboy is unable to finish his question, for Ben has already picked up a nearby chair and is half way through swinging it, full force, at his head. At the last second he manages to raise an arm in defence, but the chair is still deflected into his head, and goatboy is temporarily stunned.
"SCUMBAGS" bellows ant, and charges the nearest opponent, tiltawhirl, with fists raised. Tiltawhirl has seen it coming and raises a foot at crotch level. Ants full weight is used against him in the worst possible way, and he doubles over with a face that is almost comical.
Meka has watched all this happen, and has taken the initiative to pick up a cue, as has Grix. they both approach the mob in a calculated way, ready to back each other up. Mele realises this is going to be tough, and taps asher d on the arm. Asher realises the seriousness of the situation, and looks desperately around for a weapon of his own.
Meanwhile, Lazarou has had his eyes rivetted on Rastabillyskank. Rasta returns the gaze with menacing intent. They both rush at the same time, mentally choosing the best method of attack. Lazarou chooses wrong and goes for an uppercut, Rasta has seen this coming, and goes for a leg sweep. His opponent drops hard onto his chest, luckily he had his arms up to save his face. Wasting no time, Lazarou rolls over and kicks rasta hard in the back. "Bad move" lazarou manages to utter, as he stands an prepares to finish the now floored rasta.
Asher d and Mele decide, having found no weapons, to rush their opponents for theirs. Mele goes for Grix, trying to kick the makeshift baton out of his hand. Grix dodges, and brings it down hard on Mele's head. He drops to the floor unconscious, and asher is left wondering why the hell he bothered coming here. Luckily though, he has had more luck tackling Meka, and has broke the cue, getting the thicker end. Without hesitating at all he swings hard at Meka, then at Grix, in one fluid motion. Grix was too busy smiling at his downed opponent, and doesn't see it coming. Grix's fight is over. Meka is not hurt though, and uses a nearby chair to ensure Asher sees stars for some time to come.
Ben raises the chair again to put goatboy out of action permanently, but goatboy is not going without a fight. Coming to his senses, he stands and grabs the chair, knees ben in the crotch, and begins to mount an attack of his own. Tiltawhirl, having made ant look a bit of a wet lettuce, sees this, and kicks the back of his legs. Goatboy falls down and drops the chair on his own head, seemingly unconscious. Ben cannot help smiling at this, and gets up to shake tiltawhirls hand.
The rage meka felt at seeing his comrade knock himself out with a chair was too much, a flying kick was in order he thought. Luckily for him, ben and tiltawhirl were stood in front of each other, and didn't see it coming. Tiltawhirl was knocked straight into a nearby wall, and made to take early retirement. Some of the kick caught ben, who was once again knocked off his feet.
Rasta is able to stand far quicker than lazarou anticipated. meka has stood up after his knockout flying kick, as has ben. the four stand staring for a minute, trying to get their breath. "two against two" meka says, breaking the silence. There is a groan, and in the background, asher d can be seen getting to his feet. "I don't think so" sneers lazarou.
rasta makes a run for asher, hoping to floor him before he has come to his senses, but ben takes his legs, and unluckily for rasta, there is a table en route, which stops his flying body quite well, leaving only meka.
"B****r", he manages to utter.
Just then, sirens are audible in the distance. Meka grins, "You've had it" he says.
Horrified looks from the anti-notables. "It's the SR police".
The three stand there briefly with that "what the hell do we do now" look on their faces.
Suddenly, a car horn can be heard from round the back of the pub. Lazarou looks outside to see sheepy, grinning maniacly, in their black transit van.
"So long sucker", shouts ben as they all pile out the fire escape.
"DAMN YOU ALL" shouts meka as asher d, the last of the three, disappears from view.
2 minutes later two SR police, schroeder and Mr. Snuggly arrive, but it is too late, the notables have had a pasting, and meka swears to himself that this is not the final chapter.
Episode 2 (hopefully) coming soon......
hmmm, maybe, depends whether or not these nonces deserve a sequel......
I'm gonna pop this cos it was quite funny....
Especially the Asher bit: "Asher realises the seriousness of the situation".
Cool, bring on the sequel.....
Especially the Asher bit: "Asher realises the seriousness of the situation".
Cool, bring on the sequel.....
and I said I hated spoofs ....
Heh, good stuff.....
Mind you, I am slightly biased! I kicked a55!!
Mind you, I am slightly biased! I kicked a55!!
alas, you aint in it. You may be in the second though.
the reply didn't float my boat, light my candle, or flick my switch. You don't put the effort in you used to ........ ;-)
the reply didn't float my boat, light my candle, or flick my switch. You don't put the effort in you used to ........ ;-)
I don't know if I'm in it, because I haven't read it, although I presume that I am not.
But at least my reply will make you happy.
But at least my reply will make you happy.
one of you must have read it by now...
footsteps....getting quieter...
door closes.
footsteps....getting quieter...
door closes.
I'm gonna keep this thread alive til the characters in it give a reaction..
don't go getting offended by this, just a bit of fun. I picked the names at random. I edited the gore OUT as A) it isn't appropriate, and B) then you would take offence.
<9:15> Somewhere in the northwest of England
Sheepy (the defector) takes his eyes off the road for a moment, and looks back. "ETA 5 minutes guyz"
"Right", is the reply
Sheepy returns his gaze to the road
<9:18> The 'Bay horse'. A small pub on the outskirts of a small town in Lancashire
Goatboy leans over the bar. "Another fosters bar-man, and to the top this time". "yeah alright", says the freak behind the counter, and begins pouring.
Ant looks up from his half empty glass. "We certainly took the mick out of those cretinous regulars and newbies the other night". "Bunch of f*ckin mammies boys".
"Couldn't beat themselves out of a wet paper bag", utters Rastabillyskank.
In the pool room, the clatter of two pool balls colliding, and a cheer from meka dragon can be heard.
"You suck at this big time, Grix" He says, and slams his cue against the wall.
<9:21> Outside the bay horse. A van pulls up, the rear door handle comes down, and the door opens with a squeak.
<9:21> Inside the bay horse
"Loser", meka is saying, just as the door is kicked nearly off its hinges.
In lightning speed, 5 figures storm the pub, it is several seconds before the notables can focus on what they are seeing. The coward behind the bar makes a hasty retreat out the back door.
As their vision becomes clear, they can now make out Pappa Lazarou, Tiltawhirl, Asher D, Ben and Mele standing half in the shadows.
"Knock Knock" says Lazarou, an evil grin appearing on his face.
"What the HE........", but Goatboy is unable to finish his question, for Ben has already picked up a nearby chair and is half way through swinging it, full force, at his head. At the last second he manages to raise an arm in defence, but the chair is still deflected into his head, and goatboy is temporarily stunned.
"SCUMBAGS" bellows ant, and charges the nearest opponent, tiltawhirl, with fists raised. Tiltawhirl has seen it coming and raises a foot at crotch level. Ants full weight is used against him in the worst possible way, and he doubles over with a face that is almost comical.
Meka has watched all this happen, and has taken the initiative to pick up a cue, as has Grix. they both approach the mob in a calculated way, ready to back each other up. Mele realises this is going to be tough, and taps asher d on the arm. Asher realises the seriousness of the situation, and looks desperately around for a weapon of his own.
Meanwhile, Lazarou has had his eyes rivetted on Rastabillyskank. Rasta returns the gaze with menacing intent. They both rush at the same time, mentally choosing the best method of attack. Lazarou chooses wrong and goes for an uppercut, Rasta has seen this coming, and goes for a leg sweep. His opponent drops hard onto his chest, luckily he had his arms up to save his face. Wasting no time, Lazarou rolls over and kicks rasta hard in the back. "Bad move" lazarou manages to utter, as he stands an prepares to finish the now floored rasta.
Asher d and Mele decide, having found no weapons, to rush their opponents for theirs. Mele goes for Grix, trying to kick the makeshift baton out of his hand. Grix dodges, and brings it down hard on Mele's head. He drops to the floor unconscious, and asher is left wondering why the hell he bothered coming here. Luckily though, he has had more luck tackling Meka, and has broke the cue, getting the thicker end. Without hesitating at all he swings hard at Meka, then at Grix, in one fluid motion. Grix was too busy smiling at his downed opponent, and doesn't see it coming. Grix's fight is over. Meka is not hurt though, and uses a nearby chair to ensure Asher sees stars for some time to come.
Ben raises the chair again to put goatboy out of action permanently, but goatboy is not going without a fight. Coming to his senses, he stands and grabs the chair, knees ben in the crotch, and begins to mount an attack of his own. Tiltawhirl, having made ant look a bit of a wet lettuce, sees this, and kicks the back of his legs. Goatboy falls down and drops the chair on his own head, seemingly unconscious. Ben cannot help smiling at this, and gets up to shake tiltawhirls hand.
The rage meka felt at seeing his comrade knock himself out with a chair was too much, a flying kick was in order he thought. Luckily for him, ben and tiltawhirl were stood in front of each other, and didn't see it coming. Tiltawhirl was knocked straight into a nearby wall, and made to take early retirement. Some of the kick caught ben, who was once again knocked off his feet.
Rasta is able to stand far quicker than lazarou anticipated. meka has stood up after his knockout flying kick, as has ben. the four stand staring for a minute, trying to get their breath. "two against two" meka says, breaking the silence. There is a groan, and in the background, asher d can be seen getting to his feet. "I don't think so" sneers lazarou.
rasta makes a run for asher, hoping to floor him before he has come to his senses, but ben takes his legs, and unluckily for rasta, there is a table en route, which stops his flying body quite well, leaving only meka.
"B****r", he manages to utter.
Just then, sirens are audible in the distance. Meka grins, "You've had it" he says.
Horrified looks from the anti-notables. "It's the SR police".
The three stand there briefly with that "what the hell do we do now" look on their faces.
Suddenly, a car horn can be heard from round the back of the pub. Lazarou looks outside to see sheepy, grinning maniacly, in their black transit van.
"So long sucker", shouts ben as they all pile out the fire escape.
"DAMN YOU ALL" shouts meka as asher d, the last of the three, disappears from view.
2 minutes later two SR police, schroeder and Mr. Snuggly arrive, but it is too late, the notables have had a pasting, and meka swears to himself that this is not the final chapter.
Episode 2 (hopefully) coming soon......
<9:15> Somewhere in the northwest of England
Sheepy (the defector) takes his eyes off the road for a moment, and looks back. "ETA 5 minutes guyz"
"Right", is the reply
Sheepy returns his gaze to the road
<9:18> The 'Bay horse'. A small pub on the outskirts of a small town in Lancashire
Goatboy leans over the bar. "Another fosters bar-man, and to the top this time". "yeah alright", says the freak behind the counter, and begins pouring.
Ant looks up from his half empty glass. "We certainly took the mick out of those cretinous regulars and newbies the other night". "Bunch of f*ckin mammies boys".
"Couldn't beat themselves out of a wet paper bag", utters Rastabillyskank.
In the pool room, the clatter of two pool balls colliding, and a cheer from meka dragon can be heard.
"You suck at this big time, Grix" He says, and slams his cue against the wall.
<9:21> Outside the bay horse. A van pulls up, the rear door handle comes down, and the door opens with a squeak.
<9:21> Inside the bay horse
"Loser", meka is saying, just as the door is kicked nearly off its hinges.
In lightning speed, 5 figures storm the pub, it is several seconds before the notables can focus on what they are seeing. The coward behind the bar makes a hasty retreat out the back door.
As their vision becomes clear, they can now make out Pappa Lazarou, Tiltawhirl, Asher D, Ben and Mele standing half in the shadows.
"Knock Knock" says Lazarou, an evil grin appearing on his face.
"What the HE........", but Goatboy is unable to finish his question, for Ben has already picked up a nearby chair and is half way through swinging it, full force, at his head. At the last second he manages to raise an arm in defence, but the chair is still deflected into his head, and goatboy is temporarily stunned.
"SCUMBAGS" bellows ant, and charges the nearest opponent, tiltawhirl, with fists raised. Tiltawhirl has seen it coming and raises a foot at crotch level. Ants full weight is used against him in the worst possible way, and he doubles over with a face that is almost comical.
Meka has watched all this happen, and has taken the initiative to pick up a cue, as has Grix. they both approach the mob in a calculated way, ready to back each other up. Mele realises this is going to be tough, and taps asher d on the arm. Asher realises the seriousness of the situation, and looks desperately around for a weapon of his own.
Meanwhile, Lazarou has had his eyes rivetted on Rastabillyskank. Rasta returns the gaze with menacing intent. They both rush at the same time, mentally choosing the best method of attack. Lazarou chooses wrong and goes for an uppercut, Rasta has seen this coming, and goes for a leg sweep. His opponent drops hard onto his chest, luckily he had his arms up to save his face. Wasting no time, Lazarou rolls over and kicks rasta hard in the back. "Bad move" lazarou manages to utter, as he stands an prepares to finish the now floored rasta.
Asher d and Mele decide, having found no weapons, to rush their opponents for theirs. Mele goes for Grix, trying to kick the makeshift baton out of his hand. Grix dodges, and brings it down hard on Mele's head. He drops to the floor unconscious, and asher is left wondering why the hell he bothered coming here. Luckily though, he has had more luck tackling Meka, and has broke the cue, getting the thicker end. Without hesitating at all he swings hard at Meka, then at Grix, in one fluid motion. Grix was too busy smiling at his downed opponent, and doesn't see it coming. Grix's fight is over. Meka is not hurt though, and uses a nearby chair to ensure Asher sees stars for some time to come.
Ben raises the chair again to put goatboy out of action permanently, but goatboy is not going without a fight. Coming to his senses, he stands and grabs the chair, knees ben in the crotch, and begins to mount an attack of his own. Tiltawhirl, having made ant look a bit of a wet lettuce, sees this, and kicks the back of his legs. Goatboy falls down and drops the chair on his own head, seemingly unconscious. Ben cannot help smiling at this, and gets up to shake tiltawhirls hand.
The rage meka felt at seeing his comrade knock himself out with a chair was too much, a flying kick was in order he thought. Luckily for him, ben and tiltawhirl were stood in front of each other, and didn't see it coming. Tiltawhirl was knocked straight into a nearby wall, and made to take early retirement. Some of the kick caught ben, who was once again knocked off his feet.
Rasta is able to stand far quicker than lazarou anticipated. meka has stood up after his knockout flying kick, as has ben. the four stand staring for a minute, trying to get their breath. "two against two" meka says, breaking the silence. There is a groan, and in the background, asher d can be seen getting to his feet. "I don't think so" sneers lazarou.
rasta makes a run for asher, hoping to floor him before he has come to his senses, but ben takes his legs, and unluckily for rasta, there is a table en route, which stops his flying body quite well, leaving only meka.
"B****r", he manages to utter.
Just then, sirens are audible in the distance. Meka grins, "You've had it" he says.
Horrified looks from the anti-notables. "It's the SR police".
The three stand there briefly with that "what the hell do we do now" look on their faces.
Suddenly, a car horn can be heard from round the back of the pub. Lazarou looks outside to see sheepy, grinning maniacly, in their black transit van.
"So long sucker", shouts ben as they all pile out the fire escape.
"DAMN YOU ALL" shouts meka as asher d, the last of the three, disappears from view.
2 minutes later two SR police, schroeder and Mr. Snuggly arrive, but it is too late, the notables have had a pasting, and meka swears to himself that this is not the final chapter.
Episode 2 (hopefully) coming soon......